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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter - 22

I was awakened by a heavy thing yet warm contracted on my tummy. I squinted my eyes and lifted the duvet that barely covers my whole body and to my surprise, I saw an Arm. I looked right beside me to see who owns that warm arm and of course, who wouldn't be surprise that Rey owns that protective arm snaked on my tummy. I smiled as I looked at him sleeping. He looks like an angel when he's sleeping. My angel, My Bad Boy Angel. I giggled at my own thought. He looks so innocent when he's sleeping. I can still hear his slightly snores and his hair was dishevelled everywhere. His brows were fixed like a feather that you can see how he sleep so very well. He looked like he's having a very beautiful dreamily dream and I thought what would it be. Is he dreaming about me? I hope, he is dreaming about me. My eyes travelled down into his parted soft lips. I smiled. I can still remember what happened last night. I brought my fingers and lightly caress my lips. I could've felt those beautiful sensations that he drawn over me when he kissed me last night and those kisses turned out into a minute of passionate kissing or more like snogging. Honestly, I didn't expect that to myself to snog with him. I never ever had experience like that intimate passion before but I was thankful that Rey had done it with me which I freely accepted and loved it. We were almost getting there last night. We were almost there to do IT' last night if I didn't stop. What if I didn't stop him last night, would that night would lead something, me and Rey were both naked today when I woke up?
"Rey..." I said as I closing the gap between us but he still didn't budge. "Rey.." I said poking his arm.
Reeyyy.." I whispered loudly on his ear but he still didn't budge. Nice try Kriya but your boyfriend seems to have a very big appetite in his sleep. How should I wake him up? This guy couldn't wake a budge. Maybe, I should kick him out of the bed? Okay, not the very best idea. He won't like that idea and I'm so dead if he finds out that I did that from him. I don't want to receive another smack in the head.

"Rey.." I said it again but my hands were gripping his arm that that was rested on my tummy and started to wriggled his arm to wake him up... I continuously wriggle his arm but he wouldn't budge a bit. What the heck?! This guy can sleep when war had already started throwing bombs and everything explosives but this guy wouldn't budge. Did he sleep properly last night? But I remembered that we slept together at the same time. What time is it? I looked at my wall clock above my door and it's already 10 in the morning.
I tried to get up but I couldn't move a bit when his arm was tightly clasped and rested on my tummy. I tried to push his arm again but I failed. I sighed. There's no choice but to wait until he wakes up. I rested my head again at my pillow and looked at him sleeping heavenly. He looks so cute when he's sleeping and absolutely, so beautiful. My eyes suddenly had driven me down underneath to look at his luscious soft lips. I smiled again. I remember when his lips were on mines. I can feel the warmness and different mixtures that he had given me to create one delicious sensation had releases throughout my whole body. His lips make me paralyzed yet alive inside. I wanted to feel his warm lips again pressed on mines. Maybe I could just maybe, stole one kiss? He's sleeping so tightly and he's very hard to wake him up maybe one kiss, wouldn't budge him?..Just try.
Oh Gosh! I'm so naughty. I slowly lean my head from his forehead from his until my forehead were pressed in his. I slowly closed my eyes as my nose brushes his nose and there, my lips landed in his soft ones. Gosh! I wanted to dance my lips into his but I know I just couldn't, knowing that I only stole this moment to taste his lips once again.
Before my temptations starting to push me for furthermore, I slowly pulled away when he started to wriggled. Oh God! Did he caught me kissing him, didn't he? I started to get panic and pulled away when his warm hand scooped my neck so that I wouldn't get away from him and suddenly he sealed my mouth with his warm delicious lips. Crap! Is he already awake when I did something naughtiness when he's sleeping? Oh God! This is going to be embarrassing! Then he started to dance his mouth along with mine so I closed my eyes slowly as my lips conjoined with his. I smiled when he kisses my lips. Well, this kind of naughty thing might've as well leaded to something like this. I mentally slap myself thinking about that necessity. He licked my bottom lip asking for an entry which I concluded to give him. Our tongues were dancing in dominance might as well the butterflies in my tummy were dancing and my heart were pumping a lot of blood for circulation. After a minute of swallowing each other's kisses, he pulled away and smiled at me playfully.
"Good morning my naughty wife." He smiled at me as he caresses my brighten in red cheeks. Yeah, he had caught me kissing him. I smiled at him shyly knowing
that I was really embarrassed that I just got caught but at least we had shared some morning intimate kisses. I playfully rolled my eyes at him.
"Good morning to you too, Rey." I said as I peck his lips once again and got up from my bed when he suddenly spoke up. "Where are you going?"He asked me while I was making my way from the bathroom.
"Uhmm...Going to bathroom." I walked out from the bathroom and saw Rey wearing a blue shirt while fixing his hair using my brush. I sat up to my bed waiting for him to finish his business so that we could have our breakfast downstairs. And today is Sunday that means that our servant which we also called nanny, weren't here for today since she's off so maybe those crazy chickens were downstairs fighting whoever is going to cook for today.

