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I don't know how you express and convey such emotions in such few words.

Oh so beautiful, always keep writing Rae!

Rae.. Thank you for the p.m firstly dear! :D

The last part is my most favourite.. I've read the whole 3 parts together once again n by the time I came to the end , it was totally n completely emotionally intense ... There was a whole sense of fulfilment.. The final line which speaks about the protectiveness which washed over khushi for her Arnav was very very heart warming n I felt very proud of the woman she is! Also immensely loved how uve conveyed the feelings without a single dialogue...


Rae.. I would really lovee it very much to read your completed story of ArShi.. It is absolutely a delight any time of the day to read about this couple.. I love your writing very much n hv been able to read only a couple of ss only but now yeh dil maange moeee , ahaa!! ;) :D

Oh yes! Reading the last update reminded me of a dialogue from origins sin where the hero says " I want to give everything to her n take everything from her.."

Beautiful piece...

Absolutely marvellous piece of work.

The dialogues were not needed, your words did all the work.

Beautifully described their emotions, their feelings, their regrets and so much more.

beautiful!

Often people say lovers speak an excusively language, one that is only understood by them, be it through their actions, mannerisms and most of all their heart..and as a writer you have conveyed it so masterfully through your words...one could say the song was written for your love story...

I realized in the morning that in my comment I didn't answer your question. Yes I would like to read YNTOO very much. 😊