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Posted: 11 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: cuteparsh

its amazinggg👍🏼
awesomeee part
thanks for pm
next part sooon
lots of luv
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thank you sakshi
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Param_love

awesome update👏

love it to to core😳
update ASAP

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thank you 😆😆😆
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Originally posted by: shrutikag

read the first part...really liked it...not only did i love the concept but the french culture adds its own flavour to the story...revenge by randhir is really gonna be interesting to read bt i just hope u dont make sanyu suffer a lot because of his revenge...a very nice beginning.waiting for u to update.thanks for the pm n update soon👏👏👏


Thank you 😆😆😆
yup french culture is really beautiful ...will update asap😆

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yeah ...😆😆
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Originally posted by: samridhigoodiez

M loving ur cutoo Sa index darloo...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter 2


A/N : This is dedicated to the person who encouraged me to write ,who has been my inspiration throughout and has always been there for me :) and recently that person gave me the best compliment ever for my writing which i never expected ,I am overwhelmed so couldn't stop myself from expressing it here,i know that a mere "Thank you" won't express my gratitude but i have nothing else to say ...

P.S. : I won't take the name because the person is smart enough to guess !

Happy reading :)(flashback is quoted within 7 stars)


"Let's make LOVE tonight Sanyukta", he popped the question , thus laying the foundation of his revenge ...
Her eyeballs widened and her face flashed some wrinkles ...
"Randhir"
"I don't know how to react"spoke sanyukta in a barely audible tone
"Randhir, what about the decision we took 3 months back?"


*******
"Sanyukta"
"Sanyukta"
"Sanyukta, i said STOP", he yelled this time
She immediately pulled back her hands from his chest and her lips from his neck and halted with bewilderment
"What's the matter Randhir ?", she spoke flashing glimpse of irritation on her face
"Sanyukta, we shouldn't move further "he chirped showing most considerate emotions
"This isn't right sanyukta , let's get married first" he justified
Sanyukta started fidgeting her hands randomly and after some pause she replied ,
"Randhir , i am still not ready for the commitment"
At the very moment he felt his soul ripped off , his tiny heart pieces welled up his glittering eyes
"It's ok sanyukta, i know it's really hard for a girl to give herself to a new relationship ", he sighed a bit and looked into her eyes...
Silence prevailed in the room for few minutes as the two of them were busy fighting with their inner self , one wanted but the other didn't because one was sure but the other wasn't ...complicated it was for both of them ...and more complicated was the game which the destiny had planned for them ...the yarns of their life had started to tangle ...
"Sanyukta let's wait then , we won't move further until we are ready for the commitment ", he glared her , waiting for her response ...
"Randhir , i honor your decision to abstain from intercourse until we get married , but Randhir i want my deepest feelings to be out in open ...i want to feel you , i want to connect with you intimately ..."she uttered in single breath ...
"Sanyukta "
"I don't want you to do something which isn't meant for now ,about which you'll repent in future "
With this he held her hand and positioned it on his chest ,
"Swear on your heart beating inside me Sanyukta , we'll move ahead together only when we'll be sure of what we want from this relationship"
*******

"Sanyukta",
"I made you swear , and now i am only rewarding you with the freedom"
With this sanyukta gulped and blushed together
"let's do it randhir", she twinkled not meeting his wild gaze
He was concerned before because he was deeply in love at that point but he was burning in rage now , he was determined to settle the scores now , so he didn't hesitate to withdraw the promise he took from sanyukta ...
With this randhir excused himself and proceeded to make a call , his evil intentions were visible from his visage ...
"What is he upto", she thought ,noticing him from a distance
"Sanyukta he loves you madly "she assured herself and smiled .
Soon the chauffer arrived and they settled themselves on the back seat ..
she calmly started observing the orange moon through the window and he silently turned the pages of his novel
"La diginite negotiable"
(The negotiable dignity)

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They stepped together in a petite yet a gracious chambre ...
He closed the door behind him
The room was bathed in bright blue moonlight , which streamed in through the two windows .
She looked beautiful in her frilled robe , her eyes shone brightly , full of desire ..
He immediately grabbed her from back and wrapped his hands around her , she circled around to face him , he pulled her closer and the two cold souls collided , he looked her with eyes ...full of vengeance and she misunderstood it as passion.The room was drenched in the shower of intense desire ...
Let's dance mon amant (my love)
With this he stretched his right arm and clicked the play button .
**Pour te dire je t'aime comme avant
(For telling you that i love you like before)**
Their bodies were communicating on the tone of their gestures .
*Je pourrais bruler un ocean
(I can boil the ocean with my love)*
They were ready to innovate a whole new symphony with their moves.
The whole room reflected a grind of passion , infatuation , intensity , and certainly somewhere or the other disguised "REVENGE" ...

Stay tuned for ahem ahem part; )

Have a nice day :)

Edited by MAHAK1234 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#78
RES
😳 😳 😳 😳
finally me first aa hi gayi...
dekho bhai beedu first ayi h...😎
and dedicate kiya... kisko??
hume to pata hi ni chala.. rofl..
that person will be very happy after reading this.. i hope that person is smart 😉
c0ming to ur update..
the update was amazing...
this ff is driving me crazy.,.
so classy and
ek no. h ye chhota beedu..
love u..
m so so so happy for u..
bye,,
update soon
Edited by samridhigoodiez - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#79
Ohh gosh this revenge part is now killing me seriously xP
You wrote it wonderfully yaar...loved each n every part
N can't wait to read that 'ahem...ahem' part
Update soonish dear...n thnxx for pm ;)

Love
Neha :*
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey! Mahak
Lovely, lovely, lovely, lovely,
lovely, lovely update dear😳😳
Lovely, nicely and beautifully written👏👏
Love it to the core❤️
Very well you've described the scenario⭐️⭐️
Revenge part is drowning me!!!
Update ASAP
Can't wait for ahem ahem...
Eagerly waiting
Thanks for pm
Love
Bushra
Edited by Param_love - 11 years ago

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