*Updted* Vidarth FF:Indecent Proposal (Collab) chapter 11(pg 31) - Page 10

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Posted: 11 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: Moony87

AWESOMEEE.. Saale clean bold kar diya tune.. Ab tere saath kon match up karega re.. Tu Aur Shreya hai nai! Hot scenes ke queens!! Main toh bichari poetry princess hunπŸ˜†

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Poor Vidushi yaaar.. Damn, she has a good intention and what she is getting is a recipe of royal heartbreak 😭 Don't worry. Next update Parth ko taste milega uski mirchi ka! Shayad use slap bhi khana pade?
Jiggy was hillarious.. πŸ˜†πŸ˜†..Even Randhir.. πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† I had fun writing that.

  • Terminator.. πŸ˜†πŸ˜†.. You used my terminology.. Izzat badhaa di yaar..😳😳😳 Tu comedy ki Queen hai. Ayee says I need to work on my comedy. You and Ayee are my comedy gurus!

Can i Kill PARTH.. That's downright cheap.. 😑😑😑.. SAnyuktaa sanyuktaa Sanyuktaaa... Saale khud to civil behave karle ... baad mein Randhir ko gyaan dena.. 😑😑😑 Don't kill him. Vidu ka kya hoga?Hot scenes kaise aige!

Damn he knows Vidushi loves him.. obviously.. JERK 😑😑😑 He actually thinks she has a big crush. Love is a deep feeling and he can't assume something so big yet.

The fake PDA.. Can i strangle him.. 😑😑😑 It was necessary. They were being watched.

Update next part ASAP... plzzz.. Now to m more determined.. Saale ko naani na yaad dilaai to I'll change my username.. 🀣 Tu shant dimaag se sooch le...

He doesn't wanna beg.. I'll make him crawl and beg.. 😑😑😑 Ek number ka akdu hai, Be careful. Use Vids ke samne abhi helpless maat bana. Later uski baand baja

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Posted: 11 years ago
#92
oh my god Ash that was hilarious n romantic too...u included excerpts of mine n Chandni's writing so i m glad the readers getting continuation with the story...u compared my Parth with that Kuastuki?I forgive u for doing that by giving a lovely update...I m waiting for the next part eagerly so update asap😊😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#93
Well this is going to be fun...vidushi wanted 30 days and now Parth has to extend it...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#94
" I'm sorry if Main Aur Vidu Tujhse Aur Sanyukta se jyada mature hai " *Vidu..Aha!!* ⭐️
""What do you mean Randhir?" Parth's jaw clenched." *He got irritated when Randhir said that they will enjoy it as long as it lasts.Whats cooking..??*πŸ˜‰
" Vidushi toh koi sati savitri nahi hai ki tumhare hypocrite pravachan ko zyada der tak sun paye" - *Exactly my POV.*πŸ˜ƒ
"Pyaar toh woh karti hai. Aur agar nahi bhi karti toh 2 mahine ke andar karegi" *Arrey waah..!! Now I'm waiting to see him falling in Love with her w/in a month!!*πŸ˜†
"Aur agar main aur Vidushi 2 mahine se jyada ek sath rahe toh hamare 2 MONTH anniversary pe cake ka kharcha tum karoge" *Did he say that..??*😲
"'How do I ask her...how the hell do I ask Vidushi for a bloody extenstion of our fake relationship without begging?" *W/o begging..??🀣 Bechara*

Okay now,tell me from where do you get such bloody PDAs..?? Actually I enjoyed itπŸ˜›..Indirect kiss and all..πŸ˜‰
Whohaa..I hope she doesn't accept "his rules". Its the 4th day and I'm sure she is already fed up of his idiotic PDAs. I hope she doesn't give an extension. I want Parth to lose this..!!! *Grinning*
No comments on Sanyukta.!!
Edit:Did I day that I loved it. It was perfect!!<3

Edited by --aimy-- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#95
Hey ash!!...that was an awesome updateπŸ‘πŸ‘...a perfect mind refreshment at the end of a long day...
Fully enjoying the ongoing vicissitudes of the series...if moony's ink sketches vids concern and shreya's ink potray the attitude of parth then your pen is the connecting link between their feelings...

