Forever..?? ~ ||KriYaansh Drabble Series Chap 3 ~ pg 11 (19 nov 2014)

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akanksha

@sharif_lafungi

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

i hate u zombie..."sniff" u made me cry ...tune 1st update me hi kriya ko maar diya...aage story kiski likhegi kriya ke bhoot ki???
fir bi i loved it...loved it so much...its painful...specially rey's portrayal in this part..marne wale se zyada dard khone wale ko hota hai...
its terrific re...update soon...
PS : i sachi me hate u "sobbing nd sobbing"

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kriapatel

@kriapatel

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Supab concept

I was shock reading the update

Plz update soon

N pm me too

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Vrutanshi

@kreya204

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

OMG!!!
Wat was dat!!!!
Kriya dead!!! Rey blacked out!!!
Wats happening!!!
Plz continue soon!!!

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vaibhavi

@VAIBHAVIKR

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Nice but tragic update soon and do pm me

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anshika

@Kiarawinget16

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

awsm start luvd it beautifuly depictd

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Meghna

@meghzzzz

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

vao Abhi...
Super Awesum...
Sry for being late...

Edited by --megs_arsha-- - 11 years ago

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arsha_simran

@arsha_simran

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

haayeee kamo u noe how much i hate u!!!

this is awesome!!!

me loving it!!!

and meinne concept dia?? naahh it was u+me

accha ab coming to the story...

u already noe my POV...

it was amazing...

fulll emotional and sentimental...

pehle kri ka girna and den rey lifeless soul...

that's emotional...

uske chotey emotions...😭

and then the realisation...

rey...😭 i wish ye nahi hua hota...

and the last line ek shaaqs...

yaar dil ko chu lia!!!

loved it...!!!

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Purplevalley

@Ocean.eyes

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

now this is something interesting :)
looking forward to the story

thanx for the pm

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SALONI KAPADIA

@sally1196

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

OMG!!!! This was such a Heart Breaking Start :'( Kriya Died and Rey OMG u described it beautifully but painfully :* I loved it update soon and do PM ME :*