Arshi FF: Fighting Fate (TVK 2) Thread 5 - COMPLETED - Page 13

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Posted: 11 years ago
starting with u r lovely poem ...it was awesome dear!!!
loved read it!!!
n then ur update uff wt should i say arnav is a gem he is literally adment to get his kushi back!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
beautiful progress made...Khushi has started taking baby steps to heal !
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Posted: 11 years ago
again i was sad when khushi left arnav but know the reasons she did it was for self preservation and now arnav is realizing what hell she went through...n hoping he undertsand now together they can make it wrk
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hw on earth khushi s gng to overcome her fear. Washing hands shows hw she loath men touch. Her brain is nt registering anything after dat. Good to c arnav breaking through her without her knowledge. Hope she doesn't blast fr faking dizziness
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Posted: 11 years ago
Its really a mind blowing Superb update
I cant have words to say how beautifully you have written this update
The poem in start was amazing
It told full story and feelings of character to us in some words
Really like your this talent to

Khushi's diary writting always bring smile in my face
The way she wrote it look like she is talking face to face with Arnav
Really loved that part too much
And then her frog dance Arnav is right full on nutanki
But when its come to going with him in his bike her hesitation shows how much she want to be near him but cant fight with her fear and insecurities

Loved the way both understand each other very well
Khushi's thinking about last day's event and Arnav's not questioning her anything made her believe that he is giving her second chance out of pity
Loved the way Arnav made her believe by his threatening words that he is not pitying her but doing all this for saving his business and time
He was himself in pain seeing her like this but he had to do that for her pride and self confident

Khushi's being angry and concern for him after checking his kitchen was well written
Loved the way she threat him that she in going to leave him
And then her panic attack and washing her hand again and again
How heart breaking it would be for him to see her hyperventilating and feeling dirty by his touch
But he played very well to take her out of that nightmare
Loved the way he distract her by his dizziness and he know that he is the one for her only matter in her worse state also

I know Arnav will be successful to take her out of that nightmare and insecurities very soon
Want to know how will Khushi win him in 5 days
Why Khushi is going to India after five day is it related to Adarsh
Really loved the whole update too much beautiful and light
Waiting for next update Eagerly
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: lalarukh

wow awesome update...and wt a come back by khushi...throwing back challenge on him...hehe...yes only she can win him in 5 days...and as per her...win or lose ...she not going to leave ...wow khushi thats called the spirit...keep it up dear...u going to rock :)..and how much i loved arnav "interesting" here...hehehe...its awesome :)

loved her diary writing as usual...its pleasure reading always how she adressed him...she is happy and the reason is he...aweee...loved it

loved her frog dance...to his nautanki...such a catchy words deeps...its fun..loved this whole scene ...its hilarious ...hoga koi brainless butts to match ur frog dance...lol...lol

how beautifully u have blended humour and emotions here...bike scene..he watching her all pain how she forced to take that one step...her panic body...and he noticing all...ufff both at worst suffering at this point..


office scene if one moment it seems both arnav and khushi at home finally...brings back heated fight between ...khushi out burst which is very natural too ...considering her character ...she cant hands down that easily...she needs to confirms and here goes our ksr...and wow the man asr all ready to bring peace to her :)...his harsh words killed him way too deep...knowing exactly wt must be she going to feel after listening to all that...poor arnav he needs to do this for khushi and poor khushi she has to face that all ...beautifully written deeps...i loved arnav reasoning ...he tried his best to convience khushi that it is not out of pity or sympathy ...excellent piece of writings deeps...

both arnav and khushi in pain after the fight in office...but thats not going to effect their love...till reaching end of chap its crystal clear ...


loved the way though khushi angry but still sms him abt her leaving...the way she went even more angry thinking abt how he is living his life after seeing kitchen condition...no food...ok no food discussion lol...

i loved the way u wrote she on gates with tears in her eyes...
for khushi i need to say...be kind to urself girl and refuse to let negative feelings triggers u into war with ur ownself...easy girl...u had gone through loads and still going but...he is there ...just a hand away..

the bad news time flies and the good news u the pilot...the truth and strength of thier relationship is time tested...no matter how much the path seems. difficult..they going to come out of it...as winners...her condition and his observation...ufff too painful...beautifully written deeps

poor girl and her fears...the way she washed her hands again and again...and the heart breaking feeling of arnav...after watching her so...ufff...deeps i loved it to the core...very deep...very meaningful...arnav noticed loads...and khushi she is indeed trying...they both fighters indeed...


arnav and khushi both r standing on such a verge of life where one wrong move from arnav going to break some one hard earn pride and he knew it very well...where as khushi is reached the place where she have to have to fight with her fears...to come out of this drowning phase...the well is too deep ...he can call her with force, his strength can be found in form of echo in that well...but the final effort and strength she needs to show in order to place her hand in his...infact in order to come out of this all she needs to give her hand to him..that last barrier is going to be jumped down only by khushi...if she is till date living under the fear...now first step needs to be to make peace with it...for herself for arnav...and obviously arnav he is there for her..no question abt it :)...loved the update ...



after readinf ur comment on page 1 .. i was happy first tym maasi is bahving lyk good kid, bt u again proved me wrong.. we want u to take rest bt superstar jo ban'na hai aapko.. bt seriously i was missing ur long comment specialy urs ufffsss n special quotes... hehehehehe
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Posted: 11 years ago
DEEPU MOM my half comment on page 1
Edited by ShahSAIR - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
i loved this update. specialy the poem.
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
congrats on new thread...
thank you...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb update
Loved the way both are trying to understand eachothers condition

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