Arhi ff New Dawn | chapter 3 updAted |*November 2*

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey guys this is my first piece of writting.😳 do tell me if i should continue or not...
"Why?"Arnav was lying on the recliner with his eyes on the petite tiny figure of his wife lying on the poolside floor.Her face angelic and glowing in the moonlight .He can see dried tear stains on her cheek even from here.She is sleeping in fetus position and even when she is sleeping her face held pain and anguish.And for the second time he asked himself "why did i marry her?"

His mind went through the happenings of last few hours.dis accident , his realization that he loves khushkhui,and then the betrayal.The betrayal that came from none other than the girl he loved and thought she loved him too.The betrayal that came from the man he considered as his brother ,whom he trusted with the most important person of his life his di.But strangely Shyams duplicity only built rage in him he wanted to kill that bas***d for cheating on his di.he wanted to tear him to pieces.Shyams betrayal didn't hurt him it made him angry.but the image of Khushi in Shyams arm managed to hut him.He felt like someone was twisting a knife in his heart again and again .He felt he could not breath.He felt that much pain that much agony only one one time . When ma left him forever and arnav couldn't deal with the fact that Khushi doesn't love him.The girl who has successfully taken over his heart loves another.She doesn't want to be in his arms.She doesn't want to share her life with him and that thought pained him.So like always his mind took over and he didn't listen to his heart.

So he convinced himself that he doesn't love her and to protect his di he has to marry her for six months.That she means nothing to him and he is gonna destroy her life for daring to play with his dis happiness.So he married her forcefully,made her an orphan ,threw her out of the room on their weeding night.All of this he managed to do in a couple of hours.So after knowing that Khushi is his even if it is for 6 months and after the drama and waterworks that happened downstairs he finally able to calm down and think sanely.

"Hadn't Khushi proved him wrong every time he misjudged her?hadn't she sacrificed her life to save her sisters marriage.isn't she the traditional girl who believes in the sacred bond of marriage.then how can she have an affair with a married man that to husband of a woman she claims to love like her own sister.when he looked into her eyes after proposing a marriage of six months he saw pain innocence and anguish.but never guilt and her eyes don't lie."

And thats when arnav singh raizada realized why he married khushi.he dint married khushi for his di or her unborn child.He married khushi cause he loved her and he wanted to take away khushi from shyams filthy hands .Had he believed even for a moment that khushi can do that horrendous crime he would never have married her.he could have handled shyam and khushi a thousand different ways.But he married her because in his heart he knew khushi was innocent.

So with the new found realization he decided he is gonna get bottom of shyams truth.But that can wait he needed to go to his fragile wife .so he gently picked her up in his arms and khushi as usually clutched his t shirt tightly.She snuggled in to arnavs body and hid her face in the crook of his neck.A lump formed in arnavs throat as he remembered how he had hurt his innocent 18 year old wife.Because of him she was disowned by her family and humiliated by his family members.But not any more he is gonna make everything alright in his own asrish way ofcourse.Placing her on the bed he kissed her forehead and climbed on his side of bed.He pulled khushi by waist and buried his face in her hair and found himself drifting to a peaceful slumber.The sun will rise soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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from all the stories that I read before this is the first one witch show the real ASR
the one with the shrewed mind plus an anger that blind him but after that he really think about his actions
eagerly waiting for more
PM me when you update
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Chapter Two

Khushi woke up with a warm and comfortable feeling .Her eyes were still closed and she decided to sleep for some more time so she snuggled into the soft pillow more.

"Wait why the mattress feels so soft ?" Thought khushi.Isn't she supposed to feel hard cold poolside floor against her body and shiver in cold December air.Thats when khushi kumari Gupta ...well now Singh Raizada decided to wake up properly from her peaceful and super comfortable morning sleep.She sat up in the bed and immediately looked beside her.Well the other side of bed was empty much to her relief but the crumpled bed sheets were telling her somebody did occupied the other side of the bed.

" hey devi maiya ?What am I doing here.I was sleeping on poolside floor.Then how did I ended up here on Arnavjis bed."

And thats when khushi recalled last nights happenings.how her life changed in a couple of hours.She was so happy last evening .Her jiji was finally getting married .Her amma ,bauji ,buaji everyone was happy.Her laad Governor wasn't troubling her that much scratch that he was troubling her but not in a bad way .She was so sure when Arnavji called her to meet him at the poolside that he is gonna say something significant to her.Maybe confess his loo...

"No no no don't go there khushi that man cant love any one".Didn't he broke her heart into million pieces every time she expected something from him.He broke her heart for the second time last night after Diwali.He caged her in a six month sentence ,blackmailed her and didn't even give an explanation.Actually he did last night.What did he say "I married you because i hate you because i want you to suffer and I will personally throw you out from my life as soon as six months end.In the meantime why don't you enjoy all the luxury that comes with marrying me.I know you will because thats all you want.So stop playing victim with me.This is more than a fair deal for a gold digger like you."