Right after Rey finished his hair. We both make our way downstairs to have some breakfast and there we saw the crazy chickens cooking something delicious and keeps fighting about I don't know what. "Hey, Sharlyn. You should probably start slicing the strawberries." Nikki said as she placed different foods on a serving plate. "Okay." Sharlyn sighed as she started to slice the strawberry when Luccy ate what she sliced. "Stop eating the strawberries Luccy!." Sharlyn scolded Luccy. "Whatever! This is delicious and I'm hungry anyway!" She said while grabbing another one. "Wait your horses down Luccy. Nikki is almost done making the pancakes." Sharlyn said. "That's enough Luccy!"Nikki swatted Luccy's hand attempting to grab another one then she pouted. This girl and her appetite. "Good morning!" I chimed at them making their head snapped at us while Rey was standing behind me snaking his arms around my waist. "Good Morning!" They said in unison as they began silently continuing their businesses while Rey and I silently seated on the dining table. "Luccy! I told you not to!"Sharlyn angrily said while Luccy grabbed another one and threw the strawberry inside her mouth smiling in victory. "That's it!
No more strawberries for Luccy!" Nikki said and grabbed the bowl of sliced strawberries away from Luccy's naughty hands. Then she rolled her eyes at them both.
"Whatever! I'm just going to have to make a share with Kriya." She said and pulled out her tongue. Is this always happening every morning?" Rey whispered at my ear. I nodded at him seemed embarrassed. They always do those things every morning. They continuously won't stop arguing over such little things that even doesn't have to with each of them. I don't know why they are always like that but it's quite amusing and sometimes I'd be included in those fights.
"Hey wifey." Rey snapped out of my trance.
"Yes?'" I asked him.
"I will cook your breakfast every day." He looked at me sweetly and lovingly across his eyes. "..When we get married." I smiled at him. I don't know how exactly I should react about this. Should I be happy? Yes! I'm happy in fact! Should I jump into excitement? I would jump a cliff into excitement or should I shout to the whole world how happy to have a guy like him? Yes! I'd love that! And I would proclaim to everybody that he's the best thing that's ever happened to me. I could feel the burning flames burning my cheeks as I look at him with pure love and joy. "I would like that." I told him sweetly as he just grabbed my hand and clasped it together. "Breakfast is ready!" Nikki chimed as she looked at us happily. Well, If he's going to cook my breakfast in the morning I might as well serve him everything that he needs. I grabbed a plate with a fork and knife and placed it in front of him. I grabbed a glass and poured him with some fresh orange juice while I was doing this service thing his eyes were still focused on mine. Never leaving a single bit of movements. I smiled at him. "Well, If you're going to cook for me every day, I'd love to serve you every day." I smiled at him widely. He crooked a smile at me while his cheeks turned into pink. Wow someone's blushing. I mentally giggled. He looked so cute when he blushes. "After your 20th birthday, Let's get married." He whispered at me... After we
both ate our delicious breakfast, I just don't know what happened to those crazy chickens. They all became so quiet and so behave. Maybe they're just in the mood to be off knowing that Rey's had eaten with us. It would be such a shame if they fought and throwing foods at each other when Rey's around. After those silent Breakfast, Rey concluded that he needed to go making me just a bit upset knowing that he's going to leave me here for a moment due to the fact that Rohan and him has something need to be done. I hope that something need to be done isn't about fighting. Despite of hoping such things, I heard him awhile ago when Rohan called him and it seemed like they're going to have something important discussions. Those feelings were so indescribable to identify but one thing for sure, it's a problem for him, for them and for me.
"Are you going to have another fight?"I asked him seriously. We were both standing outside my house.
"Yep." He nodded as he throws his bag inside his car and slammed his car shut. "Why? Who?" I asked him seemed annoyed. Arghh! I hate it when they're going to have a fight. I don't want him to get beaten up. I know Rey can bring a hell up into a fight but still, you might not know what might have happen.
"With another Gang."He honestly said.
"Why you guys loves to fight?! You're just hurting yourselves!" I said as I threw my both arms interlaced on my chest.
"Don't worry, we are used it." He said bluntly.
"Rey! I'm serious! Just stay here and just...just stay." I said persuading him.
"I'd love to wifey but I'm sorry. I can't." He heaved a frustrated sigh. Is this what he always wants a fight? I frowned at him. Is that fight even matters to him than me? He's just going to hurt himself. And I couldn't avoid to picture him beaten up and had a lot of bruises, busted lips or cuts in his beautiful face. I just couldn't avoid to worry and to over think that much when I know that fight isn't going to led something good for him and so as his gang mates. Even though I didn't have the time to know them all but Rey seem to care for them with all his heart. I don't want to visit him again beaten up in a hospital or in jail. I just can't.
"Is your gang really that matters for you?" I asked him.
"I don't see them as my gang member, Kriya. They're my brothers and so as Family for me." He told me seriously.
"Are they that much important...than me?" I asked out-of-nowhere. Shit! I mentally punched my face! Why did I just do that?! Arghh! I sounded so selfish in that matter. I'm so pathetic! How could I just do that to him?! I know, I also hated that question testing your skill to choose someone who most matters for you and even me, I couldn't answer that but I just asked that from Rey! I'm such a terrible girlfriend! I looked at him and his eyes started to change into sadness yet confused. Great! Just Great, Kriya! I sarcastically told myself. I studied his eyes as his body started to shake controlling his temper to be mad at me. His eyes were dull with pure of unidentified emotions that I couldn't read. I don't know what he is thinking by now. He heaved a sigh.
"You're important to me, Kriya. More than my life." He said as he looked down upset about what I just asked him.I felt so guilty. I've never been so guilty when I just did that. I'm just worried sickly about him getting hurt. I don't want to see him hurt and crushed and I couldn't avoid feeling this pang of pain inside my heart when his life depends on the edge of a blade. He's risking too much of his life for his gang and fights but I should understand that I'm not only his priority in his life. He also had his friends to prioritize to like they also prioritize him.
"Fine but I must go with you." I said bitterly.
"KRIYA!" He yelled at me warning me stay out of his business. I jumped surprisingly when he yelled at me. He never ever uses that tone for me. I know he's frustrated by me and for his fight and gang and I caused it, the half of it. but I was just caught off guard. He never dares to use that tone for me. This is just the first time that he yelled at me surprisingly. I don't want to be afraid when he used that tone to me but he pushes me to the limit be afraid of him. I shook my head down avoiding seeing his flustered face.
"Sorry." I whispered and turned away from him when he stopped me. I heard him sighed.
"Wifey, come here."He softly said as his warm hands immediately snaked around my waist while my back contracted with his hard warm chest.
"I'm sorry if I raised my voice at you. I-I don't want to cause any harm..o-or anyone to hurt you. And I don't want you..." He trailed off as if he's afraid about to what he's going to say.
"To what?"I said as rested my head on his broad shoulder.
"I don't want you to see the worse of me. The different me. I don't want you to be afraid of me or to scare you. I don't want you to look at me differently."He said as he tightly hugged me from behind.

