Smitar's OS SERIES: TRYST IN THE CARDS #5 OS 8 1~7 Link to #6: Pg 1

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BS.ILoveYou

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Rashmi Di... Smita Di.. Teacherji.. Hetal Di.. 🤗 Sabko awesome wali.. HAPPY DIWALI.. 🤗 Coming to the updatewa.. ASR is very Himmatwala Singh Raizada.. apni galati ko accept karna..nd inni saari baar sorry bolna bahot badi baat hai.. 🤔 Tht letter from his Heart was very hearttouching.. 😔 Meko rula diya Aashiq Singh Raizada ne.. 😔 Those 5 lines tht he actually wrote.. thta his wish from him dilwa.. I hope this diwali..his dil ki wish is fulfilled.. 😳 Thankoo for the mail Di. 😃 Once again.. HAPPY DIWALI

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dpriyad

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Posted: 10 years ago

#62

I liked The real prem patra than the one hotshot singh raizaida read.so true to his heart and so simple

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paaskhanna

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Posted: 10 years ago

#63

Happy Diwali !!! Have a happy, prosperous and safe Diwali

Now the update... Loved it . Interaction between Arnav& buaji was adorable. His poetry straight from his heart to mine ...

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smiley-shiney

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Posted: 10 years ago

#64

COngratulations on the new thread

Wonderful updates

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Arshi67

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Posted: 10 years ago

#65

Rashmi Smita, Wishing you and all your readers a Very Happy Deepavali!

When his muse is standing in front of him and he is breathing in the same air as her, shaayari to apne aap he aa jaati hain! And so adorably!

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aamirkhanfan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#66

congrats on the new thread...

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831628

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Posted: 10 years ago

#67

Happy diwali !!!!

Loved the updates...waiting for khushi's reply to him

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Lily30

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Posted: 10 years ago

#68

Loved it 😃

You are an amazing writer 👏

Loved the letter

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daljeet

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Posted: 10 years ago

#69

Hahahahaha 🤣

I liked that. Even I was amazed at how Arnav managed. Hope Kushi realizes his real situation and doesn't force him henceforth.

Didn't Buaji forgive Arnav too soon and too sweetly? Did he deserve such warm love for kidnapping her niece and calling them names and insulting her and her family? Just because he is now ready to accept her and he is rich and 'sanskari' despite the act he pulled out, Buaji is all ok with him? I find that very sneaky.