The cruelty of his words silenced her ,and the the hate in his eyes ...she died a thousand dead seeing the intensity of hate in those beautiful chocolate brown eyes.She didn't say a word after that even when he threw her out of his room.

Khushis eyes teared up as she recalled last night but their are more pressing matter to think about right now. "How did she end up on Arnavs bed.Did he actually cared enough to carry her inside ?And did he really share the bed with her last night"

"Bas karr khushi" she scolded her self." There must be a sane explanation.May be I have started sleepwalking .Yeah I must have sleepwalked and ended up here."
"Yeah right."Khushis brain mocked her and said " You have successfully managed not only to sleepwalk from poolside to here but also get tucked safely and properly under the duvet.And what about the fact that you have never sleepwalked in your entire life.And how do you explain the crumpled bed sheets of other side.huh?the best possible explanation is he must have carried you inside and tucked you under the duvet."

"Shut up " Khushi scolded her mind for going into dangerous territory." I have started sleepwalking and thats it.I wont believe anything about him caring enough to carry me inside.I refuse to believe that he feels anything for me other that hate and disgust.I have made that mistake twice before and guess what twice my heart got broken."
" He wanted a six months marriage right.And we have to act as a happily married couple for six month.Alright thats what he is gonna get.She will follow his rules and after six months she will leave him forever.Thats what he wants right then thats what he will get."
With that thought khushi finally got up from the bed .She wont be at his mercy anymore.She wont be at any ones mercy anymore.

Arnav was running he stopped for a moment to catch his breath .An early morning jog always helps to clear his mind and helps him to think properly.He woke up at 5 am and felt something soft plastered against his body.He opened his eyes and saw the most beautiful site in the whole wide world.His innocent wife was half lying on him with her one hand over his chest and one leg over his thigh.Her eyes were closed and her long lashes were resting against her cheek.She was looking like a small child without any worry .Arnav's hold on her waist tightened and he shifted his face to get a better view of her face.His sudden movement caused Khushi to to scrunch her cute nose in annoyance and she hid her face in the crook of his neck.Arnav felt a shiver run through his entire body when Khushis lips came in contact with the side of his neck.Well she did it in her sleep.As much as Arnav liked to stay there with his wife in his arms ,his innocent wife's innocent gesture caused a havoc in his senses and gave birth to some very non innocent thoughts and her leg over his thigh wasn't exactly helping either.Before he could get his mind out of gutter and think of something else he found himself harden painfully.So after that there was no sleep for Arnav so he got up kissed khushis forehead lovingly and tucked the duvet properly around his wife.Well after that a very frustrated Raizada went for his morning jog to clear his mind from unholy thoughts. After an hour of running he decided to head home.

Khushi wanted to take a shower .She is still wearing the same lehenga choli she wore for jijis weeding.Actually this lehenga choli is her weeding dress,even if it was a forced one she decided to keep it somewhere safe.
"What will i wear now i dont have any cloths with me.but i really meed to take a shower and get out of this cloths."

Khushis thought broke when she saw anjali walking in with a sarre and box of jwellery in her hands and of course she didnt knock.She was the only person who didnt blame her last night ,she didnt demand answer from her .Anjali questioned her brother instead .And today when she walked in her eyes didn't held any bitterness her eyes were warm and held adortion for her.Anjali gave khushi a warm smile and said
" Good Morning khushiji.I brought some clothes and jwellery for you.Take a shower and come down for puja.And khushiji this is for you "she placed a small and beautiful golden pot on khushis hand.

Khushi didnt have to open the pot to know that it was filled with vermillion.Her eye teared up seeing anjalis warm smile.She was the first person to talk to her normally after her and arnavs sudden elopement.She said in a shakey voice " Shukriya Anjaliji"

Anjalis heart went out for the innocent girl in front of her.The girl she knew for so many months,the girl whom she began to love like a sister.Yes their elopement and sudden marriage surprised anjali ,She was disaapointed.But she knew khushi and she also knew her brother .Khushi who believed in rituals,marriage and respected elders would never do something like that without any good reason.Her brother on the other hand never cared about any of the above.So she was sure it must have been arnavs choice to suddenly get married and Arnav was more to blame for their elopement.Even if khushi wanted to elope and get married wasnt arnav supposed to act like a mature elder person .He is tweenty six where Khushi is only eighteen and she is still a child at heart.Arnav was the one who should be blamed and questioned not khushi.So last night she demanded answer only from her chote and obhiously didnt get any answer.When she saw khushis eyes tearing up she hugged her and said " Don't worry khushiji ,i dont blame you for whatever happened.I know chote, it must have been his idea.I am truly sorry for how you were treated last night.But don't think too much nani will forgive you soon and you family too will come round.She smiled and said " bohot hogaya rona dhona now you get ready and come downstairs soon.And stop crying rote hue ap bilkul bhi ache nehi lagte."
"Thik hai anjaliji"
"Anjaliji nehi di.if u call me anjaliji again i will be very mad at you.And khushiji can i call you Bhabi?"anjali asked with a cute smile.
" of course anj...i mean di" said khsuhi.
" thik hai to app jaldi nahake niche ajaiye" saying that anjali left.


