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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: mdm2013

Beautiful story and awesome story telling and as I have mentioned earlier, secrets and mysteries well hidden til they r dramatically disclosed.

Loved this chapter even more, cos of the surprise dat Arnav gives to both Garima as well as Khushi and accepts dat it's for their sake as much as for his sake. Beautiful closure to the story by exchanging things dat played such a monumental role in their story.

It's like when I look back, I see two strong characters who at some point of time have fallen weak but today they stand together with each other and for each other and can show off a strong love and celebrate it too.

Awesome story telling!! Keep writing and entertaining us with your gift.
Thanks a lot for allowing me to read your story and wait for each update to come.
Emotional but an awesome love story with superb portrayal of characters and their affection for each other!


Thank you 🤗

About the secrets being hidden successfully...I was told I should do whodunnit genre...😆

@ Bold - I loved what you said. It was Arnav's weak moment because he was scared of losing his sister. And it was Khushi's weak moment because she had just given herself to a guy she loved and could feel him going away from her. What a lovely observation!

I really was fortunate to have found readers who made such fabulous observation...and it helped me become a better writer. Thank you! 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: yoga123

Beautiful story...arnav taking initiative to meet garima and shashi as khushi's parents and trying to spend time with them and know them, felt so happy...he is coming out of his grief and letting go things...the new beginnings... Amazing story...can't imagine my days ahead without this story...please start another story...please...will miss this beautiful master piece...thanks for the PM


I'm really glad you enjoyed DND. Thanks for letting me know that. But then you always did. You were there week after week, month after month...tirelessly.

Thank you very much for your love, support and patience. I have been lucky to say the least. 🤗

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: anukap

Loved it. Thank you!



Thank you! I really appreciate the time you invested in this story. 🤗

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Justme1

Brilliant story...
It is very rare for me to shed a tear for fictional characters but this story, the pain that Arnav has gone through, the way it has been written managed to bring a few tears...
Amazing story...


Your comment made me emotional. Where was the need for more words to encourage this debut writer. Thank you for those tears...they told me DND touched you emotionally. Thank you for sharing that 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: archana.mh17

And, with that chapter, you stole my heart! I have been very very inconsistent my comments, but here I am, reading the very last chapter of DND & I cannot help but tell you what a wonderful, wonderful job you have done these characters, their story! This was one of those stories that are so wholesome, with so many dimensions! You did justice to each theme, each form of love! Despite there being such a depressing backstory to each character, the story is, truly one of hope, happiness & love! Its a celebration of love in all its forms! To bring in the maternal love of 3 women-Ahalya(this character is such a stunning work of your imagination), Garima & Devyani, to do justice to each one of them, without one not eating into the other, is one of the highlights of this story! Then, there's the story of the three musketeers-can I say that its truly beautiful, the way you've captured the love, friendship, bonding, sisterhood of these three friends-a journey that started in the early years of childhood right into their womanhood, its a wonderful, wonderful aspect of the story! To have such friends that stick is essential in life! And, aren't school friends just that much more special! Then, there's the intricate bonding between the three siblings-your interlude still stays one of my most favourite chapters of this story-it had no romance, but it had a quality of dawn of good times to come, although it featured in the dusk of your story(could also be a dusk of a bad past ending)! These siblings bound by more than blood, Anjali-Arnav's mutual trust, Anya being their baby sister, them bound by shared childhood, the love of 2 terrific women! Its insanely good!

