~Lethal Liaisons~ MaNan FF chapter 7, page 34 - Page 21

Originally posted by: Firebolt

Darling you're absolutely swell. You're keepin' it real and keepin' it interesting.. a deadly combination *_*

I'v read the first two chapters and they've been a fine read. Keep it up love.

Will say more once I've caught up with everything. :*

Originally posted by: ky2forever

i toh luved it very much😊...now i dnt hav to read stories 4m wattpad as long as u update it..it contains romance,thriller n wat not 👏...plz continue d gud work😉

Originally posted by: Monstuholic4evr

I have just read the first part yet..
And I am totally in love with the way it is written more than anything else... And I have got the ipportunity to say this after such a long time... :)

Originally posted by: Autumn_Hue

Okay so I'm under mountain size work temporarily so can't give you a long long comment for your update I'm so sorry shelly (caught your name in a comment which you wrote).. 😳😛

But this update was as awesome and superb like the previous ones and the plot seems to get thicker and more interesting with the progressing story and you're handling it amazingly kudos to you for that.. 👍🏼

And Manan as usual were just awesome can't wait to read the next part update soon and I'm sorry for a late comment.. 😃

Love,

Kashmi 🤗

Originally posted by: Ambylicious

wow.. shells.. loved it.. read both the chapters. the way u write is just so amazing. i am constantly at the edge of my seat, whenever i read ur update. 👏👏

plz plz update soon. i am dying out of curiosity.

love

Amby

Originally posted by: sadhanager.

I start from beginning.

Prologue : pics used, description of characters 👍🏼 Yayyy!!! I had to google extensively to search for the best/hottest pics of the actors! Chalo...hard work paid off. 😆

chapter 1 : interesting way of explaining crime scene, detective Abhimanyu is good, looks like he also has imp.role to play😛 Are you talking about chapter 1 or prologue? 😕 And yeah, initially, I just named him Detective Gupta..back then, Abhi's char wasn't introduced in KY2 and then I updated after ages so I thought of naming him Abhimanyu kyunki wohi baaki reh gaya hain.

chapter 2.: dhruv is mysterious as usual. Manik and cabir are kameenas, looked like some past history with dhruni.but manik has some serious stuff for nandu.😳 Manik is the biggest kameena! 😆 Dhruv ka thing you'll come to know eventually. 😉

chapter 3 : Truth to be told murder mystery of pia jaiswal is more interesting than manan ki story😆.the way you introduced harshad, still proves you still louuu harshad😉.manik ka introduction picka picka😛.but encounter of manan, bold sassy nandu😎. Harshad is my true louuu!! There's no two ways about it! 😆 But yeah, it was because I've already introduced Manik in the 1st chapter itself toh isiloye. I've put a lot of myself in my Nandu...hope that the readers will like it. 😛

Chapter 4 : as I am innocent masoom baccha, idk how to explain☺️.instead of controlling and struggling ,they did according to their needs.😳.I can still see a love story here😆. Tu innocent hain?? Phir toh main bhi Dhoom: 3 ki heroine hoon. 😎 Jokes apart, it wasn't really love in that chapter but going with the flow.

chapter 5 : story unfolds here.secrets coming out.murderer planned everything and he/she killing partners of fab5 one by one.first cabir's partner, now aliya's partner.Manik the gadha (here slso applicable) thinking next victim might be harshad😕.not thinking about nandini.mukti's past, dhruv's character is still mystery .😕.You promised happy ending, so can I guess nandu and manik aren't murderers, so am I thinking in right direction? Lets see in future chapters, curiously waiting for next murder😈. Ohh noo Sadhu, you interpreted the scene wrongly! When Manik took Harshad's name, the next name that came to his mind was Nandini's! That's why he looked horror-struck and hugged her tight. He's not a gadha, not here at least. 😆