Aww vids in pain...😭😭
Parth is really a buddhu ram😑...sab kuch samajhta h ek vids ki feeling ko chodke...machine k sath zindgi bitake machine ban gya h...does the hormone for love dried up in him...all set to violet the law ''opposite attracts''

Yeh vids...and her resolution ...ekdam ''why do boys have all the fun'' wali feeling aa gyi...πŸ˜†
Yo girl.!!! ...show him the girl power...and the chipko movement wali dialogue...is killing me yaarπŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›

HeheheπŸ˜†πŸ˜ƒ...jiggy the man good for giggle is making fun of him...bechare ke achhe din to gye...aur ye randhir...entertainment ka pura intzaam wo bhi free of cost...well 50 percent credit for inducing the chipko movement goes to randhir..πŸ˜‰

And vidushi kumar is back to her incarnation...uff her curt replies ...just loved the beer dialogue...looks like parth have to work harder😊😊


Amazing update...
Love
Suprabha...

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Posted: 11 years ago
#96
Super update next part update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#97
its just wow ash
superb
finally randhir playing a cupid role b/w vidarth
even though it was a challenge made by randhir we can say he is making way for vidarth
just continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#98
One extra long comment coming up... just because you mentioned me in the starting note πŸ˜†

"Thoughts were rushing past her mind at a blinding pace, mixing together, one indistinguishable from the other." Beautiful... beautiful words, beautifully pulled together... just plain beautiful!

"Enough to make her cry, slyly hiding her tears in her pillows. Enough to embarrass her and reduce her into nothing." 😭😭😭😭 it's not even been two minutes into the story and you already have me in tears... damn you and your amazing writing skills!!! i have this really sad addiction to your writing... it's like the more intense and emotional and dark it gets, the more i crave to read more... that's literally what it has become now... a CRAVING... my heart breaks seeing (reading... whatever it is) Vidushi like this, but damn I love it so much at the same time!! Ugh, I'm a confused bundle of emotions waiting to explode!!

"She had done it to herself." I love how your portrayal of Vidushi is so real and relateable because I'm sure everyone has gone through a moment in their life when they've thought this... having characters that you can see yourself in really intensifies the whole story because it makes everything seem less fictitious and more... real, for a lack of a better word.

"She had poked a 'sleeping dragon'." Love the comparison here... is this an actual saying or did you come up with it yourself because it's very clever... expect Parth isn't really a sleeping dragon now is he, he's more like a dragon who never sleeps.

"Was she overstepping the boundaries he so clearly wanted to be unconquered?" Wooaaah, that is some damn fine language right there... overstepping boundaries... unconquered... i think i'm going to re-read all your fics before my English exam so I can improve my vocabulary πŸ˜†

SIDE NOTE - Do you read a lot of books? Because apparently people who read a lot tend to be really good writers too... I just want to know how you're so good at this stuff.

"Loving him too much is the crime" Yeah I know that feeling too... I like the vulnerability she's shown up until now... She walks around all day as if she doesn't have a care in the world, but she's really just lonely inside and needs someone to give her the attention that she craves. But sadly, people are so blinded by the facade she puts on that they fail to see the sad, broken girl inside. I guess this is why Vidushi is my favourite character in SH. Not everyone can be perfect all the time, and she's the most realistic character out of the bunch. She's only human, and she makes mistakes, but at the end of the day she, like all other human beings, just needs someone there to hold her and tell her it's all OK.

*takes a bow after that amazing yet pointless speech*

"She recalled the look in his eyes when she had sat on his chest and made him eat his meds." πŸ˜† hehehe that was a good scene yaar... really loved it

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that look when I told him I won't rape him or eat him up" 🀣🀣 hahahahhaha that was absolutely hilarious, i think i was more shocked than Parth was at the fact that she actually said that... and don't even get me started on the nipple bottle and medicines scene... 🀣🀣

"Un juniors aur pure college ke samne itna PDA kardiya" ☺️☺️ I'm still gushing over all that PDA and Vidarth cuteness...

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Abhi main 360 degree turn lungi aur tum hi chipkoo movement initiate karoge" YESSS finally Vidushi is taking a stand for herself and making Parth come to her instead of running after him!! So wish this happens on the show also yaar. Your slap wala idea was brilliant πŸ˜†

"Parth Bhai dawa le li? " 🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣 Still dying of laughter!! "Aaj ye banda angry young man se roadside Romeo ban gaya tha." LOVE RANDHIR!! He speaks the truth... I'd like to see Parth get himself out of this one... Also, when exactly are they planning on telling the gang that they're a couple now?

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I'm sorry if Main Aur Vidu Tujhse Aur Sanyukta se jyada mature hai" Wait, so the team already know about Vidarth??? and he called her Vidu... aww that's so cute... and he refers to them as a couple also, defending them in front of Randhir... I'm liking this Parth a lot more than angry-young-man wala Parth.

