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Posted: 11 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: -Ms.Rocker-

I SUCK AT WRITING. BELIEVE ME.
I might have a good vocab but I suck at describing. :/ I can write angst well though, the fiendish person I am. 🤣

I actually loved that word so couldn't stop myself from using it! :P

That reminds me.. Did you unres? :P



*glaring at my good for nothing laptop* 😡😡
You know that thing just stopped loading IF only! All other websites are opening, but not IF!!! XP Somehow I could access this on my PC, so am feeling a little relieved! *sighing*

I had typed out a reply to this comment, girl, but just as I clicked on 'Post Reply' the page stopped loading! XP

Hahahaha... Now getting to your self-deprecation, *choking your throat* You are crazy!! You are a goddamn AWESOME!! Better. Get. That. Into. Your. Pretty. Little. Head!! XD *hugging you damn tight*
You do have an awesome vocab, yes, but when it comes to describing you do it in your own style and I like it!! Your drabble like 'If only she knew' proved that! XP When you have good vocabulary, you don't need to describe with small basic words, which not only make stuff lengthier and too damn stretched, but also sometimes boring! XP

Hahahahaha... Feindish?! XD Aisa kya?? Then toh phir, me, Ashu and many others are also feindish!!! 🤣
Heeheee... After learning what 'idiosyncrasy' meant, I could relate that word to TBBT's Sheldon Cooper! 🤣 God, it describes him so well!!! 🤣

"That's my Spot!"

Yessshhh!!! I forgot to scrap you about it! I did it day before yesterday! 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: moonkmh

m not imaging sandhir or vidarth..hell i just cant put any face to my imagination. they are just two hot bodies..filled with desire n epitome of seduction..just loved it...too bold..too hot..n so well written. take a bow girl.


🤣 That's even better for me! At least there's one who isn't pestering me with questions of their identity! XP XP

Ufff... "two hot bodies... filled with desire n epitome of seduction" Haaye!! Badi flattering hain tu! 🤣😳

Oh damn!!! Gee... *blushing* Thanks, pal! 🤣 🤣 *giving you a flying kiss*
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Posted: 11 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: andy1245

too hot and amazing just love it 😊


Thanks, Tora babe! :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
#94
Plz update today
I will read tomorrow
Or else I will stalk you everywhere😈
* I am Crazy Mad *😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#95

Originally posted by: RisingPhoenix

Plz update today
I will read tomorrow
Or else I will stalk you everywhere😈
* I am Crazy Mad *😆


🤣 You are welcome to stalk me! 🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago
#96
WHAT A DREAM THAT WAS DAMN HOT AND SEXY LOVED THE SONG POOR GUY WICKEDLY DONE THANKS FOR THE PM.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#97
😳

Originally posted by: PhoenixRadar

# W A T E R

Then, his heart stopped beating. *Are?Maar Jaega!😆*

Yeh Jahaan.. Saara bhool kar..

She had pulled and discarded her slip, like it was nothing. And then he felt it. His blood rushing south. He had already lost feel in his hands, because of the incessant clenching. She took her slip off? Woah. SHE is...bold! Aur he is clenching his hand so much? Unhealthy hai! Action lena jaarori hai!😉


Her back was to him. He could see her dusky skin glistening at the spotlight, and the sorry excuse of a bra, forming a thin connection of lines, around her back and her shoulders. She is just tempting him na?

Jismo ke saaye tale,
Dheemi dheemi saansein chale.. Raat bhar..

Pushing her fingers through her raven hair and collecting some of it from the back of her head, she rolled her hips. Again.

What is with her and rolling hips? He huffed to himself, all the while enjoying the view he was being treated to. Hehe..enjoying and complaining!

Turning to her right, her hair now on her left side, but still in her hands, her face visible between her forearm and shoulder, she blew a kiss. She is being sadistic!!😆

His legs started to move.Lol. He can't control himself can he?😉


Pal do pal, Hum hain humsafar..
Hain abhi dono yahaan,
Hogi subah jaane kahaan kya khabar..

Twisting to the front and falling down gracefully in a fluid movement, she slowed herself down when her back was to fall and meet the wooden finished stage. Both her legs followed and came up, one of them bent, while the other was in pointe. Her hand came up to caress her folded leg, before reaching for something on the side of her flat, knee high boots. This was beautifully visual! 👏

Aaja zara, Khud ko mujhme samaa ja..

