Smitar's OS SERIES: TRYST IN THE CARDS #5 OS 8 1~7 Link to #6: Pg 1

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muskaansobti

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Posted: 10 years ago

#731

Awesome parts loved al parts frm part 1 to 8

superbb

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Arshi67

@Arshi67

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+ 13

Posted: 10 years ago

#732

Smita, how long are you going to leave Arnavji wondering ...

Khwab ho tum ya koi haqeeqat

Kaun ho tum batlao

Der se itni door khadi ho

Aur kareeb aa jaao

😭

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jisa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#733

lovely..!!!
he is already dreaming..!!!
w8ng for next..!

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S.B.

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Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#734

love it... loved the dream sequence
awesome <3

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charmfriend

@charmfriend

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#735

Wow di... A wonderful update.. Different concept.. I loved this scene where kushi sings song and also dream sequence.. eagerly waiting 4next.. Thank u for pm...

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..ri..

@..ri..

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#736

waiting..!! when is the next update di??

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rulama

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+ 8

Posted: 10 years ago

#737

LINK TO Thread 6

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/116369954

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ship13

@ship13

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Posted: 10 years ago

#738

Fabulous story. Loved reading it. You are a superb writer. Loved the humorous dialogues between Arnav and Khushi. 😆

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kanthi_chks

@kanthi_chks

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Posted: 10 years ago

#739

Read the other woman and it was so good.
Simple and sweet!
How could you even come up with so many names for arnav singh raizada??? Biiig 👏 for that. 😊