Rohan's POV *WARNING! A LOT OF CURSING*

"Rohhh, where's Rey?" Nil asked fixing his gears. "I called him already. He'll be here after 10mins." I said assuring Nil shrugging my leather jacket. "Those m*therf*ckers! I'm going to rip their balls off for testing our pressure."vicky said seemed frustrated. I understand why he acted like that. Those bitches had the guts to block our way. "Let's just give them what they wanted." Harry angrily said fisting his fist. "This is just going to be easy as chicken. This fight better be good. I couldn't wait to beat the living shit out of their f**king messed up mind. I'm being rusty wanting a fight." vicky muttered. I sighed. It's been a long week since we haven't had our fights. This week has been fine yet rusty, like what vicky said. We all used to have a tournament of fighting here from there but it stopped now. We all have been resting for a lot time and we wanted to have a fight and now a fight is going to break loose and I can't wait to break my monster in me to punch someone's face near to death. We didn't expect to have a fight after a long while since Rey had called me in to prepare for a fight and all I know is that, this is something important for him why he wanted it a fight for some certain reasons. "I heard that the leader of our rival gang is here. Does Rey already know about it?" Nil asked. "He doesn't know yet." I said as kicked the pebble on the ground. There's no one here yet. The other gang party weren't here to be beaten up. We're all here at the abandoned factory waiting for Rey and the gang to be buried alive... This isn't going to be so good when Rey will know about the rival gang leader is here. I don't know how we should handle the next week if we encounter to see him again. We are all been preparing for him to come back and now he's here. We aren't sure when will be that encounter is going to happen. I'm ready to be beaten up by him because he knew something about my hidden job even the gang and Rey doesn't know about it. He wanted to get his finger lay at me to figure out what I was planning to do with the two couple. I just need to be extra careful for what I am been planning for so long between Rey and Kriya. Before everything will be ruin. "Wait, why are we fighting anyway?" Harry asked chomping his Twix bar. "Yeah, I just wanted a fight but why's that we're here?"vicky said. All I know is that Rey wanted them to return what they had stolen away from him and give it back to him. I was about to answer when we heard a honk coming our way and my mouth dropped. Damn! He got me first! I was about to buy that same car as his but he got it first. I jogged all the way from him and gave him a brotherly hug. "Hey! You're late." I said smirking at him.
"Someone's been in a fairytale."harry retorted.
"Shut up harry!"Rey chuckled.
"f**kshit! Where are those motherf**kers?! Especially that f**ker who stole my wifey's toy?!"He yelled fisting his fist. I shook my head. I was about to ask him about his grumpy mood when I already knew the answer. Kriya. I think I know why we're here and it's because of Kriya. I looked at the guys as they nodded understandably. Since Kriya came, the gang and I already been preparing and accepting the responsibility to protect her and Rey and all of us, each other's shoulders. Since she came, all of us have to protect her from the things that warm her especially to beat those guys making a move for her. Even though Rey didn't ask us to do that since we all know what he can do just to protect his girl, We all agreed and been protective over her. We owe Kriya Rey's happiness and the new Rey that she brought us. I don't know how exactly should I describe the changes but all of us notices that and we became aware that we like her for Rey and she's part of our family now even just for a little time that we had her around but we all know that she's a great girl for Rey. As if on cue, the gang that we are suppose to beat up eventually popped out with a dirty temptations burst out from them. Damn! They've got a lot of men to bring but how lousy as f**k. We're so much more than those pricks!
"Let's start the game." vicky muttered under his breath. He's eager to let loose his own hell.
"Is that what we're going to fight with? How easy!"harry smirked like it was nothing to him.
"A waste of time." Nil said. They all hopped out from their trashy vehicle and stood all the way from us with a pissed off look on their faces or more like pooping out something under their pants. They are about thirteen of them while we are just five but it's still a good game though we can bring those f**kers down. When the other's hopped out from their vehicle and saw us, they immediately backed off and gulped like a stupid helpless dog. It looks like they already knew who we are and our reputation in the whole city. I smirked at them.
"What the hell do you want?!" The leader said glaring at Rey who seemed stopping his anger for the mean time.
"You came here and you didn't even know why you are here?"I stated flat.