His ears perked up at the familiar sound of brushing metal, but he felt himself harden when he saw the flesh of dusky toned legs expose themselves. 😳

Khudko mujhme milaa jaa..
Jaane, kya hona hain kal..
Aa zara, qareeb se,
Jo pal mile naseeb se..

Gracefully, pulling out her boots, one by one, she threw to the side, just like she had discarded her slip. Pushing herself to the edge of the stage, she let her head hang.

Aaja zara, qareeb se,
Jo pal mile, naseeb se,
Jeele..

He felt himself jerk from his position to help her, when he stopped again, on seeing her hands bracing herself at the edge, as she rubbed her bare thighs together. A growl of appreciation escaped his throat without his knowledge.Fanning myself *It's getting hot in here (that song xD)*

Her eyebrows furrowed at the sudden interruption, but she didn't stop what she was doing. In fact, she jut her chin out more and closed her eyes, basking in the light, enjoying the sweet orange behind her eyelids. My eyes closed for a sec there. I love closing my eyes in sunlight to feel that warmth on my cheeks and the warmth of that orange colour. Beautiful imagery!

He breathed in deeply, when he saw her lying there, eyes closed, arms spread wide, and he bosom on full display. It was time to come out of the shadows, he smirked at the thought. HAH! About time! *Rubs hand together and smirks evilly!*

A frown marred her face, when a sudden shadow interrupted the play of orange behind her eyelids. Opening them, she gasped audibly to see a face peering down at hers.. with a smirk. Her eyes travelled upward, lower for him of course. A smirk of its own slipped into her face, as her eyes registered the bronze skin all lean and exposed. Hehe..I'm smirking wider? Super amazing, Both smirking.

Slight indentation of his abs could be seen marring his stomach, right above his navel that lay between his hip bones. Before he could see her blush, she turned to her side, her feet swaying back and forth, and her arms bracing her upper body at the edge, all the while pressing her flesh together, taunting him further. Oh...careful! She's playing with fire here...She might get burnt.

His eyes strayed to her bosom, covered by that black lace. A sudden urge to rip it off, made his teeth mildly grit themselves. Lingering right at the hollow of her throat, he went back to staring at her unabashedly.*smirks more* Ripping things off? hehe. I knew he was a wild one! *Shameless Boi!*

Pushing onto her knees, she stood straight, looking straight down into a pair of embers that seemed to be burning. He had his hands in his sweatpants' pockets. He was watching her. Her stomach curled again, a blush flowing through her body, wondering how long had he been watching. I blushed too. This was intense.


If it was possible, he could picture his knuckles turning whiter, when he saw her unzipping her skirt. He couldn't help but widen his eyes, when it fell off her hips like a stray piece of cloth. Her feet proceeded to kick it out of the way, his eyes following it all the way, till it slid and hit one of the wings of the stage.

He felt a finger under his chin, directing his face to turn to the other side, where he saw her sitting cross-legged, giving a glimpse of her black shorty shorts, and her eyes hooded. His eyes dropped down to her lips. Her bottom lip looked so pink. He wondered if it'd get darker if her kissed her. And hell! She was ****ing biting it. His thumb instantly reached out to pull it out from between her teeth.

Mine! *Ahhh!! The feralness of this thought..made me😳

He growled like wolf on the prowl, before swooping down to claim her lips. She tasted of apple and.. vinegar? He couldn't but moan as he licked her lips for that tangy taste of vinegar. Just like her! A chuckle escaped his mouth, which made her frown.

Pulling away, she frowned in askance.

What?!

Nothing. You taste like Vinegar, which is just like you..

Groaning, she pulled him by his hair and smashed her lips to his, tasting him. He tasted of tea and Oreo. And he smelled like fresh soap and musk. She giggled and bit her lip, eliciting a groan from him. Wanting to appease him, she bit his lower lip and sucked it slowly, making groan even more.

Groaning loudly, he parted her legs with his hands, before settling himself between them and pulling her flush against his hard body. He could feel every inch of her pressed up against his heaving body. Cupping the back of knee, he pulled it up, which she instantly understood and wrapped them around his butt, pulling him and herself closer by the hips.

He took control and thrust his tongue into her mouth. She moaned loudly, as he tasted her, sucked on her tongue, while one of his hands squeezed her waist, and the other cupped her neck, angling her face for better access.

Pulling away for air, she closed her eyes tight in pleasure when his stubble rubbed against the soft skin of her jaw and neck. Letting one hand stay in his soft yet wet hair, she glided her other hand down, further down his back, till it disappeared under that band of his sweatpants and touched his bare flesh. She gasped and pulled away.

