Smitar's OS SERIES: TRYST IN THE CARDS #5 OS 8 1~7 Link to #6: Pg 1

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Posted: 10 years ago

#591

Great start. I like this story already.

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surrazdan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#592

wow... i am so addicted to ur stories... amazing..

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Pinky.Raizada

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+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#593

I am really glad that Arnav didn't hide his feelings infront of Khushi. The Last part was too funny.

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pixiegirl

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#594

Wow! Nice interesting start to yet another endearing ArHi tale... Arnav needs to brush up on his Bollywood trivia, if he wants his lubb story to flourish... 😉

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l.savitree

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Posted: 10 years ago

#595

Awesome & beautiful start with the rain scene 👏❤️

Raj kapoor & nargis😃 & a lovely song❤️

So asr will be raj kapoor & khushi will be nargis😆

The part 4 was so funny..love it

Update soon plzzz

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jtammareddy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#596

Cute and romantic rainy meet . I was so looking for u to start a new one. And here ur with a blast. U rock. Keep up .

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shiv456

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Posted: 10 years ago

#597

Loved the new story awesome

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pinkly

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Posted: 10 years ago

#598

Wow... what an amazing start. When I think the previous story you have written is the best one... you always come up with something new and fantastic. I love the start. I like this ASR... he is not arrogant. I liked it more when he did not push Khushi away when she hugged him in the rain. Oh Gosh, I am super excited to read this story. Continue soon Smita...