Woah Randhir and Parth fight was intense man.. I can't even comment on anything. "
Sweet Vidushi dreams." Hehehe Randhir's teasing is never ending, but we all know it's true.

"She will break up with you under a month." Hold up, when did evil Randhir come out? I take back everything I said about him before 😑

"Aur agar main aur Vidushi breakup nahi karte within a month?" I see a bet coming on... please tell me it's a bet and Parth will date Vidushi for longer than a month to prove a point to Randhir... and he'll be extra romantic with her to show Randhir that they're the perfect couple... *fingers crossed*


"Agar Vidushi ne tumhe 2 mahine tak tolerate kiya toh tu jita." YES!!! A bet it is then :D This story just got a whole lot more interesting with this new addition.

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Pyaar toh woh karti hai." OK now I'm hating Parth... he says with such confidence that she loves him, but if he so clearly knows that then why is he treating her like crap? These next two months are going to be damn eventful. I want Vidushi to find out about this bet between Randhir and Parth and then manipulate the situation so that Parth falls in love with her, but she's really playing with him... just to let him know what it feels like. But obviously they need to get together in the end.

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Sunlight bhi aa gaya mock karne!" hahahah she is clearly not a morning person."Full too Intese Torture to Everyone" what even 🀣🀣🀣 nice choice of words there!

"Is chai ke toh sirf 2 versions hai. Antartica ya Volcano." Love the added touch of humor there... Volcano and Antarctica πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

'Shit...Terminator ki re-entry...No...it's Kaustuki, Sanyukta fevicol fangirl!' 🀣🀣 TERMINATOR IS BACK!!! I absolutely love all your references... Sanyukta fevicol fangirl is absolutely spot on!!!

"Purposely moving as close as possible to her." ohhh no, my vidarth senses are starting to heat up rapidly... damn do you have to be so descriptive with the jean clad leg and bare skin explanation... you have no idea how breathless i get when reading all this kind of stuff on Vidarth.

HE KISSED HER??? Ok I've officially died and gone to heaven. All this Vidarth romance is messing with my mind yaar!!

"He brought the cup back to his own lips and took a sip." This is so damn romantic, and so damn hot! It's almost more intimate than them actually kissing each other. And this whole time Parth is concentrating on how to ask her for an extension. He's got this beautiful girl in front of him, who he was just kissing a few seconds back, and he's thinking of that!!

Amazing chapter Ash... Loved all the emotional parts with Vidushi in them... and the final parts with all the Vidarth romance... Overall it was spectacular. Now I'm waiting for you next update so jaldi karo na please.

- Rae
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Posted: 11 years ago
#99
Wow, Wow and Wow!
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All three of you are amazing storytellers. ⭐️⭐️ What finesse! 😲😲
I'm gonna have to review all chapters at once, because I read it at lightning speed. It was that good.

I must say, you have etched your characters beautifully- with oodles of oomph and a dash of humour.πŸ‘πŸ‘ You have preserved the characterisation of Vidushi, Parth, Jiggy, Randhir etc and added your own twist to their lives.

Love how you add zingers like- 'FITE ka Sunny Deol', 'The Spiderman Song', and many more. It makes the story so much more believable because you can actually imagine these characters saying and doing things like that πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

You have shown progression in both Parth and Vidushi's characters- SH writers, take note. Approve
The way Vidushi blushes at Parth's advances, finally exposing her vulnerable side. Vidushi doesn't blush much, and she's cute when she does
. Parth and the whole candlelight dinner, embarrassing her in front of juniors πŸ˜†πŸ˜‰
I must say, I enjoyed Parth blushing even more, 'cause I like domineering girls, LOL. 😳 Vidushi sitting on him 🀣ROFL I love that Vidushi is the dominatrix in their relationship and Parth is the scandalized beau.

Randhir's 2 month challenge means that Parth is also in for the short term. I just hope he doesn't end up hurting Vidu too much. Loved how she was affected by his actions in the last chapter. Want to see the same kind of butterflies from Parth's side. And may I ask for a side dish of jealousy, too? Embarrassed

SH CVs may have forgotten the 30 day challenge, and are focusing on the solar panel/water deprived village challenge, but all of you are more than making up for it. The way this story meanders through the whole gamut of emotions- love, anger, embarrassment, guilt, selflessness, physical attraction, confusion is simply WOW!