He smiled at the question in her eyes and kissed the tip of her nose, that made her grin. Rolling his hips, he saw her eyes spark with fire and become hooded again. And just like that her head lolled back in pleasure at the contact, giving him the opportunity to bite at her flesh at the hollow of her throat, before running his tongue over it and sucking it.

Ah! She frowned at the pleasurable pain, but proceeded to squeeze his butt, as she copied his movements and rolled her hips against his. She could feel him pressing into her core. She wanted to taste him. Bite him. Pulling his head away from her neck, she cupped one side of his face, while she leaned forward and took his earlobe in her mouth. Her fingers found the other earlobe and pulled at it, earning a wince from him. Biting at his lobe, she ran her tongue on it after, making his moan.
Her hand lay resting on his butt, while the other one travelled down his front to his navel and dipped a finger there and scratching him and pinching him.

Wild cat!

She smirked and squeezed his butt again, before leaning down biting one of his pecks. She hummed in satisfaction, when suddenly she found herself off the stage and in his strong arms. Her legs wrapped around him tighter, as he walked to God-knows-where.

He had had enough! He wanted her. Right now. Climbing up the stairs to the stage, he reached the centre of the stage and stood there.

She felt him brushing her core with every step he took. She couldn't help but bite her lip to keep herself from moaning out loud. Her hand came up from his pants to rest at the dimple of his lower back. She lightly tapped his spine with her nails before digging them into his flesh, when his hands went to cup her bottom.

He hissed when he felt her nails dig into his spine. To retaliate, he squeezed her butt and leaned down to bite her right at the top of her bosom. He smirked when he heard her groan. Suddenly he felt her legs loosening their hold on his hips and slide down the sides of his legs. His eyebrows furrowed in confusion, while his hands gripped her tighter to himself, refusing to let go.

Letting her toes touch the stage floor, she reveled at the feel of his skin brushing hers, as she slid down. To brace herself, her hands came up to his shoulders. She smirked when he refused to let go of her and proceeded to press her further into him. She found it so cute.. And hot. Well, you know why! She leaned up and licked his lips in assurance, before dropping a small smooch on them.

And before he could respond, he felt her pushing at his shoulders, and twist, but only to push herself into him. His hands came up to hold her hips against his own, just as her hand came up and held his neck.

His breath hitched, when he felt her hips moving from side to side. Shit! His head fell back at the sheer pleasure flowing through his veins. He could hear his own heart threatening to break out of his rib cage and didn't miss the squeeze she gave at the back of his thigh.😳😳😳

He couldn't take it anymore. But before he could do anything again, he felt her sliding herself down, all the while making sure to rub her butt against him, till she sat on her heels. He looked down, only to see nothing but the brown wooden stage beneath his feet. Poor boy! He is getting his ass tortured!

Khwaab hoon, Main toh makhmali..

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So... How was it?
Hehehehe...🤣 *evilly smiling*
Had enough?

Annie😈



😳 I was blushing through the whole piece and at someplaces I lost my coherency to form words
Well done!!
Love you
And GIMMME MOAAR!!!
iT'S ASH, Beyotch!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#98
@Ashu:
🤣 🤣 *laughing like a Hyena* 🤣
Your reactions were bloody awesome!! XD 🤣
Hahahahaha... He definitely is getting his ass whooped! He is so damn whipped!!! 🤣
Geesh! I made you speechless?! o_O OH MOI GAWD!!!!! The ****?! 🤣 That is freaking HUGE compliment!!! 🤣

Will only give you more, if you keep on with your ROAR!!! Yeah, i know! I suck at cracking jokes! 🤣 🤣 Gee, jazbato ko samjho! XP

Hah! I think my new nickname will soon be 'Beyotch' is you keep up with that! 🤣 🤣
Edited by PhoenixRadar - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#99
HMM...THE UPDATE...😳😳😳WAS...😳😳😳😳
ANNIE,I THINK I AM TOO YOUNG FOR TO COMMENT😛😉😆,GIVE ME SOME TIME TO GROW UP😉😛
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: dewcute

HMM...THE UPDATE...😳😳😳WAS...😳

ANNIE,I THINK I AM TOO YOUNG FOR TO COMMENT😛😉😆,GIVE ME SOME TIME TO GROW UP😉😛


LOL!!! I told you that it'll leave you too goddamn red, JD!!! 🤣 🤗

So how long will you take to 'grow up'?!

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