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Posted: 11 years ago
#41
honey-sweety : It's not that palpable about the murderer; Chill!😳 When I was drafting it, I had thought that I had been doing it in such a way to ease the readers' confusions and suspicions but after writing it and re-reading it, it doesn't seem so! I, myself, am confused as to the hints I had left!😆

mimosa658 : Thank you for the words of encouragement Mimosa! I owe you something for boosting my morale repeatedly.
P.S I'll definitely try my hands at an umbrell-ified story after this one ends, and, it'll be dedicated to you! :)

P.S Guys, don't confuse yourself and strain your mind. Next chapter will be clearer, I promise!😊
And, what did you think of the second letter threat? I wrote that poem-threat by myself, my first try at it. How was it?😳
If you haven't read The Fault In Our Stars by John Green, try it! It will have you laughing and weeping in the joy and tragedy of it all! :)
Edited by JumpyUmbrella - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42
once again wonderful update.. arnav is recovering.. khushi's brother who hates arnav doesn't want khushi to be with arnav but instead wants to take his sister to India.. looking at things and hearing arnav's statement doubt seems to be on arnav, nk and shyam.. but why would arnav want to kill his wife who is pregnant, shyam too i don't have any theory for him.. but for nk i feel he can do it just to threaten khushi so that she would come with him leaving arnav.. but then the question comes to why would he kill two people?? had he or somebody else who is still hiding behind and doing everything?? jyada jor nahin dena bheje par.. will wait for next update.. loved this update a lot.. 😃

thanks for pm 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: JumpyUmbrella

mimosa658 : Thank you for the words of encouragement Mimosa! I owe you something for boosting my morale repeatedly.
P.S I'll definitely try my hands at an umbrell-ified story after this one ends, and, it'll be dedicated to you! :)

P.S Guys, don't confuse yourself and strain your mind. Next chapter will be clearer, I promise!😊
And, what did you think of the second letter threat? I wrote that poem-threat by myself, my first try at it. How was it?😳
If you haven't read The Fault In Our Stars by John Green, try it! It will have you laughing and weeping in the joy and tragedy of it all! :)



You are most welcome dear...🤗

You wrote that threat-poem!! You certainly deserve an applause!...👏...that was brilliant!

PS: Will look forward to your umbrellafied story...

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Posted: 11 years ago
#44
Awesome update ohh no d murderer is behind Kushi's baby now
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45
Note:
Hey everyone reading this fan-fiction! Here's a note tacked up to inform you guys that I'll be away for the whole month of September as I'll be on holidays and will be travelling. Hence, I will not be able to draft the chapters and post them.
Will you guys be able to wait till October for the next chapter?
I'm really sorry, but, I can't do otherwise. My heartfelt apologies to you all.
I hope that you'll hang around and I'll still see you all when I come back here next month!😊
And, I also hope to accommodate new readers till then!😊
Also, please share the story if you like it guys! I understand that many people would not be willing to read thriller stories and romance genres remain their priority, but still...

P.S I'll be travelling to Mauritius. So, if you want, I can share pictures of the beaches there once I'm back. I heard the beaches are blissful havens and that the island is a paradise on earth, so I'm really looking forward and am all keyed up for it!😃

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Posted: 11 years ago
#46

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So? Now, who do you think it was? There were a few hints in the chapter- I hope they have seeped in! 😊

Thank you for reading! If you like the story, please share it with your friends!

*Asphyxia is a noun, commonly describing a condition arising when the body is deprived of oxygen, causing unconsciousness or death; suffocation.

P.S As mentioned above, I'm all set in holidays and, the chapters shall be tardy. Sorry!

Edited by JumpyUmbrella - 10 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
Yay! I'm 1st!
This story is really awesome!
I'm really loving it!
Can you please PM me whenever you update? (if you don't mind)
Hope you enjoy your vacation!
Can't wait for the next update!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48
Hey! Welcome back dear! Hope you had a great vacation!
I still have no clue at all! I am more confused than ever!

And I can't see any of the hint here! 😕

Great Update!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
Gosh. This is such a well written thriller. Every time I conclude the killer I go back to square one.
Do continue soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50
Crazyforsarun : Thank you for liking the way the story is.😊 I can message, you, of course but the messages will be sent really late, not exactly after the chapters are posted, maybe one or two days after. Is that okay?😳
Thank you!

Mimosa658 : You know, I always look forward to reading your review of any chapter that I draft. This assures me that I'm on the right track, always. I can only say that the culprit is here, in this chapter (Literally/Omnipresent 😛) but he/she's here! I suggest you to read the threat letters once again. You'll find the root of it all. (Maybe the wife part may deem incomprehensible, but in two chapters that will be elucidated too!)

...Iyla... : Hey! Welcome aboard Lyla! Thank you for appreciating the thriller. A thriller is meant to make the reader circumambulate round and round!😆 It's true though, I've been re-reading everything since the start and I've gotten kind of confused too! But, patience is the solution to all qualms.

Arshi.Sugi.IPK : Thank you for being a regular reader! It means a lot!😃


Re-read the letters if you really want to know who the culprit is. The letters evoke a lot of things!
Thank you for reading!😊
P.S I was really nervous about this chapter and many negative things could be pointed out, but, I'm glad that you took things positively.
Next chapter today, late evening, or next Sunday!

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