*Updted* Vidarth FF:Indecent Proposal (Collab) chapter 11(pg 31) - Page 8

Originally posted by: dewcute

no need of clarification dear,bcoz the truth is you are truly amazing...,u are one of the amazing persons i ever met😊...,hmm,a qn. to ask,when will u update ur other works?😳

lol thank u n u r pretty amazing too...I will do it soon mayb by next week coz this week I have oral surgery term n it's hectic...wish me luck this week I will b performing my first extraction😊😊

Originally posted by: MDKRM

Whoa tht was soo cute not bad parthu poor vidu but dont worry sweety i know u will something soon to rise ur score

lol dear glad u liked the update n vids come back is upto Ash so stay tuned😊😊😊

wow

Whoohaa..!!! Arrey yaar...Moony ne kitni mushkil se Vidu ko upar laaya tha.😆
OMG-he kissed her infront of the juniors😲.
Candle light...break-fast..?? 😆
It was a nice update Shreya. Loved it.

Originally posted by: -SREE93-

wow

so parth settle all the scores with vidushi

it was an awesome updte

loved it so much

continue soon

thank u so much dear..I m glad u liked the update...just trying to keep up with the rapport 😊

Originally posted by: --aimy--

Whoohaa..!!! Arrey yaar...Moony ne kitni mushkil se Vidu ko upar laaya tha.😆
OMG-he kissed her infront of the juniors😲.
Candle light...break-fast..?? 😆
It was a nice update Shreya. Loved it.

Are aimy I had to even the playing field otherwise it would be boring...n I m glad u liked this so thank u for saying this 😊

Originally posted by: senasenapati

Hey...!! My stupid like button isnt working😡😡...but lots of likes from me😛😛

Must say...combination of three writers is just like savouring an ice cream with different flavours with every bite..😆😆

So after all hazmola bhara beizzati parth is all set to get his badla...😃😃

Oh teri!! Romance...direct juniors k samne...along with knwledge of machine the lesson of how to do romance is free !!..free!!...free!!

Isi bat pe ek small commentry...

Pichle match k score k bad mahaule kafi gambhir h...hamare behtareen khilaldi aur dream team k captain mr parth kashyap maidan(mech lab) pe utar chuke h...situation ka fyada uthakar oppo team(vidushi) ki aur age badte hue use bahon me khichne ki koshish...aur ye unhone maara serious mauke pe ek shandar romantic chauka...isi k sath audience(juniors) ke bich mach gyi h halchal jo is match ka luft utha rahe h...hairan oppo team ko sochne ka mauka na dete hue ye ek bar phir se apni zabardast kiss se clean bawled kar dia...aur score kar lia h ek point...iss over k bad final score h vids 6 parth 2...

Loved how he teased her in front of juniors...hahaha😉😉

Oh my god!!...candle light breakfast...too hilarious...how did u think of it...giggling like hell😆😆

Dont know about natural glow...she must had been ablazed of anger...poor vids🥱😊

And lastly the cute ...sweet and dhamki bhara romance...luved it yr...enjoyed so much...wonderful update👏

Love

Suprabha...

Ps dont mind my blabbering...me is little pagal

Pls do pm me

hey suprabha...we don't mind blabbering at all coz we are all pagal too so no worries on that account n I m glad u liked the update... I had this sudden idea of candl light breakfast last evening which somehow fitted the occasion n I m glad u liked that ..will surely pm u next time I update..

Originally posted by: --aimy--

Whoohaa..!!! Arrey yaar...Moony ne kitni mushkil se Vidu ko upar laaya tha.😆
OMG-he kissed her infront of the juniors😲.
Candle light...break-fast..?? 😆
It was a nice update Shreya. Loved it.