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Posted: 11 years ago
#91
Loved the update arnav is really the ideal man for khushi
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Posted: 11 years ago
#92
thanks for this superb update.
B/w the pain they both had faced its goos to see them lighten up a bit with some good humour of Khushi who made Arnav smile "frog dance" 😉
They both knows each other so well one knows what one is going to asked n ans.
still shiver seeing Khushi with other touching, the way she keep on washing her hands after she hold Arnav n confessing she will never leave him.
All these was witnessed by Arnav n his brain did work by pretending falling sick so as to divert Khushi's mind...
love is stronger than any other no wonder after that traumatised state she still concern about Arnav n touch his face ..😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#93
wow awesome update...and wt a come back by khushi...throwing back challenge on him...hehe...yes only she can win him in 5 days...and as per her...win or lose ...she not going to leave ...wow khushi thats called the spirit...keep it up dear...u going to rock :)..and how much i loved arnav "interesting" here...hehehe...its awesome :)

loved her diary writing as usual...its pleasure reading always how she adressed him...she is happy and the reason is he...aweee...loved it

loved her frog dance...to his nautanki...such a catchy words deeps...its fun..loved this whole scene ...its hilarious ...hoga koi brainless butts to match ur frog dance...lol...lol

how beautifully u have blended humour and emotions here...bike scene..he watching her all pain how she forced to take that one step...her panic body...and he noticing all...ufff both at worst suffering at this point..


office scene if one moment it seems both arnav and khushi at home finally...brings back heated fight between ...khushi out burst which is very natural too ...considering her character ...she cant hands down that easily...she needs to confirms and here goes our ksr...and wow the man asr all ready to bring peace to her :)...his harsh words killed him way too deep...knowing exactly wt must be she going to feel after listening to all that...poor arnav he needs to do this for khushi and poor khushi she has to face that all ...beautifully written deeps...i loved arnav reasoning ...he tried his best to convience khushi that it is not out of pity or sympathy ...excellent piece of writings deeps...

both arnav and khushi in pain after the fight in office...but thats not going to effect their love...till reaching end of chap its crystal clear ...


loved the way though khushi angry but still sms him abt her leaving...the way she went even more angry thinking abt how he is living his life after seeing kitchen condition...no food...ok no food discussion lol...

i loved the way u wrote she on gates with tears in her eyes...
for khushi i need to say...be kind to urself girl and refuse to let negative feelings triggers u into war with ur ownself...easy girl...u had gone through loads and still going but...he is there ...just a hand away..

the bad news time flies and the good news u the pilot...the truth and strength of thier relationship is time tested...no matter how much the path seems. difficult..they going to come out of it...as winners...her condition and his observation...ufff too painful...beautifully written deeps

poor girl and her fears...the way she washed her hands again and again...and the heart breaking feeling of arnav...after watching her so...ufff...deeps i loved it to the core...very deep...very meaningful...arnav noticed loads...and khushi she is indeed trying...they both fighters indeed...


arnav and khushi both r standing on such a verge of life where one wrong move from arnav going to break some one hard earn pride and he knew it very well...where as khushi is reached the place where she have to have to fight with her fears...to come out of this drowning phase...the well is too deep ...he can call her with force, his strength can be found in form of echo in that well...but the final effort and strength she needs to show in order to place her hand in his...infact in order to come out of this all she needs to give her hand to him..that last barrier is going to be jumped down only by khushi...if she is till date living under the fear...now first step needs to be to make peace with it...for herself for arnav...and obviously arnav he is there for her..no question abt it :)...loved the update ...



