Arshi FF/Saffron Fields#10/ Link thread 11 Pg 1.

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prati

@Luvforever

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Posted: 10 years ago

#781

Its amazing... I just read all d chptrs in a go & totally loved dis story & d way u hv narrated it... D way u described every characters & der thinking so clearly dat its not possible to actually to point finger at one person to accuse of all wrong doing... D concept is quite diffrnt & d way u carried it out is superb... Take my bow for dat dear... :) its really amazing d way u describe every small & big things so clearly & awesomely... Saffron fields of Kashmir is d starting point of all dis journey of arhi along wid whom der r oders as well like aman-anita & lavanya-nevilie & I m so happy caught up wid dis beautiful story...

Do cont soon dear quite eager to read more of it... :)

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crazy-ash

@crazy-ash

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Posted: 10 years ago

#782

Oh dear! I wish their much impending meet gets over soon as I don't want lavanya to harbour hopes...

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canapoem

@canapoem

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Posted: 10 years ago

#783

I keep wondering how should Arnav react to the place suggested by Lavanya to meet?

Obviously there is some past connection to the place and La suggesting the same, what should Arnav understand it as?

Should he be cautious in his approach or assume that she wants a closure at the same place they started?

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pixiegirl

@pixiegirl

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Posted: 10 years ago

#784

Originally posted by: canapoem
I keep wondering how should Arnav react to the place suggested by Lavanya to meet?
Obviously there is some past connection to the place and La suggesting the same, what should Arnav understand it as?

Should he be cautious in his approach or assume that she wants a closure at the same place they started?

Kavitha, Arnav is no fool. He harbors no false hopes where La is concerned... His guard is probably already up hearing the name of the place I am sure... 😉

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canapoem

@canapoem

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Posted: 10 years ago

#785

Originally posted by: pixiegirl

Kavitha, Arnav is no fool. He harbors no false hopes where La is concerned... His guard is probably already up hearing the name of the place I am sure... 😉

Maybe La thought that they can get drunk again and they can repeat history again from the same place. 😆

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pixiegirl

@pixiegirl

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Posted: 10 years ago

#786

Originally posted by: canapoem

Maybe La thought that they can get drunk again and they can repeat history again from the same place. 😆

Exactly, she is quite delusional like that... 😆

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pixiegirl

@pixiegirl

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Posted: 10 years ago

#787

But what piqued me most about her visit was that she dropped in without checking with Arnav if it was ok, then got upset upon seeing his indifference?? Pagal hai kya woh??

And then when he asked her how she was, she just sat there wasting his time staring out of the window knowing very well he was running late... What was she even thinking?? Did she think, Arnav would be thrilled seeing her?? For God's sake the man has filed a divorce against her... She was behaving like an irrational, hormonal, teen!!

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Anamika100

@Anamika100

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Posted: 10 years ago

#788

This update has left me feeling a sense of melancholy and foreboding as if there are storm clouds quietly gathering and blocking out the sunshine and the chill is creeping in and warmth of the sun disappears. So if my comment is doom and gloom, it's because that is how I am feeling after reading...I want to cry. Poor Arnav...who can he talk to ...it seems that even Khushi is looking for reassurance from him...where does he go for any reassurance?

Not sure if this is how i am supposed to react as a reader...if this was your intention...or I am just reading too much into it..

I am not discounting Khushi's dream at all. Her parents were very successful in Creating this doubt in her mind about her status in this relationship. It is due to their showing her the harsh reality that Khushi is now on shaky ground and doubting her instinct and questioning her position in his life. She is also very connected to Arnav and I think she senses that he may separate from her mentally and physically while he sorts out his life. I would have expected her to be by his side supporting him but now with evyone agreeing to their staying away from each other till he is divorced...separation seems inevitable.

In light of that situation, I really found their good bye disappointing and out of character. Or have I misunderstood how blase they were...as if they will see each other again in a day...which is not the case here.

Arnav disturbs me with his reticence and the occasional look that flickers / surfaces in his eyes. I wonder what he is thinking about and why will he not reveal more? I feel that there is a lot more that went on in that marriage than meets the eye. Again, am I being paranoid?

Navin and Sujata seem like they represent every parent because I see glimpses of my understanding and quiet father in him and in her I see my quick to react and judgemental mother who always has lofty expectation and little tolerance for human failure and views every action in terms of a reflection on her upbringing.

I can hardly wait till the next update.

Edited by Anamika100 - 10 years ago

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Manasa

@ManKiBaath

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Posted: 10 years ago

#789

Khushi is caught in between meeting expectations of her parents and Arnav. Navin's words ring in her ears creating a sense of guiltyness for which she seeks answers from Arnav. After everything that they shared, and his promise of commitment to her, he's surprised at her inquiry, but realizes her confusion. So he assures her that it's her for him and nothing else should matter.

You've so perfectly highlighted how Navin and Sujatha though differnt in their thought process yet make a loveable couple midnful of each others needs. I relived experiences remembering my parents. The compassionate, considerate, thoughtful, tolerant Navin coaxing his wife to give Khushi a chance. His attempts at diverting his wife's attention from thinking about Khushi & Arnav until they head home and enjoy the family vacation was simply adorable.

Khushi's actions are hurtful to Sujatha. She feels that all the morals she instilled in raising them are worthless. Her indifference towards Khushi is reasonable.

Despite starting off on a wrong foot in their relationship, and leading separte lives for a year, Lavanya still seeking to make ammendments is out of line. I would love to see what reasons she will give for patching their lives.