SwaRon OS on current track

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Posted: 11 years ago
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As soon as we saw friday's precap our eyes popped out in exitement hearing the word "LIVE IN"😉...I don't think anything like that is gonna happen...So here is an OS based on it to cheerish everyone...
A special thanx to my friend Rakshit who gave me this idea...i hope i won't disappoint u...fingers crossed😆...so this will be in 7 parts...hope u guyys like it...

SwaRon In Live In
After the argument & then patch up with Swayam on Huma's topic Sharon went to her home so as Swayam...Sharon's mom was already left 4 Delhi...Sharon went to her bedroom...suddenly kaka heard something & went to her room...Sharon got an Asthama attack... he called the doctor...& since nobody was at home he called Swayam
S-Hello
K-Swayam baba Sharon bitiyan ko asthama attack aaya hai...
S-What???Ok kaka mein abhi aata hoon
Saying this Swayam left to Sharon's house...
Swayam reached her house & directly went to her room...Sharon didn't knew kaka has informed him...she was trying to sleep...Swayam saw her & without disturbing went to her bed caresing her...she sensed his presence & got up
Sh-Swayam tum yaha???
Sw-Ha Sharon kaisi ho tum???
Sh-I'm fine...
Sw-Kab aaya tumhe attack?????
Sh-Abhi kuch der pehle...
Sw-Doctor ne kya kaha??
Sh-He said i will be fine!!!!!
Sw-Ok chalo utho...
Sh-Kya??
Sw-Tum mere ghar chalogi aur jab tak aunty wapas nahi aati i will take care of u...
Sh-U mean Live In!!!!!!!!
Sw-Ha Live in!!!!!!
Sh-Tum pagal ho gaye ho??
Sw-Tum bimaar ho aur mein tumhe akela nahi chod sakta...so tum mere saath aa rahi ho & that's final
Sh-R u sure??
Sw-Ha baba batao kaha hai tumhare cloths mein bag pack karta hoon
He pack her bag & took her to the home...reaching his home he takes her to his room tum yaha rahogi...
Sh-But ye toh tumhara room hai...
Sw-Ha don't worry mein guest room mein rahunga this one is more comfortable 4 u
He firstly feeds her...
Sh-Khichdi?????
Sw-Muh maat banao this is good 4 ur health
Sh-But Swayam????
Sw-No but wat u have to eat this...see mein bhi yahi kha raha hoon aaj...he says taking a bite of it
Sh-Par tum kyu??
Sw-Tumhe company dene ke liye...they both finish eating khichadi & then he gives her medicines...he makes all the arrangement like bed sheet...pillows...water & all required...So time to sleep princess...he says...yeah she says...
Sw-R u comfortable????
Sh-Ha Swayam!!!!!
Sw-Sach mein?? He says with hesitation
Sh-Ha sab theek hai baba tum so jao kal cllg bhi jana hai
Sw-Cllg kaun jane wala hai??Mein tumhare saath ghar pe rahunga ok????
Sh-Ok par kal mera khyaal rakhne ke liye tumhe aab sona padega so abhi jao...
Sw-Ok i'm going...
When he was about to leave...she stops him holding his hand
Sw-Kya hua??
Sh-Thank u thank u so much Swayam
Sw-Wo kiske liye??
Sh-4 being the best BF of this world...
Sw-Wo toh mein hoon...he says with wink...
Ok aab tum so jao...
He stays in the room untill she fell asleep...
He gave her a peck on forehead & leaves the room...

So how was it???I had to continue this coz i promised Raksh...so i don't demand 4 likes or comments this time still i will love if u do that😉if u like this & want pm's add me to ur buddy list...
Lots of love
Nikki🤗

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Yayyy first one reply
Aww it was soo damncute.
Dedu mastit was
I hope cvs had some brains of yours

Nd m waiting for it do complete pm me ok
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Posted: 11 years ago
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tune sirf raksh ka ni par shubhi drash n shefs ka demand bhi pura kar rahi ho ;) btw nice start :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice os... Do continue and pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice start
Continue soon and do pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Dis is damn cute os...
I wish u could keep a Lil longer convo btwn swaron b4 swayam takes her to her house...like Sharon:no no I will call on simmi etc etc...n swayam side of extra caring lover boy could b xplored...
Anyways very NYC write up...do continue n pm too plzzz
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey too gud
wanted more of swaron convo but its ok
wud love to read further
pm me d next tym u update

cheers
shini
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome os👏
loved it❤️
swaron in live in😃
do update next part soon😊
n thanx for d PM😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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this is sooo cute nd lovely yr...
yup swayam is best bf...

swaron together...

