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badfaith4u

@badfaith4u

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#841

Khushi's responses were just like her. Hilarious and unexpected.

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Anuradha

@lovebarun...

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#842

i feel like hitting arnav with a roller-pin myself

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rakenduvadana

@rakenduvadana

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#843

Congrats for the new work Smita...As always it is outstanding

OMG smita what did arnav plan?

I am really surprised with his audacity

wanna read the next part soon

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pinkly

@pinkly

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#844

Oh no... that was disgusting. Oh the last line was too creepy... looks like Arnav and Shyam's roles are reversed in this story. I am getting so angry at Arnav now... Come on Khushi push him hard and kick him where it hurts for saying such cheap things about you.

Hey Smita, I know that Khushi in your stories is always a strong woman. And I love that fact. Please don't make her a cry baby in this one. I hope she is strong enough to reply back.

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phillips_2909

@phillips_2909

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#845

damm again misunderstanding

he never think twice while doing

waiting for next

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Anjani Patel

@Titaliya_AP

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#846

Welp, I hope for no less of ASR, but Khushi's reactions were quite pleasant! It was innocence, adorable, cuteness, and much more all rolled into one! ;D But what I'm really looking forward to now is Khushi's reaction to ASR's words. She's nothing less of a spitfire and I expect nothing less! :) Can't wait for the next updates!!

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Pinky.Raizada

@Pinky.Raizada

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#847

Khushi is so naive. I loved her answers to his questions. Can't wait for the next one.

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BS.ILoveYou

@BS.ILoveYou

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#848

Smita Di...Loving the new Kahani...

ASR & Khushi both talking senseless ...🤔

Khushi in her innocence

Khushi frowned. What fault was it of hers that her parents were dead? "I didn't destroy our family," she tried to explain. "My parents died in an accident."

ASR narrowed his eyes. "They are dead? That is good," he hissed.

Khushi frowned. "Why? Why is it good that they are dead?" she asked curiously.

"They would have died of shame to see what their daughter has grown up to become," ASR said cuttingly.

Khushi's face fell. "Yes, you are right," she sighed.

His eyes zoomed on to her sad, penitent eyes.

"They wanted me to become a doctor, but I am a receptionist at a law firm," she mourned.

ASR in his akad...

"I can give you more of whatever Shyam has been giving you," he whispered his promise. "More money, more gold, more... fun..."

Khushi's wide eyes resembled saucers and her mouth remained open like a gasping fish.

He ran a finger down her cheek, savouring the creamy silk.

"What is your going price, Khushi Kumari Gupta?" he asked. There was no anger in his voice, only a mild curiosity.

Rashmi Di...

Thank you for the mails.

Edited by B.S.I_Love_You - 11 years ago

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rulama

@rulama

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 11 years ago

#849

Originally posted by: sheshnag1952
A nice update. Can I slap anjali not arnav too. Anjali for thinking and making up a story and arnav for believing her crap. What will happen to poor khushi now. Hope all these are a plan made by shayam and anjali to bring arnav and khushi together. Waiting to read more.

You are more than welcome to do so...

If you want you can give one or two more on behalf of me too... You can always claim it as...

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