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JumpyUmbrella

@JumpyUmbrella

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

gmsk: Thank you! I hope you'll stick to the story till its end and I hope that you'll like it as it progresses! :)

honey-sweety: There's a lot more than to what's being shown! I can only tell you to keep reading to discover more! 😊

Javeria3991: Same to you Javeria! There's a lot more than to what's being shown! Hang out here and your doubts will either be confirmed or elucidated!😉

And guys, I'm Lenika- nick name/pen name Lena! :)

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JumpyUmbrella

@JumpyUmbrella

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

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Credit for the letter threat goes to Jerry Daroch!

I hope that you people liked it! :)

Happy Ganesh Chaturthi to everyone out here!

Edited by JumpyUmbrella - 10 years ago

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Parvathi Devi

@honey-sweety

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

OMG, what is this and who is this up to???

I am more scared than kush here, now where is Arnav and why is he not on the bed? Is Arnav behind these? i know.. i lost my mind but stil 😳

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JumpyUmbrella

@JumpyUmbrella

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: honey-sweety
OMG, what is this and who is this up to???

I am more scared than kush here, now where is Arnav and why is he not on the bed? Is Arnav behind these? i know.. i lost my mind but stil 😳

Well, you just have to wait and watch!😳 You know, you've left me pondering too, whether Arnav is behind these? 😆 As the story progresses, you'll have a hint of the real culprit, why he's doing so and maybe Anjali really did commit suicide!😛
Follow it, and you'll get to know! :)

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-MIMOSA-

@-MIMOSA-

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Hey! Prologue sure caught my attention. You are doing a great job for a new writer! 👍🏼

More, after I read both the updates.

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PlumesOfLexis

@PlumesOfLexis

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

It's all very confusing and, my mind is botched up in weird thoughts. Why do I feel that Jew is the one who assassinated Anjali? Is he the one?
Everything is pointing to him and in the end, I really think he's the one responsible. The names allocated to the characters are weird though, Jew! 😆
And I even thought I saw Inspector James instead of Jones and incorporated James bond in it!🤣
P.S I never knew that we studied in the same college! It was very awkward when you walked up to me, asking me, "Are you PlumesOfLexis?" and I was like WHAT? Then after the introductions and basic formality, I was like, so it's you? You seem a good person! 😛😆 Anyway, purani baaton par mitti dalo (If you can figure out what it means! 😆)! We're now friends and all is very much okay between us!

Edited by PlumesOfLexis - 11 years ago

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JumpyUmbrella

@JumpyUmbrella

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: mimosa658
Hey! Prologue sure caught my attention. You are doing a great job for a new writer! 👍🏼
More, after I read both the updates.

Hey! Thank you for the encouraging words! I hope that you enjoy the story more as it progresses!

If you like it, could you please suggest it to other people?

Thank you, for the heartfelt comment, once again. 🤗

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-MIMOSA-

@-MIMOSA-

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Done with both the updates! And I would say:

Wonderful!

Interesting!

Intriguing! (a lot!!)

And now, I am hooked! You are doing a brilliant job here, dear...so keep going! I wish and hope that more and more people know about this story, and don't miss it!

There is a lot to speculate and I would keep on guessing endlessly...I loved how you intermingled the real and reel life! Thats a unique one for sure! Great job! 👏

Happy Ganesh Chathurthi to you too 😊

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Param

@pup03

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

very good start of a very interesting story!!! loving the idea.. real and reel being interconnected.. does those Resistance exist in real?? does arnav have any role in anjali's suicide or murder or in the mystery of suicide/murder? where is he at this time of night and his phone is off? khushi had a bad dream.. hope nothing happens to khushi.. loved the start of story.. looking forward to read more.. best wishes and happy writing 😊

Happy Ganesh Chaturthi!

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Penny

@penny25

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#20

Dat was really gud!!!!
it was really intriguing...got me hooked from d frst line...

d brilliant way u have made dis stry!!!!!!! twistin d reel plot to a real plot...

makin it sooo real!!!!!

m telling u in a few updates...u'l bcum vry popular ... bcox u actually have a way wid wrds...

So gald I cud come across dis stry in the very beginning...:)

u're really gud...keep up the gud wrk...:)
best wishes...

p.s. thanks for The PM

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