Arshi FF: Fighting Fate (TVK 2) Thread 5 - COMPLETED

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Deepthi

@ToxicLove

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#101

Originally posted by: Srilathalolla
Congratulations on the new thread

Deepthi the poem was really great. Each and every line spoke so many emotions. Loved it

What could be the reason of Khushi's visit to India in 5 days that she cannot avoid , It cannot be work related is it Adarsh ? If it is about her health she would have neglected or delayed it. Hmm lagtha hain inbestigation Kareke padi

Lol Deepthi the way Khushi reacted when Arnav called her while she was talking to her diary is a mirror image of what happens when I am reading a FF and kids or Hubby calls hehehe.

I really feel bad for Arnav and Khushi both want to come close but the only barrier is the insecurity of Khushi. It is not even her fault. Physical intimacy is need sometimes , a simple hug can say what words cannot say and simple kiss shows the caring and the possessiveness that we cannot say , a simple handholding conveys the commitment that cannot be expressed through words.

I think that is the only way he can silence her and he knows that she wont take anyother answer from him the same way he did when he tried to answer her when she questioned him about why he accused her on that fateful night in TVK.

For me the outburst of Khushi is romantic ,this is also a kind of romance , She was scared when he was inches apart but she herself came close to him touched him , ASR you again won over her insecurities now she does not need any doctor or medication Khushi got her medication form her husband.

Nice update.

The bolded lines took my breath away and you grasped it too welll what I wanted to say...

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nisha_mehta

@nisha_mehta

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#102

Congrats on the new thread.

Update was too good.

Khushi is very surprised and shocked that arnav has given her such a chance. And as expected by arnav she did think that he is doing all this out of pity.

It took arnav all of his self control in order to be rude with Khushi so that he can assure her that he is not doing her any favour out o's pity. For he knows that khushi can deal with his anger but not charity.

Though Khushi is hurt all her pain goes out of the window the min it comes to arnav's well being. Her anger towards him for neglecting his health makes her forget that she is touching a man after such a long time. In her wife mode she is completely comfortable in her husbands arms forgetting about the past.

It breaks arnav completely to see Khushi having her anxiety attack. He wants to hold her close to his heart...protect her and make her forget the past completely.

But he knows that the only way she will.forget her he'll is for him and so he unwillingly puts up an act of ill health and that seems to do the trick.

Waiting to see how arnav will bring Khushi out of this trauma.

Why does Khushi have to go back to India? Will arnav also go with her?

Continue soon

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Srilatha

@Srilathalolla

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#103

Originally posted by: deepthiya

The bolded lines took my breath away and you grasped it too welll what I wanted to say...

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jeetega

@jeetega

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#104

Deepu, I loved the poem written by you. It's so beautiful and simple and much more. Just started reading the new update and want able to continue without commenting on that.

And Congrats on your new thread dear. Again, proud of you and happy for you!

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blablabla_mo7

@blablabla_mo7

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#105

Funny and sad.. The combination you mixed very well here. Loved the update and the frequency too=)

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henamani

@henamani

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#106

Even though khushi os the victim here, i shudder at arnav's pain. His love for khushi leaves me in tears. Can anyone love the other so much that her pain starts flowing thru his veins. I think if we were to split arnav's heart, khushi will flow out of it. He literally breathes khushi. I wish all of us could find such love in life

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canapoem

@canapoem

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#107

Deepthi, wonderful poem. Never knew this side of yours.

Just like gold or diamonds, when they are mined from the earth cannot be used as it is and needs lot of purification before the beauty is shown, similarly sometimes love has to undergo lots of tests and struggles before its intensity and purity is also seen.

So madam Khushi wants to win the challenge in 5 days. I wonder whats the important occassion in India after 5 days. Is it little Adi's birthday or something related to him? I somehow feel its true.

Khushi has become an expert in hiding her fears and vulnerabilities. Glad that Arnav notices them now and is healing her in ways she does not realise it. Both the incidents either be it the bike one or the evening dinner one showed how much he wants to be a part of her healing and giving her back her normal life.

Again glad that he masked his feelings well when she asked whether out of pity he is giving her the chance and instead of answering anything he put on his ASR face to give her a heated answer.
One thing Khushi probably does not need now is pity and he is making sure that he is not giving her that.
Its a long process for both of them and taking one small step at a time is the only way out.
Thanks Deeps for giving us such beautiful and emotional updates regularly. 🤗

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premdewaani

@premdewaani

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#108

Wow another mind blowing awesome update dear.. Loved it sooo much.. Starting with the very touching emotional and beautiful poem to the last sentence., everything was just tooo good.. Can't wait to read the next part.. Beautifully written chapter...