*Updted* Vidarth FF:Indecent Proposal (Collab) chapter 11(pg 31) - Page 6

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Posted: 11 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: senasenapati

Oh my god...that was just super funny😆😆😆

Cant stop laughing and dont knw how long it will linger in my mind and make me laugh everytime...i doubt i will need medicine to get rid of my jaw pain...

Thank youuu... 🤣🤣🤣🤗🤗🤗🤗

Sunny deol of FITE...only you can think of such tiltle...and its perfectly suits him👏👏👏...the moment i read out the line i imagined of him delivering the dialogue ''ye dhai kilo ka hat hai...''😃😃

LOL .. Thank you again... Heheh.. well wo jitne gusse mein ghoomta hai this title actually suits him.. 🤣🤣🤣

Her tricks of having him his medicines...ufff...you just nailed it...he must be happy that he does not belong to any family of vegetables otherwise pure veg miss vidushi would have relished him by now...

Heheh yeah.. Parth ko pata hona chaahiye ke hot body ke kya side effects ho sakte hain.. 🤣🤣

Haye ram!! Yeh ladki...Medicines dene boys hostelj pahuch gyi...bahut dum hai ladki mein...and the nipple wali bottle was the best one...if i was present in that room i would have died out of laughter...

🤣🤣🤣... Only I know how I wrote those lines. Giggled like anything.. 🤣🤣

And lastly the hazmola dialogue...puri izzat ka band baj gya...Bechara😉😉😲

Heheh.. Serves him right for the serious expressions all the time.. 🤣🤣

Enjoyed it so much...

Thank youuu... 😳

Love
Suprabha

Love you 2.. 😃

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Posted: 11 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: dewcute

uff...didi...u are making me laugh a lot...

and i laughed a lot..🤣,the update was different from all my predictions didi,u did an amazing job👏👏👏..
jiya😛


Hey Jiyaa.. LOL m happy that this chapter made you laugh so muchh.. 🤣
Specially when it was different from your predictions.. 😆

Love you Jiyaa.. 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: --aimy--

🤣

Moony..Moony..Moony..!!! Mind blowing. You have a good sense of humour.
Thoroughly enjoyed reading it. 😃


Aimyyy... 🤣🤣🤣🤣

Khoob Khoob abhaaar.. 🤣🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: -SREE93-

i cant stop ;laughing aftr reading this

hw nice it would have been if this all happen in real
ash, chandni u all can really become writers
its so nice


Hey Shree... Yeahh.. I so wish they show something like this in the show. 🤣🤣🤣
So happy that it made you laugh.. 🤣🤣

Nahi yaar.. Ash ka samjh aata hai.. Main to abhi actually kachhi khilaadi hoon.. 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#55
nahi chandni
u r an awesome writer
its nt at all easy to write ff
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Posted: 11 years ago
#56
Vidushi goal pe goal mari ja rahi hai...I loved this update
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Posted: 11 years ago
#57
Okay moony sorry for unress so late but been really busy n all...neways coming to this one ...I have really become a fan of ur writing...whether u have written romance, passion or comedy u write it really well n I think the most difficult aspect of wrting is comedy n make ppl laughn u did a gr8 job with that n I loved it...@everyone please bear with me n I promise that u ll all love it n the anticipation is running high on this one...
Ps in my update Parth will equal the score😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
#58
Wow!! I love it <3 <3
And I love Vidushi here, her dialogues and one liners xD
That hajmola wala part when she pops up again 🤣
You've done brilliant job 👏

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Posted: 11 years ago
#59

A Quick recap for you guys on the ongoing battle between Parth Kashyap and Vidushi Kumar

{Score Parth-1 and Vidushi-6}


CHAPTER: 3 THE REVENGE

"Samjhti kya hai apne aap ko. I am her puppet? Dekh loonga. You'll regret this. I'll make you regret this Vidushi." He clenched his fists whispering to himself as he recalled all the incidents of last night enraging him seeing Randhir and Jiggy laugh at him like that when in the past they always took him seriously. No one ever dare to even raise a finger at him and now he has become a butt of joke in front of his roommates. He quickly decided to return the favour to Vidushi and humiliate her for ridiculing him before people who took him seriously.

