Smitar's OS SERIES: TRYST IN THE CARDS #5 OS 8 1~7 Link to #6: Pg 1

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Spoonai

@Spoonai

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#601

Another amazing story!!! I cud tell, it's gonna b a whole lot gun to read and can't wait to read more abt our very own raj kapoor n nargis!!!

So barun movie thriller is out and I couldn't help but think why they didn't cast barun Sanaya cause for me Sanaya is so much cuter than the heroine in the movie. Just can't remember her name

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#602

Loved the start so cute loved their meeting and their reaction to each other loved how they did not want to leave each other loved his family reaction when he asked about the movie .

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Seeta

@LadyR

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#603

What an adorable start, now to find his Nargis again!!

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yoga123

@yoga123

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#604

Nice start...the khadoos ASR is long forgotten and he is just Arnav in front of an unknown girl...he wanted to protect her...very interesting start...thanks for the PM

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Varsha Dutt

@varsha2KD

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#605

Yay... new story 🥳
Amazing updates... can't wait for the next update 😃

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LyssaPie

@LyssaPie

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#606

Oh my loving the new story already

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Hetal

@Divyahet

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#607

Barsat mein humse mile tum sajan..
tumse mile hum ..barsat mein.😳

as usual beautiful start,
loved the way ASR ke saathi ne uska haath chhod diya iss barish mein..😆
his first Love SUV and his phone.😆
phir bhet hui KKG se...
even uska dimaag bhi bewafa nikla..haayre Khooli Kismat.
KKG and Auto driver ki masi bhari antakshri..
KKG ko thank you bolna tha but yeh ho na sakaa...well next time banda khud hazir hoga ..kyo sahi hai na?😉
and driver ka dil toot gaya..dono Miyan biwi jo nahi the...buaji jagah ka driver ne leli Hai re NK!!!!😆
Mami ka Engligh language prati pyar.."lub hua ..."😆

hope ki yeh Auto driver iss love story ke safar mein shamil ho.

Naniji itni chinta mat kijiye apne chhote ki ...
eagerly waiting for the next updates...

and one song for this wonderful start...

Ek ladki bhigi bhagi si,
soti raaton mein jaagi si,

mili ik ajnabee se,
koi aage na pichhe..

tum hi kaho yeh koi baat hai...!!!!

hugs and lots of love,
take care of yourselves my buddies.

Reshu one jhappi with pappi faar you.😳

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Zania

@zaniax

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#608

Another lovely os.

i nvr get tierd of reading ur stories.

cont soon :)

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Aishwarya

@Aish002

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#609

loveeeddd ittt...the way Khushi n the rickshawvala was singing songs..n tat pic of nani n anjali's reaction..lol...nicceee...mamiji is awesome..umbrella was chotti heroine...nyccc...😊