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Shilpa

@HerFiction

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+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#91

Thanks for pm..loved the update

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Downhill

@Downhill

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Posted: 10 years ago

#92

that was truly beautiful👏

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Shalma/Suman

@arhi_crazy

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#93

Finally they are together. Their almost dead relation came alive just like how a phoenix rises from its ash.

Totally Loved dis.

P.S. Would love to read ur fanfic if u are going to repost it.

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prpk525

@prpk525

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#94

Loved it Rae. Of course. I'd love to read it :) Ps. Post it soon :)

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aquagal

@aquagal

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Posted: 10 years ago

#95

Love love love this... They are together and this time forever - no doubts hanging between them, both knowing that they can't let go off each other ever. I could visualize them sitting side to side, Khushi holding Arnav's hand with a teary but happy beginning.
I have to ask you again - how do you do this? You expressed their emotions, exchange of glances so beautifully with no word spoken but every deep emotion felt. Kudos!!!👏
These beautiful lines from the update :-
That he wanted to be hers as much as she wanted to be his.
That he wanted her to make him hers as much as she wanted him to make her his.
reminded me of the song "Baby, I'd love you to want me, The way that I want you, The way that it should be" somehow.

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Arshi67

@Arshi67

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#96

Rae, dialogue is superfluous when their thoughts have been put forth so emotively.

I loved how you wrote that the point at which she moved towards him was when she realised he wanted her to take him with haq. It was not just a question of him ceding control. His reaction upon seeing her there was so eloquently written, each emotion he went through made vivid for us.

Waiting to read YNTOO ... soon :)

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abby2181

@abby2181

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#97

Beautifully written. I liked the style of writing. No dialogues, just their emotions. Creates quite an impact.

Thanks for the PM.

To answer your question, I would love to read your FF if you would be willing to share it.

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

Trailblazer

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Posted: 10 years ago

#98

brilliant...too good..👏

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Pastellitesoulx

@xMIC.Dropx

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#99

how beautifully you have written all emotions without dailogues,it was wonderful <3
arnav and khushi are and will be together,they need each other always in their life.that scene where khushi held his arms and rested her head on his shoulder.that said it all.
The song and lyrics are beautiful and fit the scene.
Thanks for pm 🤗
yeah i want to read your ff,do send me pms for it please 😊

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siamesecat

@siamesecat

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#100

Thanks for the pm. Stunning peice of writing on Arshi. Loved it. How can you evdn ask. I would absolutely love to read ykur ff on IPKKND. Please repost it here.