-OS on AR by dik..!! updated 13/04/2015 pmz later

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nilusoni

@nilusoni

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#91

thats awesome loved it

ridhima is all scared of water and armaan champ in it

rohan is sweet

lovely os

thanx for pm

plz pm me for your other work

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palak sharma

@lashyyy

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#92

Originally posted by: little_angle

bunnyyy love u giril for inda wada wala coment.. :-**
i mised u guys alot.. pr kya krun ye pprr..
aww thank u soo much bunny.. even freindship main no thank u.. bt still say it.. coz tre ko mera os itna psnd aya..

armaan hot sexy ni hoga fir or kon hoga.. :-P
armaan was nt flirting.. vo baki ldkion ko sikha raha tha...

family wala part maine likhna start kia tb apne ap agya dimag main pehle maine sirf AR scene hi imagine kie hue the..

armaan is superman.. use sb pta tha...

sachi sachii u made my day wuth ur coment...
i was in tnsn regading my exam to aise hi i thought mail chek krti hn thoda tm pas ke lie.. vahan pr notification tha of my os.. so i just opend it n tra coment pdhke i was soo happy n mera adha tnsn hurr hogya,...

profesional writer.. *blush**blush**blush*

love u bunny..
tight hugg..!!!🤗🤗
🤗

glad u love my comment or tei tension thodi kam hui
are don't take so much tension yaar chillax take a chill pill everything i mean ur going to rock in tge exam too

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Gavina

@Sugar_Cinnamon

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#93

Hey,

It was a really nice OS,

Loved Armaan and Rohan's bonding

and Riddhima could not seem to get Armaan

out of her mind.

After that, she decided to join swimming classes

and when Armaan first saw Riddhima,

he was mesmerized by her sight

Loved the part where Armaan tries to

get Riddhima familiar with water

And the confession part in water was really nice

At last, they finally got married,

Loved this OS,

It had a unique concept

Thanks for the PM

Keep writing,

Take care.😊

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Aisha Akhter

@Ruppkotha

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#94

Is Os ka siggie dekhte hi mujhe yaad aya

Aj blue hai pani pani pani pani
Aur din bhi sunny sunny sunny sunny
Aja on the beach yaar photo meri khich phuti kismaat hogi teri
agar tune baat na mani

Then ate hai storry me

So shuruat se main soch rhi thi where is Our own AR
but mil hi nhi rahi thi
then hero ki entry hui as swim coach
The way he enter usse yaad aya

Tune mari entriyaan
dil me baji ghantiyaan

then hroin bhi agayi
Sweet si pyari si hero ki diwani
Then use bhi swiming join karni hai
Jabki usko pani se darr lagti hai
uski haal se yaad aya

Tere naam se jee loon
Tere naam se marr jaaun
Teri jaan ke sadke mein kuchh aaisa kar jaaun
Tune kya kar dala marr gayi main mitt gayi main
Ho ri ha ha ri ho gayi main
Teri deewani deewani
Teri deewani deewani

Armaan bhi pehli nazar me lattuuu
Wah wah
Well then love the way armaan make her learn swiming
Pata hai i love to be in water but mujhe swimming nhi ati

& then riddhima ki harkatoon se to Armaan ki bhi nind hurrr
Then ridz finally speaks to her bhabi

then riddhima ka wo comedy circus wala comment was too funnyy

then armaan invite her
well it was just awesome
Their confession
it was just tooo goooddd
loved it
Then their wedding night
tooo awesome yaaarrr
i just loved it
unka wo last bit romance se yaad aya

Boond boond karke mujhe main girna tera
Aur mujh main mujhse jada hona tera
Bhiga bhigasa mujhko tann tera lage
Aaja tujhko pooloon mann mera kahe..
Mein na bacha mujh main thodasa bhi
Dekh tu na bacha tujh mein bhi
Jal ne kaga garam saanson main
Tu pighal ne laga mujh mein hi

excelent os diks
loved it whole
Aise hi likhte reh
love u :*
Tc

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panamaa

@panamaa

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#95

wow dil... u comeback with a bang

loved the story dil

superb

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Delusional Minx

@Delusional_Minx

Stunner

+ 36

Posted: 10 years ago

#96

beautiful OS dear

loved it

superb!!

do continu

thanks for pm

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GOOGLU

@GOOGLU

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#97

Its awsm os dear..
Love the way U expressed each n every thing..
Thnx alot for pm..
Keep rocking

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Nikki

@desire_nikki

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#98

Both the os were super awsumm..!!

Sorry for not commenting before..!!

But really they were superb..!!

Loved it..!!

Do write more and pm me..!

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Dik

@Dik..

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#99

Originally posted by: nilusoni
thats awesome loved it
ridhima is all scared of water and armaan champ in it
rohan is sweet
lovely os
thanx for pm
plz pm me for your other work

thank u dear..
okie i will..!!!

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Dik

@Dik..

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#100

Originally posted by: palakajenian
glad u love my comment or tei tension thodi kam hui
are don't take so much tension yaar chillax take a chill pill everything i mean ur going to rock in tge exam too

yo yo.. tnsn khalas..
pr tnsn is part of examzzz.
yoo baby❤️