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Posted: 11 years ago
#21
Full nai bt kuch part to iska Swaron k livin mein dikha hi skta h Channel V...
Bt unse umeed rakhna bekar h...
So padh k hi imagine krna parega... bt awesome os yaar...
Hats off... Swayam is such a great guy...just luv him...nd sharon is also a cutipie... she is so much understanding...Just luv dem...nd luvd this os...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#22
My my Nikki ...every time u r making m speechless ! Each time an increasing level ..^_^ it was dreamy ...u took me to d VruShan dream land :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#23
Nikki my god !! Kya imagination hai boss ! 😳 😳 Aisa real mein toh dekhne hi na mile 😆 😆 tu hi hai bas tu hi hai ab toh hamari savior channel v toh humko vrushan deta nai toh tere yeh written OS humare liye treat jaise hai !!

But seriously its Awesome update ! Mai toh lost hi ho gayi ! I loved d way u showed d emotions nt getting in ones control wen u hve ur loved one in front of u n on top of dat realization n again on top of dat grl understanding his man n convinsing him dat he was nt wrong nor nythng btwn dem wil nytym b wrong !!!

Applause 👏 👏 Loved it !!! Continue wid nxt part soon ! 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
#24
too gud nikki
both a parts r nycly written
swaron understand each other soo well
and the intimate moment😳
loved it
do update soon

love
shini
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Posted: 11 years ago
#25
Sorry for the late reply
Both the parts were just mind blowing
Swayams concern for Sharon's health ,he even neglected his work
This is the swayam I know
Their bathroom and bed room romance was like hot
And then swayams guilt , Sharon telling him that its their love
Update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#26

Sorry guys I know I'm late...was little busy...But I guess u should thank me 4 the last part of OS...Ok jokes apart so here is the next part of the OS...I hope u all will enjoy this

PART-4

After that special moment they both finished their dinner & went to sleep...next morning Sharon's sleep was disturbed bcoz of her mom's call...

S-Hello mom..

M- Morning beta...how r u??

S-I'm fine mom how r u & dad theek hai na

M-Ha sab theek hai actually ek good news hai...

S-Good news??

M-Ha humare jo financial crises the wo jald khatam hone wale hai!!!!!!

S-Really mom!!!!!!She said with excitement

M-Ha beta e sab kaise hua mein aake bataungi...now bye take care

S-Bye mom I love u...

Listening this news her happiness knew no boundries...she was so happy...& in that excitement she went to Swayam...he was making coffee in kitchen...she hugged him from back side...

Sh-I love I love I love uuu Swayam

Sw-Wohoho aaj bada hi pyaar aa raha hai??Kya baat hai bhai??

Sh-What do u mean ke bada pyaar aaya hai???Kya mein tumse pyaar nahi karti??She said with puppy face

Sw-Awww ok sorry baba...tum jitna pyaar karti ho utna pyaar koi kisise nahi karta...happy now???

Sh-Yup super happy!!!!!

Sw-I love u too Sharon...thank u for loving me...he said taking her in his embrance...

Sh-Ok chalo aaj muze bhi cllg jana hai

Sw-Kisne kaha??Tum kahi nahi ja rahi ho ok

Sh-Plz Swayam mein ghar pe bohot bore hoti hoon thodi der ke liye plzzz

Sw-Ok ok tumse toh mein kabhi nahi jeet sakta...

Sh-Ha wo toh hai

Sw-But mein tumhe drop karunga aur dopahar ke baad pick bhi karunga ok???

Sh-Ok fine aab mein ready ho jau??

Sw-Ha but pehle meri morning kiss??

Sh-Tum kabhi nahi bhulte hai na?

Sw-Sab kuch bhul sakta hoon but not this...he says with wink

She gives him a peak on his lips & leaves 4 her room

Shron was so happy today coz of the news her mom gave...but at the same time she knew that she has to compete with Swayam in dance Mania... At around 1 noon someone knocks on Sharon's cabin...& the waiter of the canteen enters with launch...Ma'am aapka khana...but ye meine order nahi kiya hai...the waiter hand over a letter to her & left the cabin placing the trey on table...she opens the letter...