SIMPLY LOVE THE STORY!! And now that I've read it, I'm hungry for updates. I want more! (Vidushi Style)

Take a bow. β­οΈπŸ‘
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thanks for reading this labour of love (and hate)
I want to dedicate this to
Antu as a late birthday gift.
Aimy for the support
Annie for being my crazy sister from another mister
Rae for her helpful, inspiring reviews
My co writers for helpin me whenever I had doubts...
And my laptop. I love you!!!


Chapter 5: Mind games and Malfunctions.

Vidushi almost died out of utter shock when he moved closer, pressing his lips to her cheek.
A kiss. A soft, gentle kiss.
His stubble scratched her like his words usually did, making up for the pleasurable sensations that were spreading across her being like a heatwave.
Pleasure and Pain.
Intuition told her that he was equally skilled at both.
A shiver travelled down her spine.
His lips moved to the corner of her lips and she felt him smirk against her skin.
'Isne toh sach mein Chipko movement initiate kardiya...Shit! Kahi iska canteen mein adult movie banane ka plan hai kya?' Vidushi moved her face away from him.
She could feel the heat on her cheeks, her hands and every part of her body.
Not good.
She expected some more taunts about her shamelessness and her wanton nature as usual. More smirks and glares.
She did not expect the words that escaped his lips.
"We are going on a date jaan. After we are done with those pesky juniors, we can have some alone time." He winked at her.
Winked.
Winked?
She gulped.
"Who are you and what have you done with m...Parth?" She could almost kick herself for the slip of tongue. My Parth?
"Are? What's wrong with you baby? I'm your Parth only! Itni uncertainity se kyun bol rahi ho? Bas itna samjho ki Aaj se I'm going to be the boyfriend of your dreams." Parth gave her what he hoped was a seductive smile.
The startled look on her face, her parted lips and big eyes told him he was looking like a creep.
'Shit...I don't want to scare her off...Damage control karna padega!' Parth thought frantically 'Pura plan chaupat ho jaega!'
"PKC ki lecture hai...Main...main.." she got up, stammering and heart beating wildly.
"Ruko, I'm coming with you. Sath baithenge" He put his arm around her shoulder.
She tried to escape but he tightened the grip.
"People will be watching us" she whispered, hoping his concern for his image would get the better of his newfound creepy behavior.
"So what? Let them watch. Like I said, tum meri ho. It's better if they all know it." He lead her to PKC's class.
"Parth?" Sanyukta called out.
He felt Vidushi stiffen under his grip and he loosened it, letting her go. She dashed away from him, sitting down at one of the back benches.
'Back hun? Even better for my plan. Ise chodunga nahi aaj. Lovey Dovey BF chahiye tha na?' He smirked inwardly
"Parth?" Sanyukta sounded impatient.
He turned around to see her holding a book.
"Randhir ko de do." she said in a controlled voice.
"Acha..okay.." Parth mummbled.
He himself was not exactly happy with Sanyukta and Randhir.
One wanted to use him as a postal service and the other was challenging him to die a slow death...2 months with Vidushi was going to kill him.
Unless he killed her first.
Well, if he had to suffer, he'd drag her down with him. After all, she was the one who had told him to fake being her boyfriend.
"Parth?" Sanyukta deposited the book in his hands and returned to her bench.
"Ye lo. Special delivery." Parth gave RD a glare and slammed the book on his bench.
"Thanks...tum itna acha kaam kar rahe ho...Mein toh hamari shaart definitely jitne wala hun" Randhir smirked.
"Matlab?" Parth glared at him.
"Khud dekhlo!" Randhir smirked, looking back
Parth followed Randhir's lead.
Vidushi was talking to one of Yoyo's Chamchas.
With a very wide smile.
"Prepare to be dumped Kashyup. It's already began." Randhir grinned.
Parth stormed off angrily, his hands shaking with anger.
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Vidushi's face muscles were hurting from all the smiling.
Frankly, what she wanted to do was yell in frustration and tell the idiot in front of her what she really thought.
"Matlab aap seriously...Modeling karni chahiye!" The chamcha had a shit-eating grin on his face.
" Abko toh Magazines ke cover pe hona chaiye"
"Ohh...Main chalta hun..Waise batana bhool gaya..Looking very hot" the chamcha winked at her before he finally left her to her own thoughts.
She put her head down on the bench in frustration.
'What the hell? Kya ho raha hai ye? Pehle Parth ka itna chipakna aur random logon ka flirt karna...Shayad tu sapna dekh rahi hai...'
Suddenly, she felt something touch her shoulder.
She took her head off the table only to look into Parth's face. He had the most scary grin she had ever seen.
'Shit...Tu toh gae ab kaam se.' she bit her lower lip nervously.
Parth's gaze moved to her lips.
The smirk widened.
She sat frozen in her anxiety as he sat down beside her.
He opened his mouth to say something but PKC had already entered.
Vidushi almost sighed in reflief as his laser eyes focused on his book and not on her.
PKC droned on and on.
'PKC...Pakau Kabbad CHAUDHARI...chalo...Atleast mujhe Parth ki killer looks se chootkara mila.' Vidushi thanked nobody in particular.
Parth watched her mechanically take down the notes and frowned.
Smirking, he scribbled his words onto paper and slipped the note into her book.
Vidushi's heart almost stopped beating when she read his neatly printed words.
'Stop biting that lip. It makes me want to do things.'
He had even added a little winky face.
'SHUT UP idiot! It's a game...he is playing with your head!' she scolded herself.
But she couldn't deny the fact that those words did funny things to her insides.
And her face.
She tore the note into tiny, unreadable pieces and threw it into her bag.
Parth's cellphone vibrated.
It was a message from Yoyo:
Ladki ko patana hai toh thodi bahut tareef karo...Jaise mein apne Kaustu...
Parth stopped reading.
What the actual...?
He looked up to see Yoyo grin at RD.
What was going on.
His cellphone Vibrated again.
Randhir: Chaal, tune meri book itni pyaar se wapis ki, toh maine tere liye love guru se free help service manga. You need all the help you can get.
Fair chance dena chahta hun.