Arnav entered rm his early morning jog really helped him to think properly about this whole mess of a situation .He made some mental notes too.

1.Shyam is a lying cheating adulterous bas***d.Arnav doesnt know yet how and when Shyam met khushi and how long he had been cheating on his di.But he will find out soon enough.Shyam Manohar Jhas days were numbered.

2.Khushi is innocent he just doesnt know her side of the story yet but she is innocent.

3.He needs to start making amends for hurting khushi so much.Last night he escaped to his room when khushi was blamed ,questioned and disowned by her family.and that thought shamed him.But enough is enough no one will ever treat his wife like that again.

4.Khushi must not know of the reason behind his hasty decision of marrying her forcefully.The fact that Arnav though for couple of hours believed the disgusting accusations and decided to trust that bas***d over her will hurt her immensely and she will never forgive him again.Haven't he hurted her enough already .So the truth behind their marriage must remain hidden and the six month clause must be removed.

5. Arnav cant just declare his love for Khushi now.She wont believe him .He has a long way to go even before expecting that his love will be reciprocated.He has to eliminate the six month marriage idea from her head and make her believe that this is a real marriage .She is stuck with him forever and he is never letting her go.


So gathering his thought together he head towards his room and the sight in front of him took his breath away.His wife was standing in a rose pink transparent net sari and a very very tiny choli.her choli was held together only by two thin threads and her entire back was bare.She was combing her long wet hair with utmost attention.Arnav had a sudden urge to take Khushi in his arms and kiss her senseless.To run his hand all over the creamy skin of her back and to do wild things to her which he wanted to do from a very long time .
"Control yourself control don't get distracted you have more important things to do.Your wife is not running away anywhere." With slow steps Arnav covered the distance between them and stood exactly behind khushi.he said in a low and husky voice " We need to talk khushi.I am gonna go take a shower and then we are gonna talk.Don't go downstairs alone .We will attend the morning pooja together and don't worry you are not gonna be late for pooja it still has an hour to start.Pick up the comb from floor and stop staring at me like you have seen some ghost" saying that a smirking Arnav went for a much needed cold shower leaving his bemused wife behind.
...End


Omg what have i done.i wrote the first chapter of this ff at 3 am yesterday.I posted this in a moment of craziness and thought I will remove this first thing in the morning.And in the morning I found out people actually read this crap and some of them were sweet enough to comment .I thank everyone who commented and liked chapter 1 of new dawn🤗And do tell me what you think about chapter 2 .

If you want pms just send me a buddy request and no u don't have to comment or like the update for that.Though i would really love to know your thought about this ff.
Love ,Sadia.


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Posted: 10 years ago
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i liked it,
plzz Pm me.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Really liked your story idea. This Arnav is hot-tempered yet shrewd.

On Diwali day, he cruelly insulted her, stomped all over her feelings, but its the same person who bandaged her cut finger at temple. His behavior has always been that way. He makes mistakes when it comes to Khushi, jumps to conclusions, but once his temper cools, he regrets it. In this story, he is at a point where he realized his feelings towards Khushi and at the verge of confession (maybe?) before the fateful terrace incident. So not only he would regret, but also would make amends. Because, he very well knows his feelings for her, and is no longer in "fighting attraction, resisting her" phase.
Your story is completely in sync with his character.

Thanks for the PM and love to know how this story would progress. Please don't remove it, continue writing.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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interesting
arnav already has his plans going that good
khushi will give him a tough time
and the more he will try to woo her the more she get more confused and resist him more
thnx for the pm
keep going waiting for more
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: imanech

interesting
arnav already has his plans going that good
khushi will give him a tough time
and the more he will try to woo her the more she get more confused and resist him more
thnx for the pm
keep going waiting for more

Arnav will try to woo khushi but he will do it in his own asrish way😈and khushi will definately give him a tough time.thnks for commenting on both chapters .you are the first person to comment on this ff and i love you already🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ipkknd12

Really liked your story idea. This Arnav is hot-tempered yet shrewd.

On Diwali day, he cruelly insulted her, stomped all over her feelings, but its the same person who bandaged her cut finger at temple. His behavior has always been that way. He makes mistakes when it comes to Khushi, jumps to conclusions, but once his temper cools, he regrets it. In this story, he is at a point where he realized his feelings towards Khushi and at the verge of confession (maybe?) before the fateful terrace incident. So not only he would regret, but also would make amends. Because, he very well knows his feelings for her, and is no longer in "fighting attraction, resisting her" phase.
Your story is completely in sync with his character.

Thanks for the PM and love to know how this story would progress. Please don't remove it, continue writing.

Thank you for your wonderful comment dear 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Very diff take on the contract marriage.
Cont soon 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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liked it very much
continue soon

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