Smitar's OS SERIES: TRYST IN THE CARDS #2 OS 7 Link to #3 in Pg 1

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Varsha Dutt

@varsha2KD

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#431

Superb updates...
Kya baat hai Arnavji... honeymoon ke planning... 😳
loved the updates...

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smitar

@smitar

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+ 8

Posted: 11 years ago

#432

Originally posted by: segad
Smitaji
I have a challenge for you. I know you keep away from the Shyam character in your stories. But I think you should write a story with Shyam in it. Not as a snake but a nice guy and he should be instrumental in bringing Arnav Khushi together but Khushi cannot be related to him or cannot be his maani hui behen. Your challenge is to take a character you don't normally write about, a character whose name is associated with negative connotations and make him the sutradhaar in a way or a pivotal character without whom the fairy tale ending will not happen.

Kyun? up for it?

Meri Maa!😃

Up for it. Kar doongi in next OS.😆

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Srilatha

@Srilathalolla

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#433

Originally posted by: smitar

Meri Maa!😃

Up for it. Kar doongi in next OS.😆

Wow Interesting will be waiting to read the OS 😉

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Hetal

@Divyahet

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#434

Wonderful Idea Segad,
Shyam in goody goody avtar,
Smitaji hum he ready..he taiyaar...
To read this one too.
Love you.

Last but not least...hum waiting for the next parts of ongoing OS.

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Manal Ali

@.YixingsManal.

Achiever

+ 8

Posted: 11 years ago

#435

Love Jyo for passing the link<3 read it in one go<3 can't wait for the honeymoon;)

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sheshnag1952

@sheshnag1952

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#436

oh my my what temper from asr. and why are always interrupted when they are talking something important. i think arnav's decisions for privacy is just. hope they have a wonderful honeymoon . and a;ll their misunderstanding come to end. a very nice update. and waiting to read more.