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Sanjana_JA

@Sanjana_JA

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#561

Awesome chappy Angela😛

Twilight mirror concept was very nice😃

The whole crazy family,i just love it😆

Subhi tongue slipped😉,confused Panchi and Parth😳

Panchi is so daring👏,i guess that thief is Bhanumati😲

Waiting for the teaser dear continue soon😊

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...Hemangi

@...Hemangi

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#562

That was quite a thrilling update 😊

By reading the first two lines of Vasusen & then Vrushali something else came to my mind. When I proceeded further I again had to re-read from first to understand better.😆

The concept of mirror of twilight reminded me of some other story, a bit similar to this but the plot is different. Hope the mirror helps the gang to find the Amber Room.

Panchi in a sleuth avatar 😆 but Shubhi foiled it

Thanx to Shubhi, Panchi & Paarth almost got caught with Dhrit'yuma questioning. 😆

So the mysterious person following after them & the mirror is a woman with pink nails of course. Is she Bhanumati ?? or I have another person in mind.

Will be waiting for ur upcoming chapters. Lets see if my guess is right. 😉

Edited by ...Hemangi - 10 years ago

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LiveYourDream

@LiveYourDream

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#563

Wow an action packed update! Great going...
It is not easy to think up stuff for this mystery/action FF and you are doing a great job!
So Subhi nearly spilled the beans on PP eh? wonder how everyone will react when they find out😉
Looking forward to the next update...thanks for the PM

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viji2111

@viji2111

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 10 years ago

#564

Awsome update.

It is getting more and more interesting.

All of them are a big happy family.

I wish they stay like that.

But as you mentioned in previous updates that they sometimes are getting flashbacks from their past I was thinking what would happen when Panchi gets to know that she was married to 5 brothers and had refused to marry the eldest.

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Yagya

@Yagyaseni

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#565

Pehli baat i am sorry for not being the first, Angela!!! Kya karen no time yaar!! Now coming to the update, god it was a romantic thriller!!! So happy for Vavru and ParChi!!! Govind we know your naughtiness!! I guess the woman is Bhanumathi!!! Paarth kahan gaya jab uski jaan lad rahi thi!?! I can guess you have a reason for this too!!!

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AikaSheikh

@AikaSheikh

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#566

Oh, GOD!!! The thrill was AWESOME!!! Totally love the suspense, Angela!

I think I know who's that girl. Ya, will wait the answer till the next update 😉😉

Thank you for the PM, Dear!

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.Vaikartana.

@.Vaikartana.

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#567

OMG!!!This is not fair.Always their effort goes futile as someone steals or snatches it away from them.Why is Govind silent??Is that woman Uloopi??Eager for the next part

PS:Also waiting for Radha-Govind moments

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mothiaai

@mothiaai

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#568

hey that was a nice thriller😃👏

i think dat d lady was either bhanumati or uloopi..

well pink nail polish mostly shd b uloopi coz bhanumati wud use black nail polish😉😆

well dey r loosing everything dat dey get ...thats unfair..agreed dat life is unfair bt still😡

i hope panchi goes behind d lady n gets d twilight mirror..n paarth realises dat panchi is not around n gets panicked..so maybe some paarth-panchi scene wud be grt...😳

i dont wats d story in ur mind bt dis wud be grt..(i think😭)

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-Everglow-

@-Everglow-

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#569

You! You are making me go crazy with the wonderful twists!
The part was awesome!!!!
PP were nearly caught!!
I loved the family-fun part!
Was it Bhanumati??
Anway, Thanks for the pm and Please Continue soon!

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Angela Grokes

@Angela_Grokes

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#570

Originally posted by: 8520NK
Finally, first to reply🥳
Suspense and all huh?😉

Awesomee update! I think you've gotten used to listening to this😛

But seriously the thrill I was getting while reading this was amazing, the quest part of it is really proceeding in a commendable way😃

And who is this woman? I suspect either Uloopi or Bhanumati😊

Please suspense kholo, waiting for the update and it's teaser😳

Thanks Navu. I am excited myself, because this brain has so much stored in. I am excited to read the replies by you all.