Forever..?? ~ ||KriYaansh Drabble Series Chap 3 ~ pg 11 (19 nov 2014) - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter 2


P.S flashback in bold


He opened his eyes only to find himself on a hospital bed. He looked here and there to find if he could recognize anyone, but he could.


He closed his eyes, when the event of past played in front of him.


"Rey today is our last day in camp" Kriya said pouting sadly.


"Yes, baby I know" Rey said while setting behind Kriya, wrapping his hands on her waist from behind.


Kriya rested her all weight on Rey; Rey just smiled and kissed her ear lobe.


"I'll miss all the fun which we had over here all the moments with you and other camp mates" Kriya said turning around looking toward Rey.


"Baby I will also miss it, but it's said nah all good things have to come to an end, it's like that only" Rey said giving her a quick peck on her lips, "Okay, now let's go otherwise they will leave us here only" continued Rey.


Rey and Kriya went towards their camp. They had came on a trekking camp on insist on Kriya, as she loved trekking. Well this camp was really special to them as before coming to camp they were in relationship but as time passed in the camp they realized that they are made for each other and became one as they confessed it.


And today was their last day in camp, the last trek. They heard what instructor instructed them regarding the mountain and all the safety, they were attentive and listening every carefully.


Soon they were on their separate rope and doing rock climbing, enjoying their last climbing in the camp.


"Rey" Kriya said making Rey stop in track, "Let's make it interesting" Kriya continued.


"Interesting..??" Rey enquired, "As in..??"


"As in, let's race up till top, and who wins have to give a dare to the loser" Kriya said and resume her climbing.


"Interesting, very interesting, m in" Rey said as he also continued climbing.


"So here we go" Kriya said grinning.


They started their race; Kriya was ahead of Rey and in every passing minute used to tease Rey for been behind, and making Rey chuckle at her cute tactics.


"Rey" Kriya said little tensed up.


"Yes baby..??" Rey said not getting the sudden change in her voice, a minute before her voice seemed joyful and now tensed.


"Rey m sensing some danger" Kriya voice out her worry, "Rey my rope is losing up" Kriya said in horrified state.


"What..??" Rey exclaimed and before he could do anything or catch Kriya, he saw her falling down.


"Kriyaaa" Rey screamed and woke up with a jolt. He was sweating very badly and panting. His breathes were uneven. He was crying, the stream of salt water was not ready to stop. He was staring nothing in particular.


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So i knw i took little time to update but i was buzy in few works of mine and then ma lappy crashed out..

anyways m happy with the review of urs on 1 part thank you so much.

review plzz.!!

Abhilasha

Edited by -reine- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#32
this story is damn amazing bt the writer is very kanjoos...ye to new born drabble lgta hai...drabble ka bi baccha hai ye...
its scary...or should i say adventurous...kriya wanted to race...
evrytym i read she fell...it seems as if its happening in front of my eyes...
poor reyaansh...zombie kuch kar uske liye..i cant see him sad...
Edited by akankshaArsha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33
OMG kamo this is damn scary...
rey and uski ye haalat...
nooo baap re
the way you started fab!!
unki masti and unka fun!!! Unka pyaar awesome!!!
I loved it!!! Bahut zyada!!!
kri is soo adventurous and dono ka pyar mast!!
unka race mast!!
but then the falling ...
kamo that was scary... As kaise ye hogaya??
sudden se rope... And rey ka scream...
I loved it!! Eager to read!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34
res
unres
awesum update
i hope uski dream reality na bane...
Continue soon
Edited by Meghna_kriyansh - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#35
Finally i knw how kria fell down...this update ws really awsum,,,waiting fr d nxt update..update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36
oh u
so rude itna cute story chal raha tha ek dum se emotional end de diya pout
but
amazing updatee but chottu hai
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37
length mein itna kanjoosi...achi baat nehi hai...

btw acha hai...interesting..

update it soon abhi
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38
Omg it was feeling so realistic me toh shock hogai padhke kria falling ab jake pata chala ki 1st update ke piche ki kahani kya thi For some time i was shock n one que what was rey doing in hospital i mean how he lAnded there nice update
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39
abhi can i kill u
😡 😡
Seriously itna chotta update koi
deta h kya ha 😡
Apne readers pe daya karna
sikh samjhi 😭

Tension bala update
😭
Rey Hospital me
Kria Gir gayi 😭
Huh
nt fair
update soon

love
Sanchi-
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Posted: 11 years ago
#40
Nyc start abhi
Both r together forever
I sense someone cut her rope
Update next fast

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