Smitar's OS SERIES: TRYST IN THE CARDS #4 OS 7 (32~60) Link to #5:Pg 1

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Natasha08

@Natasha08

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#121

awesome update

waiting for buaji's reaction when she meets the goonda

loved it

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sincereme

@sincereme

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#122

Awesome update..

Buaji is too good... She was sympathizing with the "ghunda" for the poor guy must have his reasons to kidnap girl.. 😆... Loved her...

Loved the update...

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733619

Hibernated

Posted: 10 years ago

#123

Lovely. Such a great story

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Anjani Patel

@Titaliya_AP

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#124

Sorry for my shortage of comments! But I'm loving where you are taking this Smita <3 I always enjoy reading about a love-struck ASR and a fiesta Khushi who doesn't give in ;) looking forward very eagerly to more!

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Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#125

Rocking update

Rashmi 🤗

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Mysticaldivine

@Mysticaldivine

Stunner

+ 10

Posted: 10 years ago

#126

Just read the unwanted wife in one gist...Superb 👏

How she has become his integral part .Beautiful😊

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paaskhanna

@paaskhanna

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#127

story is becoming more amusing ... Buaji feeling sorry for 'goonda'
"The lion who is a pussycat to you," ... Laughed very hard on reading this
Cannot wait to read more... Jaldi Jaldi update de do please