Smitar's OS SERIES: TRYST IN THE CARDS #5 OS 8 1~7 Link to #6: Pg 1

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lilakumariacnw

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Posted: 10 years ago

#71

HAPPY DIWALI..

Love the update...

Edited by lilakumariacnw - 10 years ago

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..Jyoti..

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Posted: 10 years ago

#72

Congrats on the new thread

Lovely update

Happy Diwali..

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shalini_s

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Posted: 10 years ago

#73

wow... this is interesting.. a live prem patra..

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Arshix144

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Posted: 10 years ago

#74

Happy Diwali my ladies and thank you for providing us with such entertaining chapters!

I know I must sound like a broken record here but I totally heart this series. Armav's unplanned recitation of his prem patra was just beautiful, I knew this guy found his inspiration in Khushi's encouraging smile and finally spoke from his heart. Even his actual prem patra was somewhat endearingly cute.

Did I mention how amusing Arnav's conversation with Buaji was? It was so nice to see Arnav realise just how easily she had already forgiven him for not only insulting Khushi but bad mouthing them as well. Loved Arnav's remorsefulness and nervousness when it came to expressing himself to his Khushi. She is making him work for her Yes to the marriage proposal and I am loving it.

PS. Many and Many congratulations on yet another thread for this awesome story! 👏