I m loving it...
update soon..
thanks 4 d pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanx everyone 4 appreciating my work...means a lot to me...thanx 4 all the comments & like😊Here i'm with the 2nd part of it...hopefully u all will enjoy this too😊

Part-2
Swayam went to his room...but he was unable to sleep...His mind was constantly thinking about Sharon's health...he was hell concerned that he used to check her room in short interval of time...Pata nahi Sharon comfortable hai bhi ya nahi???Ya fir mein kuch zyaada hi sach raha hoon????Oh goddd I hope she becomes fine soon!!!!!He was talking this to himself...& then finally he caught up by sleep...
Sun peeped out from clouds...which made Swayam wake...as soon as he woke 1stly he dashed towards her room to see her...he entered the room... "ufff how cute she looks while sleeping...i just hope ke Sharon ki smile uske face se kabhi na jaye" He said to himself...She was unaware about his presence...meanwhile adoring her he saw rays of sun disturbing her sleep...he went to her bed sat on it as if those rays won't wake her...he tried hard but she woke not bcoz of sunrays bcoz of his presence...
Sh-Morning Swayam!!!!!!!!She said rubbing her eyes
Sw-Morning my princess!!!How r u feeling now??
Sh-I'm fine...tum kya kar rahe the??
Sw-Kuch nahi ye suraj tumhari neend disturb kar raha tha...mein bass use daat raha hai...
Sh-Awww how sweet...Kitne cute ho tum Swayam...she said cuddling him...
I Love U Swayam
Sw-I Love U too
Sh-I wish mein har subah aise hi tumhare saath start kar sakti...
Sw-Mein toh karta hoon??
Sh-Wo kaise??
Sw-Uske liye muze tumhara face dekhne ki zaroorta nahi hai tumhara ehsaas hi mere liye kafi hai...He said with whole intensity looking into her eyes
Look Look Hawa Hawa moment...Pehla Nasha in BG...Both were lost in each other...they hugged each other tightly as if they didn't even want this moment to end ...
Sh-Ok Swayam aab hum pehle fresh ho jate hai...
Sw-Yeah fir breakfast bhi karna hai...
Sh-Yeah!!!!!
Sw-But ek condition pe
Sh-Kya??????
Sw-I want a morning kiss...
Sh-Stop it Swayam she said blushing
Sw-What's this??Muze chahiye matlab chahiye...he said with a pout...
Sh-Stop acting like a kid... aur zid mein karti hoon tum nahi...ok aab hatho
Sw-Nahi...he hold her hand...& then locked both of her hand behind & went closer closer & more closer to her...She shut her eyes...she was feeling his heavy breaths on her lips...& finally their lips met...the soft kiss turned into the passionate one...she also responded it with same passion...pouring all their love 4 each other...both were not in the mood to broke it...but they had to bcoz of need of breath...he looked at her with naughtiness...her cheeks became pink & then turned red...she was unable to look up he...he knew her condition very well...he held her chin & made her look into his eyes she smiled but then suddenly hugged him...they stays as it is 4 some times & then broke the hug...see u at the breakfast princess he said...& left the room...
After taking shower she came to the dinning hall...& was mesmerized looking at the scene... he had prepared cheez omlet...Orange juice...hve made fruit salad...the dinning hall was just looking beautiful...Come sit here he said... She sat on the chair he served her...& started feeding her...
Sh-Swayam tum bhi khao...
Sw-Nahi muze bhuk nahi hai...
Sh-Aise kaise...come here I will make u eat...
Sw-ok but...
Sh-What but???
Sw-Tum muze spoon se khana nahi khilaogi...
Sh-Toh fir????
& he pointed towards her lips...
Her eyes popped out on this action of him
Sh-U r joking right??She said with fake smile
Sw-No I'm damn serious baby...he said winking at her
Sh-No ways!!!!!!
Sw-See muze aise hi khana khana hai...warna mein nahi khaunga...
Sh-Tum pagal ho gaye ho...chup chap khana khao...
Sw-Nahi...he said with puppy face
Sh-Behave like a good boy & eat this ok...she said in full Diva mood...
He didn't have any option he eat it just like a small kid is eating his most hated dish...
After finishing the breakfast...he cleaned up the table...with no interst coz his wish was not fullfilled by her... he was going to his room...but she stopped him...of course she can't see him unhappy...she went to fridge took out a pastery & kept in her mouth & feed him...He was just awestruck...unable to believe she really did it...his happiness had no boundries...but then she ran towards her room...of course bcoz of shyness..."Hey hey Sharon Ruko yoh kaha jaa rahi ho????"...he went behind her but no use she has locked the door..."Hayye Mein Maar Jawa Teri Iss Ada Pe" he said with full on Majnu tone
So guyys how was it?????I hope u liked it...i know it's kind of short...but busy these days...or u can say i hate typing😉...next part coming up soon😉...hit like comment...ur suggetions r always welcome
Lots of love
Nikki🤗

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