Parth shoved the phone into his bag.
He reached out and gently held Vidushi's left hand in his right hand.
She didn't move.
'Shit...when did she suddenly get this immunity?' Parth gently stroked her skin of her hand with his thumb, drawing slow circles on her skin.
She shivered but kept writing.
'Shit' Parth cursed. 'Jaldi kuch Karna Padega.'
He let her hand go and she immediately shifted closer against the wall and away from him.
Parth moved closer to her and she looked up to give him her signature 'what the hell look'
"Itna chipakna jarori hai?' she hissed.
"Ofcourse...Meri itni hot girlfriend hai..Main nahi chipkunga toh koi aur chipkega...And I can't let that happen can I?" he growled in her ear.
"Parth dekho..ye fake..fake ..." she began but he put a finger on her half open lips.
"Sorry baby..Meri acting bahoot realistic hai..I don't do anything half way. Isliye...main genuinely tumhe apni girlfriend ki taraah treat kar raha hun. Aaj date hai yyad hai na? We will leave immediatly after the junior class. Excuses banane ka time hi nahi dunga" he kissed her ear.
She shivered and nodded.
Parth smirked "Good girl Vidushi...Aise hi obey karti raho..I swear tum zyada" he whispered into her ear "hot lagti ho...Itni hot ki..." he let his words trail off
She blushed red hot at the implied meaning.
'Ye toh...ye toh mujse bhi bada gutter mind nikla!!' she was screaming inside her head.
The bell rang.
Parth got up quickly and winked at her "Lab mein milte hai. Dressup karne ki jaroorat nahi hai..aise hi hot lagti ho"
He left her, sitting there in a daze.
She pinched herself hard.
"Shit!" she yelped.
It was a damn nightmare.
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Parth banged his fist on the table.
Damn that girl!
Where the hell was she?
She hadn't turned up for the bloody junior teaching job.
"Dress up kar rahi hogi. Damn. Kahan phass gaya toh...Seduce karna tha na...Ab bajegi teri band.!" he spoke under his breath.
Where in the name of god was she?
He picked up his stuff and got ready to walk out.
'Dekhlunga ise! How dare she ditch me! It's not like I'm dying to be with her!" he mummbled.
He was so engrossed in his own thoughts that he didn't see the hoodie clad girl in front of him
He collided against her, sending her lithe body to the floor.
" I'm sorry" he mummbled, holding out his hand to help her up.
She picked herself up without his help.
Her hoodie had slid off her head, revealing two low ponytails. An a very very familiar face.
His breath caught in his throat.
He had never seen her like this.
"Vidushi? Ye kya hulia bana liya hai?" he gawked at her in shock.
"What hulia? This is the real me. No make up. No dressy fancy clothes."
No wonder he had not recognised her instantly.
The makeup and the short clothes was what he thought of when he thought of Vidushi.
And now, she stood before him wearing...
He looked at her carefully from head to toe.
Flats and loose yoga pants with a too big hoodie and pigtails?
She did look absolutely adorable though.
Where the **** did that thought come from?
"Oy pervert! My eyes are here!!" she poked him in the chest.
"I'm the pervert huh?" he smirked.
Grabbing the hand pokiing him, he pulled her flat against his chest and caged her body with his hands around her slim waist.
"Wha...what are you doing?" his hand was slipping into her hoody and tracing her bare back.
"Being the pervert..." he ran a finger down her spine.
"I'll scream. Let me go." she hissed.
"One condition." he stroked her side
"No conditions..." she slid her own hands into his T-shirt, tracing his abs.
He let go of her immediately, not wanting her to know what she was doing to him.
"What the hell were you doing Vidushi!?" he demanded.
"Touching you like you were touching me.." she smirked.
He decided it was safest to change the topic.
"Kahan thi tum? Juniors ki lab mein kyun nahi ahi thi?" he demanded.
"Tumse Matlab? I had an emergency to attend to. Kal se nahi hoga." she mummbled.
"Batake jati. Ek message karti toh kya tumhe takleef hoti?" he asked, bitterness coating his words.
"Phone check karlo!" she yelled.
He pulled his phone out.
1 unread message.
Vidushi: Wont be able 2 mke it 2 the junior lab 2day. Urgent work @ home. Had to go. Will be back soon. Maya maam knows.