"f**k! I'm gonna' kill you in pieces for stealing that bear!"Rey muttered angrily and punching the leader squared on his now dislocated jaw.
Then all hell broke loose. The dirty hell game had begun. Nine people stood their asses off and fight with us while the remaining four remained. I still remember their
names. They fought with me and vicky when we went to the bar few days ago and they wanted a fight so we gave them the hell fight that they wanted. They wish has been granted and now their wishes are over. I punched the guy to death when another brunette dude grabbed my curls away from the bleeding guy. f**k! I hate it when a person touches my curls without any permission and especially with dirty hands grabbing my locks. I grabbed his fist out of my locks and twisted his hand as he yelled out of pain and I gave him a hard kick on his back making him land on his feet on the ground. He continuously groaned in pain as he wishes to me to let him go but I'm merciless when it comes to a gang fight like this. Then I gave him a horse kick from his back.
"That's what you get when you touch my curls." One more kick then he passed out. As I saw my mates punching and kicking the dickheads out of their lives and it seems like they didn't even have to be serious at all, they all just enjoyed beating them. harry endlessly laughing his mouths off playing with his toy kicking his gut and he enjoyed hearing him seeking help from his mates who were looking at them in fright. vicky was pushing the guy's back on the wall and kneed him in his man's dignity as he continued doing that he might as well joke around with the helpless guy, that's what makes vicky stronger when it comes to a fight. He can joke whenever he wanted to. Nil was the guy who's also like Rey but he wasn't a quiet he is more like a Dad when it comes to a fight, he beats and then leave and find another one to fight with. And finally, I saw Rey. Rey was punching a guy. He didn't even fight with the others. He only had chosen one person to be thrown to hell. I think, that's the guy who had taken away the toy of his wifey. And that guy is a member of the gang that we were fighting, The Snake. What a shame for A Gang's name. They didn't even fight like a snake more like a worm, they just wriggle. I saw a guy who was holding a bat and ready to launch that bat into vicky' head but pushed him away and straddles him at the ground. I don't want anyone who'll ever touch one of my mates without any permission behind their backs. I threw the bat away as he looked pale when he
knows he had nothing but his own hand work to fight with me.
"That's not a man to man fight, c**t. It's a gay thing to fight in that way." I smirked throwing another knuckle punch.
"I...I'm..s- sorry...l-...let's...j-just talk about this.." He pleaded at me while his lips were busted. I smirked.
"Don't worry...This is just going to be fast and we'll talk just one more punch..."I sarcastically told him like a kid who doesn't want to eat a veggie then I landed my whole fist landed on his guts... "Then the end." I smirked and whipped the
blood from my knuckles that came from his lips into his white shirt. I looked at everyone as they continuously kicking their butts and guts off while the others got away. Scared cowards. I walked at Rey's new car and man! I envy his car right now! I leaned against it as if it was mines when my phone rings.. I pulled out my phone to see who it was and damn! It's my flavour of the week, Rachel. And now it's her third time to call me and I know already what she wanted.. I denied the call. I'm not into girls lately and I find them boring this past few weeks. Sometimes, I don't get girls. They don't understand what fling is to them or if it's a real relationship which I couldn't give it to them and they don't understand it if it's already over. I don't do second chances. Once I fling with them, then that's it. No more chances. It's like a candy, once you swallow the candy and you didn't like its taste, spit it out. No more second thoughts to give it another one to try. Sounds mean...
"f**k! Where's that cap?!"Rey said as he makes his way to me. I looked at him and he was holding something on his hand..A Fluffy Bear?! Is that what I think it is? The bear that his wifey wanted?! He could've just bought her another one. Well, it
doesn't even matter if I ask him or tell him that. What his wifey wants his wifey gets. "I...I...I l-lost it.." The guy stammered as his nose was broken. Ohh! Someone needs a
