Dark Sandhir SS The Melancholy OF My Canvas(Ch-6 updated)

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sweetshre

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Posted: 10 years ago

#81

hey thanks for d pm...
amazing story yaar n it's very intriguing
continue soon...

shreya

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MDKSSM

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Posted: 10 years ago

#82

Awesome prt but y randhir is taking ravenge y he feel betrayed plzzz nxt prt jaldi updt karna

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-chocoangel-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#83

Resss

Hellohyebyebye moi phirse apne not so durlabh darshan dene aa gayi

Haaailaaa wo maan gayi pichhle reaction dekhk moi ne expe t nhi kiya tha chal koi na

Flashback haaaye maar daala kaat dala barabaad nhi kar dala

Haaaye rd kitni karta tha sanyukta ki but ab kya hua

Inbhestionwa kare k padi

Haaye maara raam ji

Revenge kis liye

Moi ka head is ghooming round n round round

Jaaailaa ye mystery to moi upcoming updates padhne k baad hi solve kar paaying

Philhaal k liye ek mystery solve kari h n that is k sanyu is in love with him n Revenge one sided h kitni badi mystery solve kari moine

Chalo moi k liye clap karo

I can be a good detective nhi

Okay so precap k hisaab se wo hoga

But I doubt kahi beech puraana pyaar jaag gaya tooo

Koi naaa

UPDATISHHH SOOONISHHH

Edited by pritha072angel - 10 years ago

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Janavi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#84

This update was so classy
Can't wait for the next part..!!
This revenge.. 😡
Really loving the French touch
You are giving..!! Lovely..!!
Thanks for the pm
Love Janavi

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Dhruvi Mehta

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Posted: 10 years ago

#85

Makku...meri janeman

Loved it yar

It was jst amazinggg...

U r indeed chhota beedu

M loving ur ff

Nd yar me to fan ban gai teri...

Ab jaldi nxt update kr...nanha munha rahi...

Love

Dhruvi

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Rashi Bhargava

@newmoon18

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Posted: 10 years ago

#86

Yr u write so awsme

The updte was so beautifully penned down

Rd luved her so much bt rite now he has gone mad in his Revenge
Poor sanyu unaware of his intentions

I m sure sanyu cnt cheat him
Bt I m scared for wht is going to upon
Rd will surely regret his deeds

Yep my name is rashi
Updte soon wtng

Keep smiling 😊 😊

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pragya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#87

Awesome update. ..
i think i will also learn french...
Thanks for the pm
update next chapter soon.

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Karishma Sewani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#88

OMG! This whole chapter was amazingly written! The vengeance, the hate, the revenge, these emotions were very clearly depicted with the right choice of words. And sanyukta being completely oblivious to his intentions, is making me feel sad for her!
I am very curious to know ki why is he willing to take revenge? What is the reason behind his hatred or vengeance towards her which has made him this outraged to seek revenge from her?
Continue soon! Will be waiting for the *ahem* *ahem* part! :)

Thanks for pm'ing!
Keep writing,
Love,
Karishma. :* <3