Hers | ArHi OS (Part 3 Page 1 11/10) COMPLETED

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_Upama_

@_Upama_

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Posted: 10 years ago

#111

you've such magic in your writing...just wonderful !!
loved it <3

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Farwa

@-Farwa_Ibrahim-

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#112

read part one n loved it to my core I can say just one plain word

BEAUTIFUL
will b back with more on the other two

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Sharmila

@ongongong

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Posted: 10 years ago

#113

Originally posted by: AngelTeen

I forgot I had to post the third part! Lol! And to think I had it all written also pehle se! Sorry! Posting it abhi :)

OMG! I am so sorry for the late reply! I actually never noticed ur reply! So sorry! Beautiful work! I loved it! 😊

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henamani

@henamani

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#114

Im a fan of ur writing even though i dont get a Pm, i track u fronm twitter. Although i would love to be one of the priveleged ones too. Brilliant piece. Even though there were no dialogues, it had a soul. Btw the original song was sung by rahat fateh ali for a pakistani movie

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DMGFan-2b-not2b

@DMGFan-2b-not2b

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#115

wonderful OS! Love the emotions and the song which by the way is one of my favourites!

Much as someone who loves you can understand what you want to say, sometimes words are necessary. So while Khushi may have understood his silence and his repentance, those words were needed to provide the much needed balm to her batterd and hurt heart.

Would love to read the FF, would love to get the blog link.

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Farwa

@-Farwa_Ibrahim-

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#116

It was beautifully written... angst of both Arnav n Khushi shown so beautifully... really AWESOME piece

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Brishti

@brishti84

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#117

This was beautiful and so emotional. Your writing flawless. It flows so well. I don't know how else to describe it. Definitely hooked and will read more of your stuff.