Smitar's OS SERIES: TRYST IN THE CARDS #2 OS 7 Link to #3 in Pg 1 - Page 45

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Posted: 11 years ago
Woww...awesum story, loved all d updates. Pls cntnue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Elegant way to present the emotions...
get very touchy to read the confession of Khushi about her life,,,,,,,,,,

Hope ASR can clearfy her insecurities...


Plz update next soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Love this Arnav very much, still angry and straightforward but still understading.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome Update..
Its nice that the misunderstanding regarding Arnav's lady love is solved and I really liked the way Arnav replied to the family in last section.

I hope Khushi will be same bubbly Khushi after the travel
Update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Omg this is adorable.. i love this story
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Posted: 11 years ago
Good thing is Khushi spoke about her childhood and adopted family. Arnav wanted to talk to her about his changed feelings. But Anjali had to interrupt them. But I am glad he and Khushi are going on their honeymoon. Arnav will have lots of opportunities to clarify.

I am not liking this anger Arnav is throwing at his family. As he said, he is a grown of 30 years. If he is still manipulated / blackmailed by his family, then it is his fault. He married Khushi under pressure without thinking about her feelings. Then it is his fault too.


All parts were nicely written. Continue soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Dear I really love your story specialty how you prescribe Khushis feeling and how protective and caring ASR ...

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Posted: 11 years ago
wow i loved it
wrong timing by nani and family
right time and action by ASR to renew his marriage with khushi
obligation should not be life's goal than love
way to go ASR👍🏼
smita di awesome and perfect update i loved the way u have written to pour down khushi's inner feelings👏
rashmi thank u dear
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Posted: 11 years ago

I am here again... asking for another update...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome Waiting for next :)

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