Dark Sandhir SS The Melancholy OF My Canvas(Ch-6 updated)

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Posted: 10 years ago
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A/N: This ff may contain some french shades , may be some dialogues , some places , or pinch of their culture , hope you guys will like it . Thanks Ashka and Dhruvi for these beautiful banners <3

Please spare the mistakes :)

Happy reading ^_^

<<Prologue>>

She was sitting on the couch looking seductive in her long and fluffy pink robe , her cold arms wrapped around my neck and her legs nicely folded and stuffed on the couch .

"I love you my angel "she chirped for the third time now

"Love u too" i replied coldly staring on the marbled floor

She appeared somewhat tensed , i kissed her crook , just to assert that every thing was fine . Just to assure her that i was still in her trap , that i still loved her madly ...

"I want to be with you forever " came her moan as she was busy biting my earlobe ..

I supressed my anger and pasted a fake grin on my face

I was sinking in the darkness from inside depressed from the betrayal she was upto , my heart was aching , my hands were shivering , and i felt an urge to clasp her neck and pierce my nails into her soft wheatish skin and yes i did it .She was choking , she was gulping for air , her eyes started shutting down and a lone tear made way through my eyes and...

My chain of fantasies were broken by a thud on the door

"Bonjour messieur"Comment cava?(good morning sir, how are you)

"Cava bien merci" (fine thank you ) , though i was nowhere near "fine"...

***

I realized i was hallicunating the things ...

But this hallucination was giving me pleasure

"Jordan , bring my car keys , i ll drive today " i screamed

Jordan , jordan my driver and probably the single living soul in this grand mansion ,

i plugged my earphones and started driving ..

Through the window

I noticed the children playing on the roadside ,little girls jumping , toddlers enjoying the sea-saw ride

How beautiful the clouds were , The shimmer of the sun, trees swaying to the rhythm of wind..life was beautiful wasn't it? Certainly it was ,but now it isn't ...

***

I feel this unrest

That nest all hollowness

For I have nowhere to go and I'm cold.

***

Humming these lines , i changed the gear and accelerated ...

Taking steady and small steps , each and everyday i used to feel the same fear , the same goosebumps which a toddler faces when he enters his kindergarten for the first time . Inhaling the air , i sighed and determined myself to continue ...

To be continued ...


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Prologue [above]

Chapter 1

Chapter 2

Chapter 3

Chapter 4

Chapter 5

Chapter 6

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Posted: 10 years ago
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It was awsme

Full of suspense
Would luv to read it

Update soon wtng
Pm me when u update nxt

Alwz keep smiling dear 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Res Unres.. Hawww me second.. I said I wanted to come first... U gave me an another reason to visit forums.. I used to read swa' dharu' Dhruvi ' Ashka ' rashi' gunseerat and now u are added to this list... M feeling like a proud mom rightnow.. Mera don to gaya. Its so classy n awesome ff.. M really looking fwd to it.. I know its going to b best now.. And dark ff.. Haayee U made my Sunday by this beautiful gift.. Chup chap likh liyaa.. M so glad today.. Now I want part 1 of this classy ff.. Do one thing add classy to the title.. Love u my baby..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey..it was an awesome prologue..!!
Would definitely follow this ff..!!
It was such a classy prologue...!!
Looking forward ..!!
Update ASAP..!!
Thanks for the pm
Love Janavi ..!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Yey...
Makku ka ff aya...
Party time...
Wohhooo...yippiii...
Awsome prologue
Loved it to the core
Now u do update ASAP
Love
Dhruvi
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Posted: 10 years ago
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its superb fab awesome lovely lovely classy ff
very interesting prolouge
bohot sara suspense ha.
just love it. updet asap.😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hawww moi itni late...
*bangs head on the wall*
Kukku... My partner... My janejigar.. My rasmalayi
My gulabjamun.. Yaar jyada hogeya... xD
Chodona ki frk penda ae... I toh love u ...so much
..beedu is feeling lk a proud mother.. N me feeling no less then a proud girlfriend.. (Remember we'r in a very serious relationship)
Cut my crap...
On a serious note...
I never knew my nautanki kukku will surprise me to this extent... But m happy u did this...!
This one is tremendously... Awesome...!
Looking fwd...
Update asap..
Love u
Summo..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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its interesting very interesting yaar
plzzz next part sooon
thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey! Mahak
Nice concept
Seems interesting very interesting
Do continue soon
Plz pm me
Love
Bushra
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome cont soon dear n plz pm me

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