surgery. This is very unusual for Rey sometimes he barely even moves in a fight. He's just standing there watching us dealing with the other gangs. He'll watch us fight and he only moves when the fight is now uncontrollable under our powers and that's when he'll break it loose. It barely happens. But we all became aware that we are struggling to fight back when we exactly knows we're dealing with the Dark Warriors. That's our rival gang and we couldn't defeat a shit out of them and now, the leader is back.. We must have to prepare our back up. Every gang thought and specifically, The Dark Warriors thought that we're only five but we are more than a five but we kept it hidden among us. No one knows them who they are. We are numerous. They live here in London but we acted like strangers. Just one call, they'll be here. We all hired and adopted them and took good care of them like our brothers too. We wanted to have a lot of back up because we're facing another Gang war and we don't know when, where it's going to happen. It might happen today, tomorrow or any time. A Gang War is way different from a fight that we usually have like we have right now. A Gang war is where we fight in a big underground battle, called the Battlefield. It happens when the Father of all Gang and all the mafia fixed two different rival gangs are going to fight in the middle of the dirty ground. No guns, no swords, no knives or any material things that could kill. Only a fist to fist, kick to kick and most of all a fight to fight to takes a real man to fight in his own ability and power and who'll be the man last standing. We don't have any idea who's the father or somewhat they call him, The Preacher. It all became as history and hard to identify who it was. All of us might die or any one of us might die and we already accepted that. We already accepted that our lives depend on the edge of the blade. That's why I don't have
time to do love because I don't want to leave them and watching me under my grave crying for me. We accepted the challenge to settle our lives to defeat those undefeated Dark Warriors.
"Damn it you bitch!" He said as he kicked the guy who passed out.
"Is that what you've wanted?" I asked him lifting my brow at him.
"Yeah. Do you have a cap?"He asked me.
"No. I only have a beanie." I said chuckling. "Shit! She wanted that cap." He said pissed as he looked at the fluffy bear.
"Here." I said as I pulled out a cigarette. He looked surprise as I lend him a cigarette but instead of taking it. He just looked at it like he wanted to take it but something stopping him to then he looked away from the cigarette then he cussed.
"I can't. I promised her."He said looking down. I smiled down. I think, this is the better to be than his old self again. I think that HER' was Kriya. She had done it again. She changed him again. Usually Rey smokes every minute when he's stressed especially when he's thinking about his past. His past the he couldn't seem to
move on. We tried to stop him but it makes him more eager to smoke. I mean all of us don't smoke and don't ask why I've got this because he usually smokes after a fight and I'm used to it to hand him but now, he avoided it and it was like a miracle for us that he did.We all cared for his health and we don't want him to be doomed by his untamed cigarette obsessions and now he clearly stopped that obsession. Thanks to Kriya and I hope she'll continuously help Rey... I threw the cigarettes and the whole pack of it away from us and patted Rey's shoulder then he looked at me smiling knowing that he's proud that he already had gotten away from his rotten obsession.
"We didn't even release a sweat." harry said chuckling.
"They're making me hungry."vicky said as his stomach grumbles. Then Nil laughed. "I think vicky and harryl diverted different instincts."
"Hey! That was my line vicky!" harry pouted. "And same as yours." vicky winked
making Rey chuckled. Then we all laughed when harry pouted then interlaced his both arms on his chest like a kid glaring at us. This is the different side of our gang, we can be serious as hell. We can fight like merciless and heartless when we know it isn't right and just. We can be immature sometimes especially vicky and harry and I'm kind of jealous when they can act like immature despite how old their ages were different from me since I'm the youngest and vicky is the oldest followed by Nil then harry is just the same age as Rey but even though the fact that I was the youngest, I can say that I'm mature but of course, Nil is way more mature than me. "C'mon, let's get out of here before a patroller sees us here."Nil said. "Okay, let's go." We all nodded and hopped on right when we saw Rey's sweet ride. Damn! I should probably buy another car.
"Sweet.."vicky said as his eyes landed on Rey's new car.
"Tell me about it." I smirked. I hopped on inside my car while the three uses my range rover since they aren't mood to drive but vicky loves to drive and I'm scared as shit if he might destroy my baby or more like create any disaster to my baby *range rover car* Well this car that I brought here was my silver Lexus 430. I started the engine when someone called me. I pulled out my phone and I saw Rey's name.
"Hey, why did you ring me?" I asked.
"You guys go ahead to your place. I'm gonna head back to wifey's place and give her bear for her." he said on the line.
"I'll go with you." "okay." He said. I texted the others to meet us at my flat and I
started to drive where Rey's going to and that's where Kriya's house was.


