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Posted: 10 years ago

#541

Whoa!!!! The updates are going from best- best-er -best-est! (I hope something like that was there!)

VaVru And PP were super awesome!

Thanks for the pm and Please continue soon!

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AikaSheikh

@AikaSheikh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#542

Oh, WOWWW!!! Dear, this is so BEAUTIFUL!!!! Romance everywhere!!! ❤️❤️

I love the way you describe those kissing scene. So beautifully written! 👏👏👏

Do update soon, Dear!

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Angela Grokes

@Angela_Grokes

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Posted: 10 years ago

#543

Originally posted by: Yagyaseni
Vrushali Bhabhi aap to gayi kaam se!!! Aryaputra, smaran rahe, vivaah abhi shesh hai!! Hame koi shubh samachar abhi mat dena!!! Awesome update, dear!!! Very enticing!!! Loved it!!!

Thank You dear! @bold - 😲 Chintit na ho Yagyaseni, vivah se pehle koi shubh samachar nahi milega!😆

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Angela Grokes

@Angela_Grokes

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Posted: 10 years ago

#544

Originally posted by: 8520NK
Angelaa, OMG this was soo wonderful😃
I loved this update soo much! The way the romance of both the couples was portrayed was truly beautiful😊

FINALLY, the much awaited kiss with now the closed door😉 was sheer brilliance on your part!

Amazingg😳

Thank you very much dear!

It is all because of the readers who encourage us to become better. Without reader, we have no value. So, all the credit goes to all of you who read our works and encourage us to write better.

By the way read you OS, speechless, it cannot be your first work!👏

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Angela Grokes

@Angela_Grokes

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Posted: 10 years ago

#545

Originally posted by: Texie
It was really wonderful

Thank you!😳

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Angela Grokes

@Angela_Grokes

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Posted: 10 years ago

#546

Originally posted by: Sanjana_JA
Nice update dear😊
Vasusen and Vrushali are so cute😛

Parth and Panchi had their first kiss,and clever they are that this time they closed the door😉😳

Thanks a lot dear!

@bold - As they say - you learn from you mistakes.

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Angela Grokes

@Angela_Grokes

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#547

Originally posted by: Mala_TM
Aww such a romantic update dear!!!!☺️☺️☺️
First time seeing the romantic and naughty side of Vasusen...☺️😳😆

Paarth and Panchi have done what they have left the day before😳

...with closed door now...☺️☺️😳

Loved this update!!!❤️

Waiting for the next update.. Update soon!!😃

Thanks a lot dear!

Now romance romance , all around, we had enough of it, time for some action!😉

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Angela Grokes

@Angela_Grokes

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#548

Originally posted by: mothiaai
Angela, OMG this was soo wonderful😃👏
I loved this update soo much! The way the romance of both the couples was portrayed was truly beautiful😊

FINALLY, the much awaited kiss with now the closed door😉 was sheer brilliance on your part!

Amazing

It was something out of d world😳

so cute..romantic..sweet..yet passionate at the d same time...😳

loved d update dear..

comeback soon

n update really soon bcz i'm getting seriously impatient to read the ff...

thanks for d pm..

do continue sooon

Oh thanks a lot darling.

With the story proceeding, I am loving to read the replies by you readers. They are just so contenting .

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Angela Grokes

@Angela_Grokes

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#549

Originally posted by: ...Hemangi
Wow !! An update full of romance & kisses 😆

Glad to see the naughty side of Vasusen 😆 And what sort of competition is Vasusen & Vrushali having between themselves but its cute. Going by the naughty side of Vasusen it seems like Vrushali will have another daily chore to add to her routine - kissing Vasusen every morning b4 getting up 😳 😆

And finally Paarth & Panchi had their first kiss ❤️ with the doors now properly shut 😆. Panchi this time making sure no any external factor can come between their kiss. 😆

Will be waiting for the next chapter 😊

Well thanks Hemangi! (is that your real name?)

Your detailed feedbacks have been a treat for me to read.

Will be updating today!😉

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Angela Grokes

@Angela_Grokes

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Posted: 10 years ago

#550

Originally posted by: Sha-Ja-Fanatic
Whoa!!!! The updates are going from best- best-er -best-est! (I hope something like that was there!)
VaVru And PP were super awesome!

Thanks for the pm and Please continue soon!

Well thanks a lot Sam!😃

I can only promise to keep you all entertained. Hope you will like the coming update too!