Smitar's OS SERIES: TRYST IN THE CARDS #4 OS 7 (32~60) Link to #5:Pg 1 - Page 14

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Posted: 10 years ago
Really really loved this series ...
and lover boy arnav...awww love him
awesome updates
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Posted: 10 years ago
really superb this story reminds me of a rajashri productions film
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Posted: 10 years ago
Have I told you how much I adore this story? Well, I do!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Buaji & Arnav had a cute relation.. the kind of love buaji have for her arnav bitwa was beautiful.. here too.. loved their conversation so much.. Buaji already pitying that goonda listening to arnav.. khushi's dream was superb.. loved the update..


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Posted: 10 years ago
Hayee my only regret for not being able to log on the forum as often is missing out on so many wonderful updates here! This OS gets more and more amusing by the minute. It is definitely unlike what people would assume the story with a title "The Other Woman" to be.
Love, love, loved all the gifts, pics, super witty dialogues, the characters and the story line. Can't wait to see how Arnav Wooos Khushi!

This journey has been awesome so far and I:
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Posted: 10 years ago

I am simply loving this story !

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Posted: 10 years ago
beautiful
quite crazy and funny updates
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Posted: 10 years ago
Lol i love the fiesty khushi here!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Smita, I know that most of your stories never had Shyam in the picture. In this story you included his character and made him a positive character.
I have a request here, keeping Shyam as the antagonist in a story, can you write one please.
Your writing style is unique and I always wondered how you would write a story with a villain in picture.
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome loved it...
looking forward to read more. ...continue soon

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