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Edited by jyoti_arsha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#92
one more...u r on roll jyots...
cant believe rey fought jst for teddy which kriya wanted...
damn true...what his wifey wants..his wifey gets...he literally keeps her on his lashes...
their brkfast planning was so lovey dovey...
what is rohan planning for kriyaansh???
m excited to know...
LOVED LOVED LOVED the update
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superb dear
loved it...
rey is really a posessive hubby
naughy kriya...loved it...
plzz rey ka pov bhi dena...
totally amazing...
maine itna lengthy updates kabhi nahi dekha.
loved it...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#94
Gr8 update honey! Liked their breakfast talk.
Abt their future discussed & the way Rey ask for
Marriage after her 20th birthday was cute.
He pretend to sleep when she was waking him up,
And later naughty kriya. She was caught haha!
And the Rohan point of view was nice, he seems
Mature & responsible. Liked the Harry & Vicky
Vicky is always same in any FF funny and food lover.
Liked the nil who is mature & understanding.
Their concern for kriya & protective was thing I liked abt them, I really hope they are not irritate abt that.
I really liked the fight sequence, and it's funny Rey fought for
That fluffy toy. And abt that scary underworld
Fight encounter. I really has feeling like that leader must be
Shivam. And the sponcer may be JAY. Just imagining.
Whats with this Rohan secreat, is he planning something against kriyaansh. Plz revel the Rohan secret soon, hope that doesn't affect kriyaansh relation & Rey & Rohan friendship.He didn't break promise of smoking that's just nice.
Rey was holding toy and asking for the cap is funny.
And he prove that what kriya wants she get.
He really pamper her, but sometime become really
Moody & scary. Liked the whole update.
Plz I also have a request abt Rey POV.
And thanks for the PM honey was gr8.
I even read & review on my messy scaduel.
U connect reader with ur writing & long & fast
Update is topping on cake.
Keep writing & do send me PM I will review when I got time.
Edited by Usha29 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#95
hey... even im 1D fan...

