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AngelTeen

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Posted: 11 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: arhi_crazy
To move to a bright future one must forget/overcome/accept his past either happy or sad.
Arnav has finally let out his pain, confusions, mistakes of his part & accepted his fault.
Now khushi is beck here for her arnavji as his ray of light, his anchor & his once upon lost happiness.
eagerly waitn 4 last update.
PS. Thanks 4 pm dear.

Thank You so much for your comment and for the words of wisdom you have shared...it is so necessary to let of go of the past to be able to move on... :)

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AngelTeen

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Posted: 11 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: _Upama_
nice :)

Originally posted by: Arshi.Sugi.IPK
Heartwrenching

Originally posted by: siamesecat
lovely update

Thank You! :)

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AngelTeen

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Posted: 11 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: shr1234
So heartrending! Arnav's pain is unbearable. You are right, beast and his belle resonates with this one. I'm now waiting for the final one, thanks for the PM :)

Thank You so much! The third part should be up soon! :)

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AngelTeen

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Posted: 11 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: faffy
Thank you so much for the pm.

Part 2 made it even more difficult to see these two in so much pain, anguish and suffering. Through your eloquent narrative we got an insight into the heart and mind of these two wounded souls - their turmoil tore my heart!

An amazing piece of work!

Thank You so much for the appreciation! I am glad you liked the writing! :)

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AngelTeen

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Posted: 11 years ago

#85

Originally posted by: stg1
yes, i'm so glad that u continued this and thank u for the pm 😛 beautiful part, i loved the way his pov and her pov were both connected. and i love the way u write - the words u choose to use and the way u use them paint such a graphic and clear picture, i feel like i can see the scene unfolding in front of me with every detail in place. i always thought the way ASR was he had to be completely broken down into nothing before he could accept his feelings and rise up again and be the man he should have been always - his conscience wouldn't have allowed anything else. and i always thought Khushi would have more of that fieriness and fighting spirit intact along with her remarkable ability to forgive everything and she is exactly that girl here. i am really glad ur showing these two at their lowest and their best and as they could have and should have been. and as always am amazed by ur beautiful writing ⭐️

Thank You so much! I am glad you like my way of writing...its the biggest compliment for a writer to be told that their words create a picture for the reader! :)

And you are very right about Arnav's character's need to be completely broken down for him to rise again...he is that kind of a fellow with all of his doubts, misgivings about the world and himself needing to be completely abolished before he can have a new world view.

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AngelTeen

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Posted: 11 years ago

#86

Originally posted by: dumas
ARNAV PAIN WAS HEART FELT HIS REMORSE SOUL TOUCH A MAN BEGGING CRYING FOR ONCE TO PROVE HE WAS HERS LETTING ALL THE PAIN AND THE HURT OUT WANTING ONLY HER TO CLAIM HIM BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN INTENSE THANKS FOR THE PM.

Thank You so much! :)

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AngelTeen

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: siamesecat
lovely update

Thank You! :)

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AngelTeen

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Posted: 11 years ago

#88

Originally posted by: Ms.KKN
Heart wrenchingly beautiful yaar!

Thank You so much! :)

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AngelTeen

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Posted: 10 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: ongongong
Where r u??

I forgot I had to post the third part! Lol! And to think I had it all written also pehle se! Sorry! Posting it abhi :)

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AngelTeen

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Posted: 10 years ago

#90

Part 3 (final part) of Hers has been posted on Page 1 -

Hers | Part 3

I hope you like it. Your interest in the last chapter was much cherished as will be your feedback to this part. Also please read the 'Thank You' note at the end of the chapter which also includes an important question for my readers :)

Cheers