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Hetal

@Divyahet

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#411

OMG Smitaji kya baat he hum? roz updates..humaare liye toh sone ka suraj nikalta he 😳 bas yoohi aapki kripa hum par rahe.🤗

loved all the parts,
the way Khushi talked with Arnav,
Arnav's reactions and his tries to solve each misunderstanding,
Loved the way you wrote her inner turmoil(brought tears in my eyes actually)
The way Arnav talked with his family..👏👏
I liked the decision he made for them.👏👏
now I am eagerly waiting for much needed talk by Arnav..
will he share his past with her ?
will he tell how much he is always waiting for a hug now a days ?
will he confess how much he enjoys her sweet chatter ???

update soon😳😆
take care of yourselves,
love n hugs.

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phillips_2909

@phillips_2909

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#412

brilliant

let her know the past

waiting

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mishti_17

@mishti_17

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#413

Loved the updates.. Khushi is so lively and the truth of how they got married has broken her.. Though she had some misunderstandings earlier which got off later but still the reality of their marriage hurts her but now Arnav has dome something out of his character.. He is falling for Khushi, truly and deeply..😳 Waiting eagerly for the next..

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Deepa

@deepa.e

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#414

Originally posted by: smitar

It is beautiful!

Dekho, dekho!

I have been to coorg 2 times but still was not able to visit fully!! i mean cover up all the tourist place!!

Wish i travel one more time for watching these and also all falls! esp aby falls!!

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yoga123

@yoga123

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#415

I felt so sorry for khushi when she was explaining what she felt as an adopted daughter of shashi gupta...she wanted to have some thing of her own...her husband, her children and she to her family...Loved ASR in action with the family...he declared that he will take care of her and she is not a servant in the house...she will have to be treated as a daughter in-law...he is ensuring that...thanks for the PM

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Tvbug2011

@tvbug2011

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#416

Aaah ASR on the war-path!! So gladdened my heart!! Loved this episode. Thanks, Smita. 🤗

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IPKlover

@IPKlover

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#417

Oh my God!! Oh my God!!! Oh my God!!! The updates were out of this world!!! Arnav has won me over with his words!!! That was amazing!!! Simply superb!!! 👏

I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE!!!!! PLEASE UPDATE ASAP!!!! AND DO NOT EVEN THINK OF FINISHING THIS OS SOON...IT HAS ALL THE POTENTIAL OF BECOMING A GREAT GREAT GREAT FF!!!! ❤️

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Meerah14

@Meerah14

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#418

so much pain in khushi...good that she is clearing all to arnav...

good to see arnav is taking so much stand for khushi before his family..

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Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#419

yaaay - that was awesome - ASR I love u - that was IT - what a blast - loved it loved it smita

rashmi, a special very special 🤗 to you - what a performance ASR wah wah wah

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segad

@segad

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#420

Smitaji

I have a challenge for you. I know you keep away from the Shyam character in your stories. But I think you should write a story with Shyam in it. Not as a snake but a nice guy and he should be instrumental in bringing Arnav Khushi together but Khushi cannot be related to him or cannot be his maani hui behen. Your challenge is to take a character you don't normally write about, a character whose name is associated with negative connotations and make him the sutradhaar in a way or a pivotal character without whom the fairy tale ending will not happen.

Kyun? up for it?

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