Forever..?? ~ ||KriYaansh Drabble Series Chap 3 ~ pg 11 (19 nov 2014)

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|| Forever..?? ||




Chapter 1


As the howling wind swayed its way in the deep valley. He stood still, his hand tightly clutching the rope. His heart was numb, it was like in a second it will stop and the fable world will come to an end.


His body stiffened, as he saw her falling down in a great speed and her hands forwarding towards him. To catch them, to catch her, to catch his Love.


But it was of no use she was far away from his hold, for his hand. He stood their numb not making any move of his muscles, only staring at the figure which was falling down with a great force making his eyes moist with the stream of hot salty water.


Though there was a far distance between them, still he could sense her orbs which were staring at him.


She knew it was end and there was no way of escaping from there now. She looked up she could sense his eyes moisten looking at her. But she was motionless she couldn't do anything. She was helpless.


She just kept on staring at his far figure hanged over the rope. She was tearing for the first time. She knew he will try to end his life if her life would come to an end and she didn't want that, not now at least.


"I love You Rey" she screamed with a smile adoring her lips and eyes getting moist, "Take care of yourself please and don't do any stupid thing. I will keep an eye on you" saying this she closed her eyes.


Splash there was a sound of water as if something is fallen in the water, and he knew what that thing was he shouted "Kriya" he shouted his loves name. But to his disappointment there was no one to reply. The world stopped for him.


He had heard her scream the last few words. Which was only and only for him. "I love you too Kriya" he whispered and motioned himself to climb the remaining rock alone and reach the top. He could easily imagine his life with the rock climbing he is doing now.


She has left him all alone to achieve all the heights in his life. He stepped his foot on top of the mountain and soon the reality came down hitting him hard.


He fell down on his knees crying for his love that he lost few minutes back. He cried he called her, he shouted but no use there was no one he was all alone now.


He sensed himself fainting, and suddenly everything went black. He lied there like a soul without life.


ek shaqs raaste mein kahin choot gaya tha
us haadse ke baad, yeh dil toot gaya tha


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Index
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Chapter 1 : Scroll Up
Chapter 2 : Page no. 6
Chapter 3 : Page no. 11
Edited by -reine- - 10 years ago
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Note


Hello people!
After a long time isn't it..?? well so ya m here with all new stories whose concept was suggested by Simran.

So I know many must be waiting for my updates of my FF and SS which m not giving but i promise to continue it soon. M just stuck up in few chores and not getting time to write anything.

So coming to main point there are few things which i want to clear before itself.

1. Been it's Drabble series, the update will consist maximum 500-600 words not more than that, well once in a blue moon u can expect that also.😆

2. Updates will be posted on alternate day, or may be with 2-3 days gap in middle. As i get time for my classes and all. But promise to update it soon.

Thats it. I wanted to clear this things only, Do give me some suggestion if you want.
comments please..!!

Well one more last thing anyone free to make banner for my this story, please do contact me.
Edited by -reine- - 11 years ago
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Resh
unres

wowwzz abhi a new story😲🥳

Kria dead😲

Oh god

But beautifully penned down👏

continue soonish⭐️⭐️

btw moi os😭??

P.S - y s manu angry wit me😲😕
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I loved the start...
I now it was tragic but really loved it!
It was superbly written...their helplessness, pain and love was beautifully depicted!
Update soon...really want to read more...and read soon too
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nyc strt
love to read more
cont soon

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Brilliant concept...

just loved it...
Awesome update...
love the way you have decribed their emotions in just few lines...
kria was falling and rey can't do anything to save his love, his life...
and ria knew if she will die than rey will also be lifeless and will try to kill himself and there fore in short span of time...she souted that she loves him very much and request him not todo anything wrong with his life and take proper care of himself as she will keep an eye on him...😭😭
this is really emotional...
kria is no more with rey...
don't know how will rey survive without his love...😭😭😭
thae story start where some story ends...
interesting...
very excited to know what will happen next...
waiting for next update...
thanx for pm..
continue soon...
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Seemes intresting Abhi 😃
Awesom CS loved it
Want to read it more
Confused bhi hu so write fast
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Awesome start..
really interesting...
waiting for the next part..
Continue soon..
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Interesting
nice start
love to read more
thnx for pm
cont soon

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