He looked for her everywhere and found her in the Mechanical Lab teaching First year student something and yelling at them "You idiots. Pichle adhe ghante se me tum thick skulled morons ko samjha ne ki koshish kar rahi hoon aur tum log ho he aise Mand buddhi ke kuch samaj hi nahi ata tum logo ko. Bas ab akhri baar hai. Iske baad internet se sikh lena jo nahi samaj aye." Parth thought this was the perfect time to execute his plan and humiliate Vidushi in front of her students. He went behind her and pulled her in his arms in front of those juniors who were staring with half mouth opened at their TAs being so openly affectionate in front of them while before they used to snap at each other. "Hey Baby kya kar rahi ho?"asked Parth at the same time he held Vidushi from the back, in a fake romantic tone surprising Vidushi who just looked shocked as hell seeing Parth behave like this really romantic hero from a cheesy Romantic Comedy. "Kuch n...kuch nahi wo mein in duffers ko compound engine ke parts sikha rahi thi. Tumhe kuch chahye?" asked Vidushi stuttering and not at all believing Parth playing along and indulging her demand of playing the role of a devoted Boyfriend. "You know I only want one thing and that is you. So jaldi jaldi kaam khatam karo aur mujhe canteen me milo. Okay I will be waiting" saying this Parth kissed Vidushi on both those cheeks softly and left an uncertain Vidushi chewing her lips and figuring out what the hell just happened?

{Parth-2 and Vidushi-6}

As soon as Vidushi stepped in canteen she was in shock seeing Parth waiting for her by a beautifully decorated table with a candle lit in the centre and a red rose in his hand which he gave her saying so loudly almost shouting so that everyone in the range of kilometres could hear him saying "Tumarhe liye jaanu. Please accept this small token of appreciation from me Vidushi Kumar." This embarrassed Vidushi who glared at every one staring at them as if threatening them to look away and mind their own business. {Parth-3 and Vidushi-6} "Ye sab kya hai Parth? Candle light woh bhi itni subah subah?"asked Vidushi in a incredulous tone as if she has never seen anything more ridiculous then this in her life. "Kya hua sweet cheeks? Pasand nahi aya. Itni subah mein bhi tum itni glow karti ho ke akla Sun bhi tumhare samne fikka lag raha hai to mujhe ye candle lagaani padi. You glow the brightest of all the celestial bodies Darling that it fades away anything or anyone in front of you" said Parth in the most sugery role anyone can manage but not help get diabetes making all the girls in canteen coo and awww which all the guys made hooting and puking noise. {Parth-4 and Vidushi6} Parth pulled out a chair for Vidushi and made her sit while he went away to fetch their order. When he back with their food, he asked Vidushi "Vidushi mujhe khilaao na? Tumne muhje kal tumhe khilane ko kaha to ek aache boy friend meine bhi to tumhe khilaya thana to ab tumhari bari hai ek tum bhi mujhe ek achi girlfriend ki tarah khilao" to which Vidushi gave him a dead look not registering in her mind what Parth asked of her. She stared at him for few moments conforming in her mind what just happened and saw him nodding and giving her expecting looks to which she just sighed in defeat and took a piece of sandwich in her hand to feed him. Parth bit on Vidushi's finger when she went ahead to feed him making her squeal grabbing everyone's amused looks while she just glared at him puzzled as to what brought this sudden change in his behaviour. "Okay ab meri baari. Ab mein tumhe khilaunga" saying this Parth grabbed another piece of sandwich and forcefully made Vidushi eat. When she protested he said "Bas itna hi sweetie? Ek to pehle se tum itni dubli patli ho aur abhi tum diet karogi to kaise chalega? Now be a good girl and open your mouth." {Parth-5 and Vidushi-6}