Edited by lalarukh - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Deepthis first CONGRATULATIONS on the new thread, you story I awsome so im not surprised!
Secondly your poem, the hit the story spot on, her word to her husband. For a minute I thought it may have been written in her diary for him to see. Just BEAUTIFUL
My heart goes out to them both, Arnav as he realises she needs special care not sympathy, and every little touch of his sends her into a fight with herself, her heart against her body. Same for her, her heart tells her he is the only one she is safe with but her body reacts is the opposite direction. Oh if only she hadnt left him, maybe she wouldnt be here doing this. But your verse said not used wife. 😭 She loves him so much, she wanted him to have everything perfect he deserved everything perfect not like her. 😭

ARNAV IS AWSOME. He knows instinctively what he needs to do. Will he go with her back go india , for what ever she has to go back for?

we will have to wait and see no doubt.

Deepthia, THANK YOU so much forcthis story it's absolutely AMAZING! Muuwh
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Congrats for new thread
Fantastic update
Poem is very meaningful and it is very apt for the situation
Poor kushi she is still in that insecurities
Real test for arnav to make kushi normal
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow brilliant update
N now now v r seeing a poet Deepu.. Superb
Luved it to T..
Thursday come sooon n
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Congratulations on the new thread

Deepthi the poem was really great. Each and every line spoke so many emotions. Loved it

What could be the reason of Khushi's visit to India in 5 days that she cannot avoid , It cannot be work related is it Adarsh ? If it is about her health she would have neglected or delayed it. Hmm lagtha hain inbestigation Kareke padi

Lol Deepthi the way Khushi reacted when Arnav called her while she was talking to her diary is a mirror image of what happens when I am reading a FF and kids or Hubby calls hehehe.

I really feel bad for Arnav and Khushi both want to come close but the only barrier is the insecurity of Khushi. It is not even her fault. Physical intimacy is need sometimes , a simple hug can say what words cannot say and simple kiss shows the caring and the possessiveness that we cannot say , a simple handholding conveys the commitment that cannot be expressed through words.

I think that is the only way he can silence her and he knows that she wont take anyother answer from him the same way he did when he tried to answer her when she questioned him about why he accused her on that fateful night in TVK.

For me the outburst of Khushi is romantic ,this is also a kind of romance , She was scared when he was inches apart but she herself came close to him touched him , ASR you again won over her insecurities now she does not need any doctor or medication Khushi got her medication form her husband.

Nice update.

Edited by Srilathalolla - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#98
The Arnav and Khushi you have created had thought me a whole new meaning of understanding you spouse your soul mate ...
It takes a true lover and true soul mate to do what Arnav ha done for Khushi when she was out of it at night ... I just love their bickring ... I just loved the seriousness .. Sarcasm .. Caring with out talking to each other and their sense of humor even when they are fighting ... Some chapters back when Arnav asked Khushi that "did the lobsters ate all the mango from the salad and she almost said its possible" ... It had me rolling ..I mean how do you manage to bring moment like that in the serious situation ... I just enjoyed reading you writing ...I wish I had found you earlier but Looking forward for more
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome update
Loved it Khushi accepted the challenge Loved how he pretended to be sick Aww her concern for him Cant wait to see them back together Cant wait for the next update Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: lalarukh



How apt is this saying? True one should never say die.


.be kind to urself girl and refuse to let negative feelings triggers u into war with ur ownself...easy girl..


Lala, these lines touched my heart, awesome...so meaningful and very painful tooo.

arnav and khushi both r standing on such a verge of life where one wrong move from arnav going to break some one hard earn pride and he knew it very well...where as khushi is reached the place where she have to have to fight with her fears...to come out of this drowning phase...the well is too deep ...he can call her with force, his strength can be found in form of echo in that well...but the final effort and strength she needs to show in order to place her hand in his...infact in order to come out of this all she needs to give her hand to him..that last barrier is going to be jumped down only by khushi...if she is till date living under the fear...now first step needs to be to make peace with it...for herself for arnav...and obviously arnav he is there for her..no question abt it :)...loved the update ...


Superbly summarised...and most importantly I have no words to say, I wasnt expecting your comment after what you had gone through..But as usuall you amaze me...Now be ready for the band bajaa baraat from me😡


PS: And thank you for all the flowers I received for the poem...They smell great...hehee, hum pagal log...

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