*Updted* Vidarth FF:Indecent Proposal (Collab) chapter 11(pg 31)

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Posted: 10 years ago

#41

Oh my god...that was just super funny😆😆😆

Cant stop laughing and dont knw how long it will linger in my mind and make me laugh everytime...i doubt i will need medicine to get rid of my jaw pain...

Sunny deol of FITE...only you can think of such tiltle...and its perfectly suits him👏👏👏...the moment i read out the line i imagined of him delivering the dialogue ''ye dhai kilo ka hat hai...''😃😃

Her tricks of having him his medicines...ufff...you just nailed it...he must be happy that he does not belong to any family of vegetables otherwise pure veg miss vidushi would have relished him by now...

Haye ram!! Yeh ladki...Medicines dene boys hostelj pahuch gyi...bahut dum hai ladki mein...and the nipple wali bottle was the best one...if i was present in that room i would have died out of laughter...

And lastly the hazmola dialogue...puri izzat ka band baj gya...Bechara😉😉😲

Enjoyed it so much...

Love

Suprabha

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Jia Roh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#42

uff...didi...u are making me laugh a lot...

and i laughed a lot..🤣,the update was different from all my predictions didi,u did an amazing job👏👏👏..

jiya😛

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Posted: 10 years ago

#43

🤣

Moony..Moony..Moony..!!! Mind blowing. You have a good sense of humour.

Thoroughly enjoyed reading it. 😃

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Posted: 10 years ago

#44

i cant stop ;laughing aftr reading this

hw nice it would have been if this all happen in real

ash, chandni u all can really become writers

its so nice

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Moony87

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Posted: 10 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: arshisfan
Wow that was a wonderful update Chandni, I loved Vidushi!! woww this girl can go to any extent to make him eat his medecines and she also saved him from Randhir and Jiggy's questions in the end
I loved all the scenes, can't say which one is the best (rape dialogue, ya eating him dialogue, ya when she sat on him, ya the baby bottle, ya the hajmola...) this girl is really bold and beautiful too 😆 Everything for her Parth even if he gets irritated!!! He is lucky to have her in his life 😃

Hey Naaazzz... 😆.. Thank you yaaar.. Office ke heavy dose ke baad I needed humor a lot. 😆 .. Yep, Vidushi's center of all good deeds is Parth..

Saari duniya ek taraf Parth ek taraf.. Heheh for all those scenes.. 🤣🤣🤣

I mean Parth ki dhamki ke baad to it was required for Vids to bounce back in full glory. 🤣

I am so glad you loved it.. 😳

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Moony87

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Posted: 10 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: MDKRM
Whoa tht was damn funny yaar i cant stop laughing its sooo cute poor parthu ur an wonderful writer love u
Thnx fr d pm updt nxt prt soon im waiting i want to hqve more fun

Thanks a lottt... So So happy that it made you laugh.. 😃😃😃.. Love you 2 for liking my work so much.. 😃

Yep, next part Shreya will update and I'll PM you. 😊

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Moony87

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Posted: 10 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: Archisma
Nice

Thanks a lot Archi.. Glad that you liked it. 😊

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Moony87

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Posted: 10 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: Burn_the_Ashes
Res
Laptop hath me anne ka intezar hai.
It was lol.
Unres!
Forgive me for the short review?
Okay so, I loved how you have given this a 'tigress' twist.
The Vidushi sitting on his chest, rape comment and eating him up was so 😳
And Parth 😕 Poor thing was overwhelmed by her boldness😆
Loved how this continues with her promise of personally ensuring he takes his meds.
And the Hajmola and Baby bottle joke killed me, I swear.

@Shreya, It's on!
Waiting with bated breath to see ur response to this !

Love you both yaar!
Ash

Hey, No worries. You liked it that's most important.. 😃

Obviously, Partho Ek numberi to Vidushi Dus Numberi.. 😆

LOL The baby bottle and Hajmola, I was laughing myself while writing it. 🤣

Yep Waiting for Shreya.. I am to even for her to UNRES.. 😭

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Moony87

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Posted: 10 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: day_lily
Hilariously Amazing..!!
Loved it..Vidushi is too good n Parth..hahhahaha..poor boy!!

Jo Vidushi se takraayega, mitti mein mil jaayega.. 😆

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Moony87

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Posted: 10 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: ..-DeViLiA-..
Loved the update!!! Paarth's condition is hilarious!! But I'm sure he will set the score even pretty soon!! 😉

Thanks for the PM..Continue soon!!👍🏼

Hey deviliaaa.. So happy you loved it.😃😃 .. Yep galt bandi ko dhamkaayega to yehich hoyenga.. 😆

LOL wo to main na hone doongi.. Vidushi ko jam ke jitaaoongi main.. 😃