Good afternoon my princess...here is ur launch...sab tumhari fav dishes hai...even I wanted to join u...but I'm struck with my work...phatafat ye khatam karo aur apni medicines lo...mein thodi der mein tumhe pick karne aane wala hoon so be ready...enjoy the launch...i love u

Yours & only yours

Swayam

After reading the letter she starts blushing...Pehla Nasha in BG...I love u too Swayam!!!!!how cute r u thanx 4 this & I miss u she text this msg to Swayam & completes her lauch...& suddenly Swayam enters her cabin...

Sh-Tum yaha??Agar pehle pata hota tum itni jaldi aane wale ho toh saath mein khana khate na...

Sw-Sharon jaldi karo hame ghar jana hai...

Sh-Itni jaldi??

Sw-Ha wo bahar dange ho rahe hai...isse pehle ke situation bigad jaye let's go

Sh-But hua kya hai...i mean dange kyu ho rahe hai??

Sw-Wo kisi party ke leader ka murder ho gaya hai...uski wajah se...aab jaldi karo plz

Sh-Ok ok chalo...

But he gets a call of nil & he says halat bohot kharab hai tum thodi der cllg mein ruko...i will tell u kab cllg se nikalna hai ok?? Ok nil...Swayam says & hang up the call...Swayam aab kya kare??She askes...Sharon don't worry mein hoon tumhare saath kuch nahi hoga...after some time Swayam again gets nil's call & they both leaves the cllg...After reaching home Swayam found Sharon too much tensed...

Sw-Kya hua Sharon??U ok??

Sh-Muze bohot daar lag raha hai Swayam

Sw-Kaisa daar??Mein yaha hi hoon...tumhe darne ki koi zaroorat nahi ek kaam karte hai...8 baj gaye hai let's eat...

Sh-Mera maan nahi hai

Sw-Aise kaise maan nahi hai??Tumhe khana padega...ruko mein lata hoon kuch banake

They finish their dinner...but Swayam still notice that Sharon abhi bhi dari hui hai "actually it was obvious...road par jo halat the use dekh mein hi toh kitna daar gaya tha aur Sharon ka darna toh natural hai...muze uska mood divert karna hoga"

Sw-Chalo Sharon TV dekhte hai

Sh-Ok chalo

But as soon as he turns TV on a news channel starts which was showing the same news...& she gets more scared he switch off the TV & take her in tight hug...

Sw-Bass karo Sharon apne aap ko aur kitni takleef dogi??Kuch nahi hoga kaha na meine aur waise bhi jab tak mein tumhare saath hoon tumhare chere par ek shikan bhi nahi aane dunga mein...

Listening this she gets touched

Sw-Aab tum so jao warna phir se wahi sab sochne lagogi

Sh-Swayam muze aise hi tumhari bahon mein sona hai!!!!!

Sw-What??He says with shock

Sh-Ha Swayam this is the most peaceful place 4 me jaha muze sabse zyaada safe feel hota hai...plz kya mein aaj raat aise hi so sakti hoon??

He gets mesmerized towards her words

Sw-Ur wish is my command my love...

They both went on the sofa...Swayam sits on it's one side & Sharon place her head on his laps...caressing her forehead looking at each other...both fell asleep...in their dream world which was exclusively theirs!!!!!!!!!!!

Precap-Return of MRP

So guys this was it I know it was kind of offbeat but I hope u enjoyed it...no eggs & tomato's plz😆...& the next part will be the last part of this OS...

Lots of love

Nikki🤗

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Posted: 11 years ago
#27
first one to comment niki...it was short bt sweet...love swaron convo and swayam concern for sharon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#28
Nice update
Swayams concern is what I love the most
Update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#29
ok so finally i m posting a comment Niks!!!! 😃
whow!!! kya likhti hai yar tu... update chota tha but bohat accha tha... u combined everything really well... debt problem solved, swaron in eachother arms n their love aur kya chahiye... actually no aur vi kuch chahiye(if u know what i mean😉) hheehehe...👏 but on a serious note this story overall is really nice... bohat achha likha hai tune... now jus wating for the last part...i know u will write it like the best one so take ur time aur make it an awesome one ok... lots of love :*
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Posted: 11 years ago
#30
wow dear..
really nice..
swaron romance ...ahaaan..
mja aa gya...
return of mrp..
hope everything goes well...
update soon..
thanks 4 d pm

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