this is zyans fiction write.. on whattpad...

kriyansh version.. great..!!
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OMGGG
@USHA thnksss for long comment sry veryyy long comment... i really like this.. thnks dear.. i really appreciate this :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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@arsha_rahi same here dear.. even i'm a directioner ;)
but i'm a zaynie's fan more ^__^
thnks for support.. n i already mentioned dat.. dat dis story is not mine only converting dis.. with few changes :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: jyoti_arsha

OMGGG
@USHA thnksss for long comment sry veryyy long comment... i really like this.. thnks dear.. i really appreciate this :)


U welcome honey! U update really fast & really
Long one. Even give bonus update. U deserve those comment.
I couldn't even actually write good essay. 😉 so I know hw much
Effort it takes to write or edite those long updates.
Anyway I was really surprise by ur 4 updates on 1 day.
So, thought to pay off with long comment. 😉
Will be waiting for next update tomorrow & I hope u
Could give 2 update. 😆 and plz can we get Rey POV.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Usha29


U welcome honey! U update really fast & really
Long one. Even give bonus update. U deserve those comment.
I couldn't even actually write good essay. 😉 so I know hw much
Effort it takes to write or edite those long updates.
Anyway I was really surprise by ur 4 updates on 1 day.
So, thought to pay off with long comment. 😉
Will be waiting for next update tomorrow & I hope u
Could give 2 update. 😆 and plz can we get Rey POV.



Awww...iiieee dats sooo sweet of you. :-)
i ll defntly do dat.. thnks dear.. u dont know u really made my night :-)
thnks once again :-D
n rey p.o.v muskil cuz ye kriya ka flashback h.. but yaa.. i ll try ;)
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jyoti_arsha



Awww...iiieee dats sooo sweet of you. :-)
i ll defntly do dat.. thnks dear.. u dont know u really made my night :-)
thnks once again :-D
n rey p.o.v muskil cuz ye kriya ka flashback h.. but yaa.. i ll try ;)


That would be gr8. But don't force Rey's POV if it's not actually make sence.
Just to get his feeling clear picturize think POV
Will be gr8. I just thought so...

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