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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Angela_Grokes

Thank you very much dear!

You still have to see the whole idea behind Ulupi's entry so keep reading!😉


Oh, is it??? Well well well, Cant hardly wait for it! 😉😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
Angela, No Update today 😭
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ...Hemangi

Angela, No Update today 😭

updating it!😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

When the dawn hit, Vrushali got up with the first ray of the Sun, falling on her face. She looked at a sleeping Vasusen and smiled. "Is this really, the Vasusen I know!" She thought. Passing on a smile on his dear one, she stood up to proceed. It was then that she realised that her wrist, was caught by him. Controlling her heartbeat, she looked at him. When the morning glow had covered his face, glowing like a brand, she commanded. "Vasusen! Leave me!". He, smirking at his shy wife whispered in her ear, "I won't!". Alerted by the two words that Vasusen was in no mood to separate, she answered him back with a smirk, "You can never defeat me! Let me go Vasusen!". "Now the game is getting interesting! Can you tell me how?" He asked. Balancing the boat of her fingers on the sea of his hair, she answered, "If you want an answer!". Then, she ran a slow balancer through the edge of her feelings, and proceeded towards him. Finally, smiling, their lips melted together in the sunshine entering in their room through the window. At the end, when they needed to breathe to stay alive, they separated. "Now, time to head to work!" She told him and started with her daily chores.
Paarth, with the first shine hitting his face , woke up. With the thoughts of his sweetheart in mind he got up and got ready for the day waiting ahead. today, they had to work for the quest, with Panchi near him, it seemed to be a recreational time, though. Now with a happy curve on his lips, he opened the door to the world outside his room. Finding Panchi just in front, waiting with her smile which was the glowing sunrise that greeted him every morning as he woke. "Yes?" He asked. "Good Morning!" She replied, seizing some distance away. "I wanted to complete some task which was interrupted last night!" She told. With his finger admiring her curves, he pulled her closer, taking her waist in custody. "Well I guess, before we get started," she closed the door by her leg and added, "that was important. Wasn't it?". "Oh. It was really very very important!" He said with a smirk. "Now I guess we should," he spoke with a chain of thoughts, "we really should!" she completed his words just like she completed. Closing her eyes before the union of their lips, she experience the feeling of being in the hands which formed a fraction of her soul. With her body in the custody of those muscles, she felt protected, complete and her importance too. And with the second passing by, their soft cherry lips met; not to say goodbye this time, but to say hello the long future they had ahead of them.
TBC
Update comes tomorrow.
Edited by Angela_Grokes - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Vrushali Bhabhi aap to gayi kaam se!!! Aryaputra, smaran rahe, vivaah abhi shesh hai!! Hame koi shubh samachar abhi mat dena!!! Awesome update, dear!!! Very enticing!!! Loved it!!!
Edited by Yagyaseni - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Angelaa, OMG this was soo wonderful😃
I loved this update soo much! The way the romance of both the couples was portrayed was truly beautiful😊
FINALLY, the much awaited kiss with now the closed door😉 was sheer brilliance on your part!
Amazingg😳
Edited by 8520NK - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update dear😊
Vasusen and Vrushali are so cute😛
Parth and Panchi had their first kiss,and clever they are that this time they closed the door😉😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
Aww such a romantic update dear!!!!☺️☺️☺️
First time seeing the romantic and naughty side of Vasusen...☺️😳😆
Paarth and Panchi have done what they have left the day before😳
...with closed door now...☺️☺️😳
Loved this update!!!❤️
Waiting for the next update.. Update soon!!😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
Angela, OMG this was soo wonderful😃👏
I loved this update soo much! The way the romance of both the couples was portrayed was truly beautiful😊
FINALLY, the much awaited kiss with now the closed door😉 was sheer brilliance on your part!
Amazing

It was something out of d world😳
so cute..romantic..sweet..yet passionate at the d same time...😳
loved d update dear..
comeback soon
n update really soon bcz i'm getting seriously impatient to read the ff...
thanks for d pm..
do continue sooon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow !! An update full of romance & kisses 😆

Glad to see the naughty side of Vasusen 😆 And what sort of competition is Vasusen & Vrushali having between themselves but its cute. Going by the naughty side of Vasusen it seems like Vrushali will have another daily chore to add to her routine - kissing Vasusen every morning b4 getting up 😳 😆

And finally Paarth & Panchi had their first kiss ❤️ with the doors now properly shut 😆. Panchi this time making sure no any external factor can come between their kiss. 😆

Will be waiting for the next chapter 😊

Edited by ...Hemangi - 10 years ago

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