~Lethal Liaisons~ MaNan FF chapter 7, page 34 - Page 22

this is the first FF I'm reading of Manik-Nandini - loved the plot! very interesting and gripping storyline!

Originally posted by: MKrayZee

I loved how you have maintained the consistency of the characters. Nandini and Manik seeking each other out. Just knowing when the other is needed.

Although I have to say, the FF version of Manik Malhotra is definitely more vocal than the KY2 one and I like that! He is also not into cockblocking himself 😆

I loved the update. You have made me want to read all of the chapters again just to see if I can be Abhi and solve the mystery, or get clues which will help me identify the murderer.

I just have one tiny complain and I hope you will take this positively. I felt that the conversation between M&N regarding the serial killers could have been meatier, more depth. M's realisation and connecting dots felt too sudden to me.

But thank you for the long update. Zee is definitely happy 😆

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@Shells - I look forward to reading it.

Another striking update from you..firstly loved the way manan relationship is progressing although in a reverse way as in fierce attraction..making love n falling in love( though they dint realise it yet) n them thinking abt the zoo visit indicates they spent some time with eachother n it's not just attraction from maniks side and that makes sense abt her being concerned about him and vice versa and coming to the mystery part ground rule for all the suspense thriller lovers never think the culprit is the one who all the fingers are pointing to..so I don't think its mukti behind all the murders yes she has a bad past but she is not the culprit..my guess I find something fishy with dhruv..n one more thing why everyone are readily pointing towards mukti i mean fab 5 are friends n manik connecting dots n saying it could be mukti do they know her past( only then this will make sense) ok I know I have to wait for the next one to get my answers n for that u have to update soon..please update soon n one more thing I like that nandini is opening up about her feelings to manik and that line " make love to me "shows the intensity of his feelings towards her..at some point in the story would love to see a jealous manik as I know that jealousy would be on whole new level seeing ur writing till now..n would love to read it..so am eagerly waiting for ur next update..pls continue soon..pretty please..again awesome writing Shelly 👏

Amazing piece of work. I don't generally post a comment unless I really it. Girl, you're good. Have you studied psychology by any chance too? Frankly speaking, thriller isn't really my genre, to the ever growing disappointment of my mother. The only thing close to mysteries must have been the Nancy Drews I'd read ages ago, and they don't hold my interest because I predict them halfway through. Always been more of a fantasy girl, a sci-fi here and there with classics in between. The only Mills and Boon I tried to read made me want to throw up and drown in it. Seeing as this fic got to me, maybe I should move on to this genre.
Criminal Psychology, love it. Always wanted to study it, but gah. Serial killers fascinate me too, definitely in my list of top topics to converse on in the bed. Never really thought of it as weird! 🤣
Is Nandini inspired from Clarice Starling, by any chance? Or maybe it's unintentional, but she definitely has a hint of Starling in there.
Vatican Cameos? Who sent that message, was it a threat? And Mukti-Alya-Dhruv came right after. I'm no stranger to Holmes, Alya is his sister so I'm ruling her out, for now, and that leaves Dhruv. Or was the message in regard to the double identity of his wife? Is he oblivious to that? UPLOAD SOON!

Awesome update!!!

Shelly when are u updating next one..been some time.. please continue soon :)

I can relate to nandini, there are quite a few things we have in common