Arhi SS: Tewari & Sons, No. 23, Chandni Chowk (THREAD I)

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meera06

@meera06

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#201

You have written this chapter so brilliantly...

Aman...sad that behind the teasing and naughty side ,he was actually a boy who was depressed..but I liked the name he gave for Khushi..Dhanno..unique..

I actually am curious to know what Arnav thinks of Khushi especially when he was in school..when he is alone he seems to be nicer to her but otherwise he acts as if she doesn't exist..And I did not like the fact that he blamed Khushi for Aman's suicide attempt.

P.S:Please never apologize for writing long chpaters..in fact we love them!

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Sarah

@ifsaal044

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#202

You are an amazing tale spinner. How you put it all together I can't even fathom. Yet another excellent chapter.

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inamajar

@inamajar

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Posted: 10 years ago

#203

That was a touching update! A nice take on the growing years of a student life. How realistically written.

How immature & childish some of them act in the concept of thinking they are the better lot, instead of acting their age.

Looks like due to peer pressure Arnav preferred to keep away from Khushi, though he would have loved to be her friend. Looking forward to their College years. Looks like he did some thing ... which made Khushi take such a Stubborn decision to not recognize him. Already him blaming her for something which was not in her hands with regards to Aman was unpardonable.

Poor Aman. Though he had friends, he did not have one whom he could confide in, though he might have wanted to with Khushi & hence that was his way of seeking attention. Any updates on Aman in the future?

Still not sure of La's story, since she keeps changing her affection towards Khushi. Payal is one steadfast person whose character has not changed, due to which we can judge her in any given situation . Aakash has been one true friend, and seems he continues to be one to Khushi.

Khushi's growing years has taught her a lot due to the kind of people she has been associated with. She is still a Mystery to be unraveled. Looking forward to more on her journey.

Thanks for the long update. That is always welcome when time permits. 😉

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anu1017

@anu1017

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#204

Awesome update!!! Totally loved it!!!!

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ipkknd12

@ipkknd12

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#205

Thanks for the update.

I should say Khushi had been really brave for facing the police, fellow students after Aman's fiasco. Even though she has nothing to do with it, she was thought to be responsible in one way or the other. She is really a strong girl. Really feel sad for Aman. Poor lad, but at least he made an effort to be normal with her towards the end. Arnav is wrong in blaming Khushi and hope he realizes that soon.

Looking forward to their college days. Now that she is not in friendship with neither Lavanya nor any other school mates, I am guessing something even worse happened.

Despite joining in Bsc mathematics, why is she a sweet maker at Tewari & sons? Is Aarav Shyam's son? So many unanswered questions. Eagerly waiting for the story to unfold.

It's quite a gripping story that you have come up with Writerji. Despite the fact that you are giving frequent updates, I find myself impatient for the next update. It's not my fault though, you are one stupendous writer.

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Arilip

@Arilip

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#206

So school done ...phew!!!!! So much for an elite school...

Now will wait for collage ...n ASR khushi meeting in present

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Japonica

@Japonica

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#207

This is such a brilliant story. I have yet to read a story with such fine-grained detail etched with such humour and seriousness at the same time.

So glad I stumbled upon its intriguing title which was too inviting to resist.😃

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loves_aishu

@loves_aishu

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#208

Damn I had missed your updates!!!

What has happened!!!

So many revelations at once,

Khushi has forgotten or to be true refused to recognise Arnav,

Lavanya-Khushi had a falling out,

Akash is still in contact with Khushi or at least has a soft corner for her,

Payal is same,

Khushi-Aman did not go well together,

back then everyone more or less blamed Khushi for Aman's suicide,

She still has monetary problems,

And Aarav is Khushi's nephew, her brother had run away right???

And why is she running Tewari & Sons, NK's question was correct!!!

Gosh so many questions, you have written so well, can't wait for the next update!!!

Can you PM me the next time you update!!

Take Care!!

😊

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anera

@anera

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#209

i dont know how khushi could cope up with the her school mates
they were really something

arnav is really something --before other students he dont talk to her
and alone he is so friendly

aman was depressed
love the update

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yoga123

@yoga123

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#210

Awesome chapter...it was her father that found out her capability to run fast and encouraged it...Arnav and khushi trip to Hyderabad opened a window for khushi to a normal Arnav...but for less time...he went back to his normal self after getting back to school...but the Aman incident has changed everything...now can't wait if Khushi recognized Arnav when he went to collect mothichur laddu...