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Happytwinkle

@Happytwinkle

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#101

marvelous update

loved it

thanks for the pm

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sanghita0000

@sanghita0000

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#102

WOW!! Brilliant update...loved it dear...

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Uzii

@Uzii

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#103

Mystery n mystery such a fabulous story plz continue soon as it's killing me tht who the real culprit is.

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anjs

@anjs

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#104

i knew the needle wud point at arnav, eventually...seriously hope its not so...

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Rhea

@BarmeenForever

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#105

JU!
Finally, the wait has come to an end. Each chapter of this fan fiction is as intriguing as its name. When I first saw Payal I was like Haila New Entry!😆
It did introduce a lot of qualms in my mind and, I am as eager to clear these doubts.
As as saw that Arnav wasn't there, I knew that you wanted to make believe that he is behind all this and, as Payal confirmed it, I was assured that something's fishy. I can never be Arnav, since it's too palpable.
Will be waiting for the next chapter!
Don't worry about the response. It will grow once regular chapters are on the way😊

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Param

@pup03

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#106

payal said its arnav.. and arnav is having his solace time in toilet due to his lose motions.. well that was once again very intriguing part.. and khushi is cool.. well happy to know that you are there now and really do update soon would like to see where are things leading to and why was payal on road at night and where was she running from her own house and what is reason for arnav to do what he is doing as even khushi's life is in danger that means arnav wants to kill his khushi too.. well interesting..

thanks for pm 😊