Arshi FF: Fighting Fate (TVK 2) Thread 5 - COMPLETED

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arnaushi

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Posted: 10 years ago

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CHAPTER 17

part 1

god that poetry described the actual plot of your story...

i applaud for you👏..you really deserve that!!!

very nicely written!!

so khushi accepted the challenge thrown by arnav that too she cut it short to 5 days... that was quite surprising...

the diary part was nice too...her asli zindagi calling her!! was cute

the way khushi is hesitating to touch is justifiable but she pulling her facade way to well..she is coping up with her hesitations really well and liked that arnav noticed that and understood her!!

part 2

arnav was harsh on khushi but she asked for it!!

he was fighting with himself to make her agree that he was not pitying on her, he was hurt himself that he had to speak that way which i loved!!

coming to khushi she was right to question arnav she still can't understand his sudden decision..but looks like she had her portion!!

loved how she retorted to him..."hogaya? done with the repeat telecast of our epic story?"

i loved how khushi burst out on arnav...finally she getting to the touch of her husband but she washing the touch off shows that she still has long way to go!!

arnav must have felt his heart breaking when he would have watched that scene...

he needs to work out on those and he is doing very well !!

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arnaushi

@arnaushi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#902

CHAPTER 18

that was just awesome!!!

finally they both are taking baby steps towards normalcy!!

the way the both are bantering like before brought a smile on my face!!

liked that arnav took care of the ride to DM and khushi jumped to grab the opportunity to be with him..the car scene was

the convo between aman and khushi was so cool...liked khushi being comfortable with him and arnav all ears to her convo trying to figure her out!!

khushi in absence of arnav has become just like him in the matter of business...

she always looked up his way of handling the situations and now she has emerged as a good one..

her ideas are even surprising arnav!!👍🏼

the veggies shopping was cute

arnav's way of approaching khushi's condition was too good...

he is constantly opposing and distracting khushi to which she retaliates and that makes her open out.. more...

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arnaushi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#903

CHAPTER 19

what a chappy!!

really amazing

arnav's research on khushi's condition gave me a clear view to khushi's sufferings!!

they way they both were teasing each other and making up a fight was really very sweet and cute

finally many things are back i this chapter...

arnav's jealousy, the chair pulling and etc

the note was sweet..and he kept it with other letters and notes!!

good that khushi expressed her views regarding the bet and how she unfolded her trip to India and arnav so nicely understood her situation...

the convo that they both had was very much needed as they need to talk out everything...

the parting scene was emotional..neither wanting to face the situation of being separate yet again but this time they can reach other...

the way arnav didn't let khushi speak and worded out his views on the challenge was nice...

that might have put khushi's heart to rest for a while knowing that this time it'll be okay!

arnav's attempt to make her back to him forever was sweet!!

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arnaushi

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Posted: 10 years ago

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CHAPTER 20

part 1

i am still trying o gather my thoughts...

from the beginning of this FF, i knew something had happened to the baby as he has not around khushi and was not talking to her..it was only khushi that voiced out her routines to him...even in TVK..i wanted the baby to die as he would be a reminder of his after but right now when i come across that he is no more, it is quite a heart constricting feeling!..

i never thought that khushi was going to India for son's death anniversary.

felt really sad..

so finally arnav and bua started talking after all these things!! and bua revealed about the boys death! arnav being a good father and a loving husband rushed into the first flight to give a shoulder and help his wife recover all the losses she had to face in her life!

the graveyard scene was emotional..watching khushi give toy to the dead baby which he wanted was really very overwhelming..the message in the gravestone regarding arnav, i had tears in my eyes!

the way both khushi and arnav were trying to hide the emotions and how they both reacted was saddening..

part 2

the part of adinav was really too sweet!!

the way arnav felt proud of khushi's decisions and her woks which she did in her absence and how khushi was mobbed by the children was sweet...he understood her...and was supporting her in every turn..

the wishing lantern scene was nice too..their wish for their innocent child was good..

liked that arnav decide to accompany khushi on this day when she needs his support...

part 3

i m literally crying right now...

that was way too emotional for me..my heart just went out for all the three innocent souls who suffered hell because of 1 person..their battle with themselves and how they have emerged from it!!

khushi appeared as a really strong woman who has faced all sort of odds in her l;ife and has come and is surviving on her own but now she need not worry worry as she is back to her life support...

every detail of the baby says how much khushi was attached to him after initial hesitations

when i read the last part, my throat was clogged..i just couldn't help but imagine the pain khushi must went through..the pain when arnav saw khushi remembering those events and how they stated that the baby was their...arnav's and khushi's

i just fell for your plot!!! i m feeling honored to have came across a story like this!!

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arnaushi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#905

CHAPTER 21

that was an amazing chappy...

felt really happy to read the small reunion of those two kids which where the first inkling to arnav and khushi...and buaji...

good that arnav and buaji are talking like before..

so arnav had tried to adopt ashu and rahul but they were already taken care of by his wife...

finally arnav and khushi are coming back to a little normalcy!!

they are finally talking everything out about the baby which was very emotional..his last wish especially...

the way the plea was made, my heart leapt out for the little kid!!it was just too sweet..and these statements were way too sweet..."I didnt marry an ordinary woman!" and "I married THE extra-ordinary Man!"

i liked the way they both had a discussion about the night when khushi left and how they are trying to forget their past!!

the fact that arnav has to accommodate to khushi's now anxious feelings is little saddening...as they have carry the effects of the vile person way too long..

the surprise was funny as the dialogues were hilarious and acting was best...

loved that khushi took care of these two...