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Posted: 11 years ago
#31
Nice update👏
loved it❤️
swaron romance was damm cuet😃
but precap 😲
return of MRP hope she doesnt do anything wrong😊
update next part soon😊
n thanx fr d PM😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#32
Wah niksi jaan part toh acha tha 😊 The concern shown of swayum towards sharon was too gud .. It was short n sweet ..

Precap ha sounds lil exciting lets c wat happens here i m waiting waiting.. 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33
heyya
i loved it
u wrote it very nycly
swayams concerns for sharon too gus
sharon in swayms arms nyc
do update super soon

love
shini
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34

Really really really sorry ppl...i know im super duper late...but was going through some health issues...so here is the last part of this OS...enjoy

PART 5

The next morning he found his lady love ...when Swayam woke sleeping peacefully by placing her head on his lap...he was mesmerized watching her

beauty...he was lost in his thoughts...all the events which he spent with Sharon were coming in front of his eyes...there was a day when she didn't even wanted to see his face...he was just happy with the fact that even after so many hurdles now they both were together...may be now she loves him more than he loves him...he slowly went closer to her cheeks...she could feel his heavy breaths on her cheeks...he gently kissed her on her cheeks saying "Good Morning My Love!!!!Aab tum apni aakhen khol sakti ho"...listening to this words she opened her eyes "I Love U too Swayam"Tumhe kaise pata ke mein uth gayi thi???

Sw-C'mon Sharon itna toh mein tumhe janta hi hoon...

Sh-Yeah!!!! She said & sat on the sofa...keeping her head onto his sholder...

& suddenly Swayam shouted Aauchhh!!!!!!!

Sh-Kya hua Swayam???

Sw-Wo actually back mein thoda pain ho raha hai...

Sh-What???Ooo im really srry Swayam meri zid ki wajah se tunhe raat bhaar aise uncomfortable hoke sona pada...i'm really really sorry...

Sw-Hey hey aisi baat maat karo...as I always say ur wish is my command aur thoda sa pain hai theek ho jayega...so plz don't worry

Sh-Aise kaise don't worry Dance Mania kuch dino mein hai..ok mein tumhe ointment laga deti hoon u will fell better...saying this she goes & comes with an ointment

Sw-Sharon iski kya zaroorat hai???Mein laga lunga...

Sh-No ways!!Meine kaha na mein lagati hoon..aab apni t-shirt nikaloge ya phir uspe ointment lagau??

Sw-What mein nahi utarne wala apni t-shirt...

Sh-Kaisi baat kar rahe ho?Ohhh mere samne sharam aa rahi hai jaise meine tumhe kabhi shirtless dekha hi nahi...

& both were feeling embarrassed after these words of her...suddenly she turned & while blushing said jao koi shirt pehenke aao...he came after changing...she made him sit on sofa & started massaging his back...both were lost in each other's presence...remembering an old incidence of medical room where there was same situation...their breaths were becoming heavier with each passing moment..she finished her job & was about to leave...but he held her hand...

Sh-Swayam leave me hame cllg jana hai...

Sw-Kitni unromantic ho tum Sharon...Iss moment ke baad tumhe kuch yaad nahi aaya???

Sh-Nahi kuch bhi toh nahi!!!She said blushing...

Sw-Oh really!!!!!He said & pulled her towards himself...her back touched his almost bare chest...which brought shiver in their bodies...

Aab???

Sh-Ok ha yaad aaya toh??

Sw-Toh mein ye soch raha tha ke uss din jo moment incomplete reh gaya thaw o aab complete kar lu...saying this he made her face him & went close close & more close to kiss her...but the bell rang...

Sw-Shucks man...aab kaun aaya???He said with irritation...While she was laughing loudly...

Sw-Ha haso haso aur haso...iski saza tumhe mill ke rahegi...

Sh-Saza baad mein dena pehle ye dekh le ki kaun aaya hai...tum shirt pehno I will open the door...

As soon as she opened the door she was shocked...Yes it was MRP...whose eyes were burning with anger...

Sh-Mom aap yaha??Aap toh do din baad aane wali thi na??

MRP- Ye sawaal mera hona chahiye tum iss waqt iss ladke ke ghar pe kya kar rahi ho Sharon???Meine ghar pe call kiya toh kaka ne bataya ke tum yaha ho...

Sh-Mom let me explain...jaisa aap samaz rahi hai waisa kuch nahi hai

Meanwhile Swayam comes forward

Sw-Exaclty aunty wo Sharon was not feeling well aap nahi thi issi liye mein use yaha laya...

MRP-U stay out of it...aur kaisa nahi hai Sharon??I was worried ke ye sab riots ke wajah se tum pareshan hogi iss liye mein yaha aayi aur tum tum to yaha maze kar rahi ho

Sh-Mom do u have any idea ke aap kya bol rahi ho??How can u even think like that mom??

MRP-Chillao maat Sharon...aaj toh tumne sari hadein paar kar di

Stup up Mrs.Raiprakash...a voice came in

Sharon was happy seeing that person it was her dad

Sh-Dad thank god aap bhi aagaye dekho na mom kya kahe ja rahi hai

MRP-Aap yaha kyu aaye mein kaha tha I will handle this

Dad-How dare u talk so rubbish about my daughter...wo tumhari bhi beti hai...tum aisa kaise soch sakti ho Avantika??

MRP-But aap nahi jante

Dad-Shhh mein sab janta hoon...I need to talk to u...Swayam Sharon plz leave us alone 4 some time...

