MB FF : On the Quest || Pg. 144 - Ch.50 & Note || - Page 53

So romance in the air for PP, very cutely portrayed. Some of the dialogues were truly humorous, especially the one Paarth says about the food! Waiting to see what shade of character Uloopi will turn out to be😉
And Subhi...has a smart mouth on her ...great characterization!

Originally posted by: vaikartana

Awesome update☺️Kash P-P ne door band kiya hotaAnd the family part was so funny.😆Bechara mera Vasu😒😆everybody excused themselves from his cooking.Dont worry my hero I am ready anyday to have whatever you cook🤗And Govind going to dine with his neighbour.And Uloopi is here.Curious!!!

Thanks dear! Oh I guess you love Vasusen a lot. Aww that's sweet😳

Originally posted by: mothiaai

hey i loved to the sun n back..it was dat gud..😛👏⭐️

loved parth panchi romance..too cute😳

the family part where everyone starts leaving was damn hilarious

bt d interuption by subhi...😎

do update soon...waiting eagerly

thanks for d pm

Thanks dear!

Originally posted by: Sanjana_JA

Awesome update dear😛

So Uloopi made her entry making Panchi possessive😆,and i sense some mystery involved in her words

Vasusen lost the bet and whole family got punishment😆

The girl's gang has their own plan but poor boys had to find excuses to escape😆,finally Vasusen really did get punished😉

Uff Parth Panchi having romance,and Subhi became haddi for their first kiss or i should say Parth himself left the haddi-the Door open😳😉😆

Next time doors windows bandh kiya karo Parth

Better luck next time Parth😳😆

Thanks dear!

Originally posted by: hpatgiri

Wow what an update dear 😊

So that was Paarth's secret plan 😉. No wonder he grabbed the book of "26 ways of Love mak..." 😆

Entry of Ulupi made Panchi possessive 😆. Ulupi seems to me like a bookworm and I am getting a feeling that she is also going to be part of the quest in discovering some facts and history about Amber room much to the dismay of Panchi. Hhmm... should I imagine Ulupi as an attractive beauty with large black rimmed glasses... a classy nerdy look 😆

So it seemed Vasusen's secret plans 😉 didn't work out well for him 😆. He ended up getting punished instead.

Poor Vasusen hope he would be able to finish up all the food w/o any stomach ache 😆. The boys also bore his punishment. Oh... I pity them.

Paarth surely has some naughty motives and Panchi was finally lured into it 😳 until Shubhi interrupted & reminded him of shutting the door 😆 Paarth in his excitement forgets to do some imp. things.

This was a very naughty update dear. But u didn't reveal Vasusen's secret plans and how he ended up being punished 😆. I am expecting a pouting face of Vasusen and Vrushali consoling him and a err ... 😳 ☺️... hope u got my point in ur next part. 😆

Thanks for such a detailed feedback dear.

Originally posted by: Sha-Ja-Fanatic

Poor PP!! Subhi😡😆!! Naughty girl!

Uh!! Someone was being extremely possessive, huh?

Ulupi seems to bug me too... Nothing, but she seems a bit.. weird..

😆 Vasusen got punishment! Vrushali is awesome!

Something is cooking between Govind and Radha, I reckon..

Anyway, the part was awesome!! Thanks for the pm and Continue soon!

P.S.- Mamashri, Dury, Dushi and Bhanu.. Where are they? Does Ulupi have something to do with them?

Thanks dear!!!

Originally posted by: AikaSheikh

Oh, WOW WOW!!!! I cant even type a comment. This is superb, Angela! Totally love it!!! ❤️

Poor Vasusen and the boys!!!! 😆😆😆

Panchi's jealoussy are so cute! I like it, especially when she show her possesion towards Parth. 😉

And the last part are just AWESOME!!!! 👏👏👏

Do update soon, Dear! 😉

Thank you very much dear!

Originally posted by: LiveYourDream

So romance in the air for PP, very cutely portrayed. Some of the dialogues were truly humorous, especially the one Paarth says about the food! Waiting to see what shade of character Uloopi will turn out to be😉
And Subhi...has a smart mouth on her ...great characterization!

Ulupi's shade is one of the most interesting part of the story. I can promise you that!