I had mentioned it to you, once before, the fact that you gave so much space to Akash-Payal & Anya-Aman's love stories is just so commendable! You handled it so well!
Then, comes this saga of Arnav-Khushi! This was one hell of a journey! Truly, the whole evolution of the characters of Arnav & Khushi, & their relationship-all of it is brilliant! Khushi is a character I can relate to! I, usually find these women in stories & Indian shows to be far removed from reality, but your Khushi is someone who is sensible, realistic, & essentially, a believable character-she's strong, she's independent, she's opinionated, she's rational, & she's simply terrific! I have to say, you did a fabulous job with Arnav's character-the revelation of the past did so much in terms of adding dimensions to Arnav's character-you see a loving son, a man who still held onto the guilt of being the cause of his mother's pain, who held so much pain inside, all to protect the memory of a woman who loved him like he was her own-he was truly hers, truly Ahalya's son-he went from being this amazing, flawed, but emotionally weak man that left Khushi behind courtesy his past, to this man whose emotional strength is an innate part of every decision of his life, a man who would swallow his own pain to protect others, a man who, truly loved, was flawed, but was strong, too!
This final chapter was so fitting! It was a new beginning to all of them, Anya, Payal, Arnav-Khushi & everyone else! I love how you kept it real! I understand why Khushi wouldn't want to marry so soon! They've barely managed to achieve a semblance of stability & they should be able to cherish this courtship without the past pulling them down! The gestures of the gifts were touching-eternal love & happiness sealed with the emerald, not in the form of a ring(I love that this wasn't there, it would be too much of a cliche, if it was there, perhaps) & the wounds of the past healing, pieces of life put back together, just the way, Khushi gifted him that piece that was so important to him, a piece of his memory of his mother! This chapter was right, it was correct! It felt good, the way a last chapter of a story should! You have ended it so well that I didn't think it needed or would have an epilogue! It just felt complete, yet open to the possiblilties of continued joy! I am not complaining about the epilogue, though! If you are willing to write, I am, more than willing to read it!
Kudos to you on telling an amazing story, Sandhya!


Thank you Archana! I did miss you and I'm glad you are here now. That matters more than anything else.

You are right...each character had a depressing history and I believe Khushi was the luckiest of the lot because she remained blissfully unaware of hers till almost the end. And even she did, she had her love, parents and friends to help her through that difficult base. I didn't think of that earlier until you mentioned.

And thank you for letting me know that despite the despressing backdrop...it turned to be a tale of "hope, love and happiness."

Thank you for appreciating every relationship (other couples) and every nuance of this story. It is thanks to you...readers. If I hadn't been encouraged I probably may have had reservations but never did I feel that the readers didn't enjoy other couples in this story. So there you go...it happened because you guys were awesome.

And the epilogue...well, it is a format. When the writer does prologue, an epilogue is normally done. So for literary purpose that had to be done :)

However I can't help but admire your maturity for letting me know that it was a perfect end as it was. Thank you for that beautiful comment and brilliant support. 🤗




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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: indu9

An awesome mind blowing story! You have woven such a masterpiece. Kudos to you for giving and let us read this wonderful work...hope to see more of your works!


Thank you very much for your lovely appreciation. I am a confident writer (somewhat) today because of you and the rest of my other readers and showed such enthusiasm to read DND. 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sforswe

Beautiful end to an amazing journey. Loved every chapter, thank you for sharing such a wonderful story.


Thank you for reading and taking the time to comment on DND. Enjoyed having you with me on this journey. 🤗And wonderful to know you loved it.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: frenzyy

a beautiful story.. loved reading every bit of it.. the emotional ride of arnav and khushi, the inseparable frens ana-khushi payal.. aman-ana reln, payal-aakash, anjali and shyam wedding! Everything was well crafted! hats off to you.. will wait for epilogue but wll defo miss this story..


Really appreciate your kind words and your superb support since you came on board DND. Thank you 🤗

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ipkknd12

Beautiful ending to this amazing journey. Thanks for the update Sandhya. Though I joined this journey late, I feel privileged to be part of it.

Three musketeers looking forward to their happy beginnings, Arnav meeting Garima by himself... Simply heart warming.
Arnav and Khushi enjoying the courtship phase with a passionate, hot rendezvous in Singapore... I am at loss of words to say anything. Simply speechless. ;)
Sad that this journey has come to an end... Hoping that you will start another arshi story.
Looking forward to the epilogue.



It doesn't matter when you joined because since you joined ...you were very much an active member of DND circle :)

One of the greatest gifts of modern world, social media is the writer getting to know the reader's thoughts on what they had written. And I have been fortunate to have many readers who shared their thoughts on a regular basis - you being one of them. Thank you very much. 🤗

I was privileged to have you as the reader. Thanks again for choosing to read DND.




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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: jitadha

Nice update loved it.


Thank you very much - For reading DND. For staying with it right till the end. It meant a lot for me. Thank you for the encouraging words. 🤗

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