"Shit..." Parth smacked his own forehead.
"Sorry bolo!" She crossed her arms over her chest.
"Sorry kyun?" he retorted.
"Acha...I'm going. Akele jana apne date par." she glared at him and turned around to leave.
"Ruko..I'm s...sorry " the words left his mouth.
She turned around with a smirk "For what exactly?" she narrowed her eyes.
"Dekho...Don't push me...I said sorry!" he glared at her.
"I don't want to go on a date with an angry person. It's no fun." she pouted.
"Bas Vidushi! Khelna hai na? I'll make the rules this time!" he roared.
"What rules? " She scoffed.
"My rules." he smirked.
"No way." She rolled her eyes.
"Are you scared of me Vidushi? Are you scared of me doing this" he pulled her close.
'Yes. You terrify me!' her senses yelled.
She forced herself to laugh "You and scary? You are like a kitten who thinks he's a tiger!"
"Hmm...I wonder.." he kissed her neck
"Wonder...No..you are too chicken for that..Itni himmat toh tumme hai nahi" he pulled away.
"Listen you..I can do anythinG alright? I'm not weak! " she hit his shoulder.
"Really..but You can't..." he goaded her.
"I can do it. I will do it." she declared.
"Without listening to what I want?" Parth raised an eyebrow.
"Yep." she popped the 'p' glaring at him.
"Okay. NOW you can't back out!" he pulled her into him again.
"Ew...I'm not doing 'it' with you!" she struggled.
He laughed.
"Don't worry...I'm not that cheap. I want 1 more month. Be my girlfriend for the next month too." he revealed.
"What?" she stood there stunned.
"You are brave. I got to give you that." Parth pulled away.
"This was not in the deal..." Vidushi mummbled, lookind down.
"You just made a new deal, sweetheart." Parth pulled her to a lab table.
"I got chinese for you. I heard you like it" he picked up a fork and feed her some noodles.
She chewed, vowing to kill Parth.
'But he got me noodles...I'm eating them after months..' she smiled as he fed her another fork of noodles.
Damn him and the noodles. Both were too hot to resist!
"Are they good?" he smiled at her.
"Try some. Best noodles ever!" she picked up the chopsticks and feed him.
"You know how to use chopsticks?" he looked at her in surprise.
"I'm a woman of many talents" she smirked.
"Like what..." he demanded playfully.
"Like finishing all the spring rolls without you noticing" she replied.
"Hey..!!" He looked at the container.
There were still a few left.
"I'm sorry.. I actually meant I'm talented at making a fool of Parth" she giggled.
"Acha..you want to know my talents?" he asked in a stern manner.
"I know them...Basketball, loyal friendship, capable captain, good human...But you know what...you suck at being a boyfriend." she whispered.
------------------------------------------------------------

Chandu , the ball is in your court now!
Pm me okay, I need to tell you a few things.
You and shreya both!!
Love ya!
Edited by Burn_the_Ashes - 11 years ago

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