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amus5

@amus5

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Posted: 11 years ago

#91

dhak dhak...dhak dhak...this is no acidity dear but the reaction to every word and line written in this passage...gosh Aman how did i miss this wonderful piece of work???? 😭

i'm reminded of Omar Khayyam's Rubaiyat I quote

"The Moving Finger writes; and, having writ,

Moves on "

how ironic - the scriptwriter finds his script written by another and how...

i sincerely thank you for sending me the pm - otherwise i most probably would have overlooked it as OS is usually not my cup of tea

and yes, I'm waiting eagerly waiting for the epilogue 😳

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amus5

@amus5

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Posted: 11 years ago

#92

musings... does khushi here define HOPE???

the more you read khushi's letters the more she seems to be an enigma...what made her write these letters when Arnav never gave even a sign...and the way they are written goes to show she writes her innermost thoughts which have no or nothing to do with her Asli Duniya...what ticks her...what keeps going...

she intrigues me to the limits...do such people exist in the real world...

Arnav you are truly blessed to have met her...Morai sisters have been truly benevolent with you...

when destiny standsby you what can the likes of Devyani do???

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amus5

@amus5

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Posted: 11 years ago

#93

we meet many almost everyday and a few make an impact on us ... they say, that we meet people on the train just to part with them although they may remain in our thoughts ...Morai sisters come into play when life comes to a full circle and this is my belief ... here it seems to hold true ...

...varna picture abhi bhi bhaaki hai mere dosth 😉

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ASRphanki

@ASRphanki

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+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#94

Omg...now that was a complete twist in part 2...how the heck did Arnav remained ignorant to Devyani's ill doings...😡

Glad..that its sorted...waiting to see khushi's reaction and epilogue😳

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canapoem

@canapoem

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+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#95

A big thank you to Ruchi for suggesting this story. 🤗

I must say this is indeed an amazing and unbelievable story.

Unbelievable because of the unbelieving trust Khushi had on her love for Arnav. Unbelievable because even after not getting any response from Arnav, still she never stopped writing. Unbelievable because Khushi never lost hope.

I hope that such love stories exist in this world and such lovers too.

Arnav's holding back and assuming wrong assumptions cost them 4 years of their lives to be apart. I hope Arnav takes the necessary steps required now and never lets her go.

Devyani needs to be admitted to a mental asylum ASAP.

Edited by canapoem - 11 years ago

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Hot_Chocolate

@Hot_Chocolate

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#96

this is such a beautiful piece of work. I mean, I loved it. aise hi search karte karte mil gya and I found the title intriguing.
their love was so ethereal. absolutely mesmerising.

a request please. can you please give us a third shot. I really want to know what was that marriage thing and also want to see their reunion. its your decision at the end of the day.

lovely TS.
*claps*

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Japonica

@Japonica

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Posted: 11 years ago

#97

WOW! what an exquisite story.

You made us wait 4 years before letting moirai right the wrong that had been done and now you ask if we are up for an epilogue???

Is that a question to even ask?

Just as moirai led me to this story, I want it take me to the epilogue of this story😃

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MDTharun

@MDTharun

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Posted: 11 years ago

#98

Wonderful TS

Well written

loved it

Will epilogue have happy ending ?

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stg1

@stg1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#99

this is so beautiful, i love the theme and i can clearly picture every single moment u described, the songs, the smells, the sights, the sounds and ... all those feelings ⭐️ loved the letter writing, so simple and yet so full of everything meaningful. arnav should make this movie and he should give it a happy ending and it should be their happy ending but aagghhh, u cant finish it there, i need some more, their milan and an epilogue definitely! seriously hoping they r in the offing otherwise i will have to stalk u to find out kyun, kaise, kahan, aur kab unki dharkanein ek honge 😳