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Posted: 10 years ago
Sharon raiprakash... Really well written character. Just caught up with last 3 updates and loved the development in story.
PS: please update friendzoned too.. :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
You are one hell of amazing writer _/\_ with deep understanding about Swayam-Sharon characters ^_^
Amazing update I love to read this FF
Please update soon 😭
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Posted: 10 years ago
I just love this FF :)) Thank you so much. Each and every update is so heart touching. Thanks a lot. Looking forward for more interesting updates :D pls continue soon :)
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Posted: 10 years ago

Chapter 11

"What?" Both of them yelled making Rey jump.

"Er..." Rey took a few steps back. "That's right guys, Vicky has injured his leg. He will not be able to practice for the next month, so we have decided that he will be part of the group parts but for the couple's portion, you two will have to do it together."

"He is lying." Sharon shouted. Simultaneously Swayam said, "Is he okay now?"

Sharon turned to Swayam and said, "Don't you see it. He does not want to dance with me that's why he is making an excuse."

Swayam replied, "That should make you wonder why... And anyway, Sharon, not everyone's as complicated as you are." Sharon huffed and looked away. "Yeah, you would know more, right," Sharon taunted, "After all, you have three years extra experience of knowing him which clearly I have forgotten."

"Unfortunately, you did not forget being arrogant and haughty, which is really sad." Swayam retorted.

"SO..." Rey said loudly making them turn their head and making himself the receiver of their glares, "seems you both are getting along fine, so I'll leave both of you to rehearse. The hall's yours for the next three hours." With that he ran away.

Sharon and Swayam exchanged glances standing awkwardly away from each other.

Finally Sharon broke the silence, "So let's start. Let's just get this done with."

Swayam staring at her for some time nodded once before walking toward the stereo and played the song they were to rehearse.

He moved close to her, taking her one hand and placing it on his shoulder, the other in his hand and his hand on her waist. He pulled her closer. Sharon squirmed a little in his grasp but did not move away. Swayam started the dance taking her in his stride.

They performed the routine flawlessly, without a single problem. Suddenly midway Sharon felt her chest closing up. It seemed as though her windpipe was choking. Sharon started coughing in a desperate attempt to get some air into her chest. Why was this happening so often these days? She was supposed to have been cured, right.

"Sharon," she heard Swayam's voice, alarm rising in every word. "Sharon, are you okay?"

Sharon pushed him away and rushed to her bag lying in the corner of the hall. She rummaged in her bag for the inhaler in a hurry.

"Sharon, here take this." Swayam kneeled beside her holding the inhaler.

But Sharon pushed him again. She turned her bag upside down, and finally finding her inhaler, put it in her mouth inhaler. As usual, her chest cleared up.

Sharon breathed easy. Swayam forced her to stand up and holding her shoulders, vigorously shook them. "Sharon what's wrong with you," he shouted, his face contorted in anger. "You would die but not take my help? Is that so?"

Sharon shoved his hands away. "I have told you before and I'm telling you again. I don't want your help."

She turned away. Swayam holding her by her elbow whirled her around and pushed her on the wall. "What do I have to do to make you understand? Sharon, why don't you get the simple fact that I love you."

Sharon pushed him with as much force as she could muster. "Why for god's sake?" She screamed. "Why do you love me when I have given you nothing but pain? When I have done nothing but insult you? I don't want your love; it makes me feel disgusted by myself. It's so easy for you to roam around me, caring for me. I don't want this. I don't want your love. Why are you doing this to me?"

"True," Swayam replied, his voice soft, all anger evaporated from his face. "There have been times when you have given me nothing but misery. There have been times when I have not just been hurt but broken by your actions. And you think it has been easy for me? You have no idea how many times I have tried to get over you. How many times I have told myself that it's better to not love you at all. I have felt disgusted that I still cared for you when you hated me. But you know what, I have never been able to fall out of love with you."

Unknown to Sharon, she stopped resisting, tears streaming down her face.

"You have made me feel hopeless, sometimes even spineless. But whenever I decided to move on, you came back into my life and pulled me back. You have given me misery, Sharon. But you have also given me everything I have ever wanted. I have been the happiest when I have been with you. When I held you in my arms," Swayam moved closer to her, cupping Sharon's face in his palms, "When I felt your love with me."

"Sharon, I know you don't remember me. I know it's too much for you to take but I am there with you. And I will never let you go."

"Swayam please." Sharon screamed, yanking his hands away. She strode farther trying to put as much space between them as was possible. "Why don't you get it? I am not the same Sharon who was madly in love with you. Everything that I have felt when I was with you, everything we did together, I don't remember anything. I try, but I don't, I just don't. It's frustrating enough. Please Swayam, please just spare me for the time being."

Swayam didn't say anything for a long time before saying, "If that is what you wish, so be it. I will not come anywhere close to you as long as you don't want me to."

Swayam walked out of the hall. Sharon kept looking at the door for a long time before sinking to her knees on the ground. Her head was spinning. She tried to surface but the darkness was engulfing her. It felt like a lifetime when her head hit the ground. Slowly, as she faded into the darkness, a voice filled her head, saying,


"From now on, our chapter, though incomplete, is over. The book is shut now. And I will not open this book unless you want me to."

The book is shut now. It will never open again.

Like and comment because they make my day. In a hurry, gotta go. Bye!!

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Posted: 10 years ago
Reserved.

^Unreserve^

The update was really worth a read.

I liked the setting in the rehearsal hall. . . I.liked how you have used the most ingredient of their lives to start talking about each other again!SwaRon dancing and finay talking about what they feel was lovely!
Swayam being Swayam will agree to her every wish and Sharon though has asked for this we all know what she really wants!

I love how you keep your every part intact and crisp. . .Its just perfect every time :)
Edited by ..MiStLeToE.. - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Why Sharon is so confused in every story???
Poor Swayam...Kaash wo accident nai hota Sharon ka...
I want to cry...
Swayam ko aise dekh k mujhe bahot rona aata h...
Upar se kya pata Shantanu kb onscreen pe wapas aaega...
Nd Gadhha doctor sb kya kr rha h...kuch kre na sharon ka memory wapas lane k liye...
Pata h ye FF h nd av tym lgega Sharon ko memory regain krne mein...
Fr v make it fast yaar...Swayam ko or pain mein nai dekh skte...
At least Sharon normal to reh hi skti h Swayam k saath...Bt fr se uska ego bich mein aa jata h...Iss ego ki to aiso ki taisi...
😭 😭
Waitng fr next update...
Jldi jldi update krna plsss...
Nd thanx alot fr pm...
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Posted: 10 years ago
How you write so well ?? :o
As if you only created the two characters
Simply love this FF which reminds me of PM's SwaRon
Sharon is damn confused ofc hogi bhi :( but in all this she is hurting Swayam abf her self too

Update soon please
Can't wait to read next 😊
Edited by sanchiswaron - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Only one thing i have to say. You have carved the characters of Swayam and Sharon very beautifully.
Theu are beautiful.

but this confused Sharon is becoming a little irritating now. The continously pushing away of Swayam. Hurting Swayam. It hurts me.
Please do resolve this story.

Well done. Such a beautiful Chapter. Full of emotions.
Thanks for the PM.
Mansi98 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
He loves her
Bt she says she dont
She doesnt need him nor his help
Hope dis chapter is nt over yet
Hope dey come close soon
M eagerly waiting fr d next update
Want next update super fast
Update soon
N thanx fr d PM
Love
Mansi
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Posted: 10 years ago
My swayam
Feeling sad nd bad nd what not..

Why can't sharon behave normally with him..

Thanks 4 d pm

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