Sw-Ok uncle sure...

They both leave the leaving room...

MRP-Aapko nahi pata ye ladka Swayam hamari beti ko bigaad raha hai..u know wo cycle pe Sharon ko ghumata hai...roadside pe chai pita hai...he has no class

Dad-Do u know Mr.Rishi Shekhawat??

MRP-Yeah hamera cllg friend & now the most successful business man in society jinki wajah se hamari prob solve hui hai...

Dad-Yeah u r right but prob unke nahi Swayam ki wajah se solve hui hai kyuki Swayam is his son...

MRP-What??Phir uska lifestyle aisa kyu hai?

Dad-Kyuki wo apne father ka naam use nahi karna chahta he has his self respect...now go & say sorry to him...he is really a nice guy aur wo hameri beti ko bohot khush rakhega...

MRP-But mein aise kaise use sorry kahu??Kitna rude thi mein uske saath ok give me a min...she calls someone...

Swayam & Sharon enters the room...MRP steps forward & sayas

MRP-In really sorry Swayam meine tumhe galat samza...tum toh meri beti ke liye perfect ho...mein hi tumhare ander ki acchai nahi dekh paayi...Swayam & Sharon both get shocked but happy at the same time...Sharon looks at her dad..her dad smiles at her & she realizes that he was the one who made MRP melt...

Sw-No aunty plz aap sorry maat boliye...aap toh bass concerned thi apni beti ke bare mein...

MRP-Aunty nahi aaj se tum muze mom bulaoge..

Sw-Ok aunty...oops sorry mom...he fumbles saying that,,,,,,Sharon laughs at him

MRP-Swayam I have an offer 4 u...meine jaan buz ke tumhe aur Sharon ko dur karne ke liye wo acadmy ka drama karwaya tha...but now I want St.louise & D3 Academy to work together...so do u accept the offer

Sw-Yeah sure..but papers & all...

MRP-Uski chinta tum maat karo meine management aur loyer dono se baat kar li u just have to sign the paper...

Sh-Thanx a lot mom really...im glad ke finally aap hame samaz gayi...

& MRP hugs both Swayam & Sharon...

Dad-Ohh mein bhi hoon bhai yaha...

Sh-Yess dad come come...& they do a group hug

MRP-Ok Sharon aab tum apna bag pack karo...aur Swayam plz Sharon ko ghar drop kar dena...hamari car mein bohot samaan hai

Sw-Yeah sure...

Mr.&Mrs.Raiprakash leaves Swayam's house...Swayam helps Sharon to pack her bags...he finds Sharon is lil confused & sad

Sw-Kya hua Sharon??Tum khush nahi ho?

Sh-Khush hoon but mom aise itni jaldi kaise maan gayi ye samaz nahi aa raha...ok let it be muze tumhe kuch batana tha ke meine St.Louise acadmy join karne ke piche kya reason tha...

Sw-Ur financial problems right??

Sh-Tumhe kaise pata????

Sw-Wo fresher's party ke din muze pata chala...tabhi meine dad ko bataya & then he helped ur dad...aur I guess tumhari mom ko bhi tumhare dad ne aab bataya hoga tabhi wo maan gayi...

Sharon's eyes filled with tears after listening this...

Sw-Hey plz don't cry...im sorry baba ke meine tumhe pehle nahi bataya

Sh-I love u Swayam...I'm lucky to have such loving person in my life

Sw-Awww I love u too baby...aab der ho rahi hai let's do packing

Sh-I will miss u Swayam...ye kuch din mere life ke best days the...I will miss tumhare saath rehna...baat baat par ruthna...black coffee ke liye liye zid karna...everything

Sw-Ha but muzse zyaada nahi...i will miss u more tumhare liye roz breakfast banana...tumhare saath time spend karna...most imp tumse GN aur GM kiss ki demand karna...raat ko chupke se tumhe dekhna...

They both hug each other...this was their moment...now their love was excepted by everyone...now no one can be in their path...they both were happy...with each passing moment the hug got tighter...but they had to broke the hug...after that Swayam dropped Sharon to her house...& then they both went to D3 academy...to give this news to their friends...

So guyys how was it???Don't that this was short plz...hope u all like it...waiting 4 ur comments...

Lots of love

Nikki🤗

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Posted: 11 years ago
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heheheheh again first to comment...ok to b frank ab mujhe yeh sab extra melo dramatic lagta h...bt one thing tht was different was entry of mr.rai prakash...i like u didnt follow all the writer doing...so i like tht surprise...other than that it was good...will nt say excellent...bt it was good...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: Swaronvrushan

heheheheh again first to comment...ok to b frank ab mujhe yeh sab extra melo dramatic lagta h...bt one thing tht was different was entry of mr.rai prakash...i like u didnt follow all the writer doing...so i like tht surprise...other than that it was good...will nt say excellent...bt it was good...


Thank u sooo much 4 a genuine comment...even im not happy with this one...thanx 4 the comment...ppz keep guiding me i will love that:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37
Nikkiii this was ekdum massttt...tere OS se hi hum khush ho jate hai...d3 mein toh hone se raha -.-
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38
Loved it! The ending was good!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39
finally mrp maan gai...
I m soo happy..
swaron moment is too good..
poor swaron, Mom aa gai beech me...

thanks 4 d pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#40
a perfect ending👏
MRP didnt have any objection with swaron😲
n swaron romance was awesome😃
n D3 n st louis 2gther😊
wish this all could have happen in D3😔
be back fast with such intersting concepts😊
will be waiting😊

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