They eat the rest of their food like that with Vidushi feeding Parth and vice-e-versa like a five year old while everyone gave him disgusting looks for their obvious PDA. After they finished their meal they left the canteen and Vidushi was about to leave when Parth tugged on her wrist and brought her near him and said "Vidushi tum kuch bhul rahi ho" to which she gave him a puzzled look and asked "Kya?" "Meine abhi tak apni medicines nahi li hai" said Parth in a serious tone to which Vidushi yelled at him "What the hell Parth? Tum apni health mein itne la parvah keise ho sakte ho jab kit tum sabse responsible insan ho jisi mein janti hu. Ab tumhe panch saal ke bache ki tarah zabardasti medicine kihlani pade gi kya?" "Ha to karo na zabardasti. Meine kab mana kiya. Infact mein to chahta hu ke tum mujhe kal ki tarah mujhe par chad kar nipple waali bottle se dawai khilao. I insist" said Parth pulling Vidushi closer to him handing her medicines in her hand. Vidushi kept on staring at his face thinking she has done the unthinkable and made Parth lost his marbles. She just made him open his mouth and tilted the bottle when Parth said "Hmmm...Itna mazza bhi nahi aaya. Par chalo beggers can't be choosers. Maybe next time." Parth just winked at Vidushi leaving her flabbergasted at his odd and unpredictable behaviour {Parth-6 and Vidushi-6}

That evening Vidushi was sitting at her table and staring at her reflection in the mirror when her heart just leapt out her rib cage when she saw Parth next to her in the reflection. "You" gasped Vidushi seeing Parth adorning a furious expression on his face and asked "Tum yahan kay kar rahe ho. Sanyukta ya Kuatuki kabhi bhi aa sakte hai. Tum jao yahan se." Vidushi went ahead to push Parth toward the window with great effort when he just flicked off her hand from his chest and said "Kya hua Vidushi? Tum dar kyun rahi ho? Akhir mein tumhara boy friend hu na. Ye to mara haq he na. After all you are mine. Aren't you?" His terminology made Vidushi shiver. Parth was slowly, smoothly turning her round to face him. She had never fully appreciated how stronger than a woman a man could be until Parth, impatient of her unresponsiveness, simply lifted her clear off the floor and spun her like a doll back to him. Barefoot she didn't even reach his shoulder and before he lowered her back down against his cotton shirt. Her breath caught in her throat, her nostrils flaring at the male scent of him, clean, citrus, and hot. For a timeless moment her senses spun wildly, her lashes dipping as she was flooded by dizzy discomfiture.

"Meri taraf dekho Vidushi" His accented voice could sound like sandpaper on silk. "Please muhje jaane do"she mumbled in a rush as she relocated her tongue. She might as well not have spoken. Long fingers tilted up her chin and lingered there as she was involuntarily ensnared by his blazing black eyes. And she knew as clearly as though he had spoken that the seething tension of the morning's events and his subsequent furious dissatisfaction had all been temporarily pushed on a back burner. Far more basic urges were driving Parth now; a desire to vent all that pent-up tension in a fashion which she suddenly sensed would come as naturally to him as breathing. Her skin prickled with a depth of awareness she would not have believed possible. The vibrations in the atmosphere were explosive. "Parth..." Her own voice emerged jerkily and she wanted to back off fast but her feet were somehow welded to carpet. "I want..." suddenly her tongue felt too large for her mouth. "More?" With devastating abruptness but immense cool, Parth released her and angled a sizzling smile down at her. "Next time when you want me to act your LOVING boyfriend think about this Cup cake" he advised softly. She would have found a blow less degrading than that insolent conclusion. As she heard her hostel window snap quietly shut in his wake, Vidushi went limp, her pallor pronounced. She had challenged him, angered him. She was shattered.

{Parth- 7 and Vidushi-6}


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First of all this chapter is dedicated al my friends n co author on this collab MOONY or Chandni and BURN THE ASH aka Ash...also Ayesha, Antu, Annie, Manu, Rashi, Riya Aimy, Pari , Jiya and everyone else who reads, likes or comments on my ff so thank you all and I love you all. I love to hear from you guys whether it's appreciation or criticism so please do write to me and as usual don't forget to hit like and comment😃

Also I want you all to know that this is my first ever attempt to write in Hindi so Pardon me if I wrote something wrong n bear with me!!I hope I lived up to all the expectations you guys have from this collab n I didn't let Chandni and Ash down!!!So comment n like to let me know how I did😊😊😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
#60
Pls change the topic title to chp 3 updated😊

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